No Promises...Shiv and Sati

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Posted: 13 years ago
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The chill air of Kailash drummed through his ears everything was the same deep forest nestled in the laps of the himalayas with prevalent snow throughout all seasons. He fixed his glance at his meditation seat it used to be his refuge from the worldly attachements and for some time from a doe eyed princess who had usurped the throne of his divine heart. The haunting howls of the wind made him realise that she would no more captivate his heart with her mesmerising smile, her enchanting smell, cherry blossoms and magnolia would never cease to blossom in planet Earth but the blend of the two fragrances would never enthrall even his godly senses for it only emanated from her frail body and her body...he shut his eyes unable to change reality for the ultimate truth was that her body was consumed by fire. He was Mahadev he could destroy the entire galaxy single handedly but could never run his hand through her raven tresses of hair again. His eyes became blurry and the wind blew stronger with it his body grew numb until something soft tickled his feet it was a host of jasmine pink and white the same ones that adorned her long tresses from the moment he set his eyes on her in Prajapati's bhawan. Every aspect of nature taunted him he was ready to crush one jasmine in his big palms when a soft hand entanged its delicate fingers through his large ones manipulating his palms in such a manner that the frail flower remained uncrushed. He smirked typical of her utterly graceful come what may.
"you promised you'll come soon" he muttered without looking.Two delicate arms made an attempt to enclose his large back stopping time. A soft feminine voice that he knew more than his whispered.."i will but till then no promises".

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Posted: 13 years ago
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"KATTI"
hOPE u noe d meaning...
U made me cry again...
It is so beatifully written...
Amazing...
Plz keep writing...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ahhh..I am in KAILASH ..my eyes are full of tears😭..let me get back later till then..You need a worlds biggest tightest hug..BRILIANT.👏🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank u so much my dear friends for liking it and m so sorry that i made u all cry but i know we have been going through a lot of pain lately with the inevitable tragedy of Mata Sati, then this problems being created by the cv's regarding the new face for Mata Parvati and worst of all many of our friends going on about how Sati and Parvati had different personalities and at times doubting Mouni's acting skills...all this completely devastated me so i thought of spreading positivity through pain...love u dear friends...and i will be writing a lot from now on just be by my side...Har Har Mahadev
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww... no words to express yaar.. its superb, beautiful, awesome...👏
u made me happy.. really loved it...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: samana17

Wow! Grt post! Aah..u brought tears in my eyes. Hate u for that and love u for making this post. I have no words. Each an every word u have written, makes me relive the moments between shivsati. Thank u so much for sharing!

Thanx sis by the way can i call u sister (u kno we share the same liking delena and shiv-sati) and if so we really need to explain to some people that if Nina Dobrev can be both katherine pierce and elena gilbert why can't our Mouni be both Sati and Parvati? think about it dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolfizzy

"KATTI"

hOPE u noe d meaning...
U made me cry again...
It is so beatifully written...
Amazing...
Plz keep writing...

Thank u dear n m so sorry i made u cry i will write a happy one next time its a promise just for you...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: TOTAL-ROMANTIC

Ahhh..I am in KAILASH ..my eyes are full of tears😭..let me get back later till then..You need a worlds biggest tightest hug..BRILIANT.👏🤗

This post was dedicated to you my dear friend i know how hurt we all were after the news of audition for Parvati's role we need to keep faith and pray that Mohit Mouni are back to set the screen on fire in no time...thanx a million for ur kind words...bear hug to you too for such words of encouragement.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sukhi...

Aww... no words to express yaar.. its superb, beautiful, awesome...👏

u made me happy.. really loved it...😃

thank u dear m glad i made u happy...lots of love dear friend

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shruti.nil

loved it...super awesum!

thank u dear...

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