Deveera OS : MEERA'S CASE

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Hello Everyone. My name is Najaan. This is an OS on the new show Dev Anand Burman on colorstv. Please do read if interested.



DevEera OS : MEERA'S CASE.




Main Detective Dev Anand Burman... naam toh zaroor suna hoga. Aur haan ye hai Meera. Sirf Meera. (Dev turned to facean irritated Meera)

Watchman : aho sirji. waise yahan kaise ana hua.

Meera : woh actually mein-

Dev : iske "mein" ka matlab ye nahi (eyeing her)... balki mein wala mein... mera ek naya case hai.

Meera : haan but wo mere client ke baremein hai.

Dev : tumhara ye "mere client" ka murder hua hai aur agar tum nahi chahti ke iske liye police tumhein pakre toh tum chup raho aur mujhe mera kaam karne do.

Meera and Dev stared at each other for some time then Dev went inside to interogate the neighbour of the late Mrs Subleshwar. And Meera followed.

Dev : toh aapke hisaab se Mrs Subleshwar ka unke Beta Veer se acchi relation nahi thi... aur ye baat apko unho khud bataiyi. (Dev raised his eyebrow at Meera checking if the womans story was correct, Meera nodded)

Neighbour Mrs Chatterji : nahi unho ne mujhse ye nahi bola par ye toh samajh ne wali baat hai.

Dev : aur ye apne kaise socha. Matlab shayad Mrs Subleshwar ki aatma ne kaha hoga aapse ya something.

Mrs Chatterji : ye aap kya keh rahe-

Meera : unka matlab tha AAPKO(stretching) kaise pata ke unke (stretching) BEECH mein problems thi. (She smiled widely at Dev and then at the Neighbour)

She wondered why she smiled stupidly. ofcourse she knew that this Dev was going towards the part where he expoeesher as the "Dongi". Dev gave her an evil look and smiled.

Meera (muttering) : ye mujhe chain se jeene kyun nahi deta.

Dev : kuch kaha tumne?

Meera : ji nahi. Kuch suna aapne?

Dev (stylishly) : jab tumne kuch kaha nahi toh phir main sunuga kaise hmm.

Dev again marched out leaving her behind, angry and irritated she followed. she cursed the day she had to ask him to help her this case.


Flashback

Meera : please Mr Dev. sirf aap hi meri madad kar sakte hai.

Dev: mein mujhrimo ki madad nahi karta.

Meera: but maine unka khoon nahi kiya.

Zora Appa: haan Dev, ye bacchi kaha kisi ka khoon karegi. dekho toh kitni masoom hai ye.

Meera made an innocent face at Dev.

Dev: masoom... (he shrugged)... are apni isi masoomiyat se ye logo ko doka deti hai Zora Appa. Iski shakal pe mat chahiye. Us... kya naam hai uske...jo bhi hai ko pata chal gaya hoga ke ye "dongi baba" hai toh isne uske maar diya hoga. dekha case solved.

Meera: nahi Appa aisa nahi hai. Aur tum accha socho agar aisa hota toh meine tumhe kyun zinda chor diya... tumhe toh sabse pehle maarna chahiye tha mujhe. haina?

Dev (jumping off the table and coming near to Meera) : main iss liye bach gaya kyun ki mein Dev Anand Burman hoon... tum mujhe marne ka chance nahi leti kyunki tumhe pata hai ke marne ke baad bhi mein tumhara picha nahi chodta Ha ha.

Meera: kya tum aisa hi karte?

Dev: main aisa hi karoonga.

Meera: sach

Dev: bilkul.

Meera and Dev had an eyelock for 7 sec and then they both started looking elsewhere.


Flashback Ends.


Dev : tum biche paito.

Meera : theekh hai Driver... ek minute.

Meera got off to sit at the back but as she opened the back door Dev took off while she continued shouting.

Meera (screaming): Dev Anand Burman main tumhe choroongi nahi.



At home

Dev drank his famous chai while sitting on a chair as an angry Meera approached.

Meera : tum mera intezaar nahi kar sakte the kya. Tumhi ne toh kaha tha ke biche paito.

Dev : piche baitne ko bola tha... (he turned to her)... mujhe driver bolne ko nahi.

Meera : haan haan woh sab theek hai par ye batao kuch pata chala case ke bareimein.

Dev : woh main tumhe nahi bataunga

Meera : par ye mera case hai

Dev : exactly, aur agar maine tumhe bata diya aur tumne proofs ke sath cher kaani ki toh?

Meera : par mein aisa kyun karoongi. Zora Appa aap hi samjhayi inne.

Zora Appa : mmuhmm usse chor tu aur yaha aa, ye dekh payal. maine tumhare liye lai hai. (she opened the Payal as it sounded softly " chan chan")

Meera : wow ye aap mere liye lai hai.

Dev : nahi, mere liye lai hai akhir mujhe accha jo lagta hai ye awaaz karne wali 24/7 irritating 'siren' sunna. haina Appa?

Zora Appa : chup kar badmaash aur sunn isske chanak ko... hai naa sukoon dayak (she shook it) "chan chan chan"

Dev : band kariye ye warne mein ise utah kar bahar phek doonga.

Meera quickly wore the payal on her legs and walked show offingly while her payal sounded "chan chan". Dev just stared disapprovingly.


NEXT DAY

Dev was in the balcony, thinking and aligning the clues.

Dev : Mrs Subleshwar ek non famous housewife jinke patti ka affair chal raha tha. toh kya patti ne? nahi kyunke patti toh uss waqt apni mistress ke sath tha uske room mein toh phir kaun. aisa kya hai jo mujhe samjh mein nahi araha. kya.

He closed his eyes and starting recollecting what all had happened suddenly he had a sound and he looked down from the balcony. Meera was walking out, and her irritating payal continuing to "chan chan".

Dev : kahan jaa rahi ho tum itna subhe subhe. koi naya client hai kya jisse ullu bana rahi ho.

Meera : nahi balke apne kaam ki fees collect karne jaa rahi hoon. koi problem.

Dev : kaunsa aur kiska kaam?

Meera : Mr Detective aap apne ye detectivepan kahi aur chalaiye filhaal mujhe deri ho rahi hai. aur haan Zora Appa se kehna mein gyara(11) baje tak aajaongi, bas yahi ja rahi hoon Mrs Subleshkar ke bete ke ghar. Unki Bahu ne bulaya hai.

And she marched off as Dev gave her a are-you-kidding-me wala look.


HALF AN HOUR LATER


DEV : hello..

Navrekar : hello mein inspector Navrekar bol raha hoon.

Dev : haan toh bol kisne roka hai.

Navrekar : Dev? tere paas Meeraji ka phone kaise?

Dev : ye tum apne Meeraji se puchlena.

Navrekar : Dev Meera ki jaan ko khatra hai.

Dev : pata hai... uss Subleshwar ke bete aur bahu ne hi usko maara hai haina. Aur ab woh Meera ki jaan ke biche pade hai kyunke unhe lagta hai ke Meera ke paas unke bank ke locker ki jaabi haina.

Navrekar : haan par ye sab tumhe kaise pata.

Dev : kyunke mere paas dimaag hai aur mein soch sakta hoon.

Navrekar : Dev tumhe jald se Meera ko rokna hoga ghar ke andar jane se.

Dev : nahi rok sakta kyunke woh andar jaa chuki hai.

Navrekar : ye tumhe kaise pata?

Dev : kyunke mein uss ghar ke bahar khada hoon. Andar shayad do se zyada log hai toh backup ki zaroorat bhi padh sakhti hai. kuch armed bhi hai.

Navrekar and his team arrived and they caught the armed mans but Meera and Veer were nowhere to be found.

Dev : Navrekar, Meera isi ghar mein kahi hai.

Navrekar : everyone spread out, humme Meeraji ko har keemat mein dhoondna hoga.

MEANWHILE

Meera was held captive by Veer who had closed her mouth with his hand and her hands were tied. She heard Dev callingher name from outside the hidden door but she couldntshout.

Dev also felt something near the closet but he did t see any door there so he turned to leave.
Meera felt a tear slide down her cheek. She shouted but no voice was heard, he had caught her tightly. She pushed but to no avail but then she heard her payals sound and she started stomping her leg.

Dev stopped in his track as he heard "chan chan" he remembers whom it belonged to. He heard it coming from behind the closet and he pushed the closet and kicked the door open. The door was behind the closet thus was not visible at first.

Dev : ladki ko jane de toh shayad tohra kam maarunga.

Veer pushed Meera towards Dev and ran out the window but couldnt jump because Navrekar had shot him in the leg. Meera was escorted out by Dev and Veer by the other officers.

Meera : thank you.

Dev : thank mujhe nahi balke apne inn payal ka karo jinki awaaz mujhe suna gayi. warna aaj toh tumse finally picha chut jata mera.

Dev smiled and Meera burst out laughing. Akhir iss irritating payal ki chanak ne Detective Dev Anand Burman ki iss case mein madad toh ki hai.



I would encourage if you guys could like and comment on the story above and since the couple name has not yet been decided hence i just used this one for now... hope ididnt offend anyone.

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Edited by ArjunfanNAJAAN - 7 years ago

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crystalmoon thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Ohhh
Dev - Meera and are becoming my fav couple
and look We have our 1st fanfiction on them ❤️

I just loved how the Payal came to her rescue 👍🏼
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Posted: 7 years ago
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OMGGG! I love it so much!
Their dialogues were so funny and amazing!
Totally gave the feel of a write-up of an episode.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oh wow what a coincident ... today while ago I was reading Arakshi story on Arjun forum and there I saw your reply on that story and when I came here on this forum and I saw your story and I was like wah kya baat hai ...

And this is my first story of Dev and Meera... and you wrote it beautifully.. liked it very much ... thanks dear ... keep it up
Edited by nicky13 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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it was awesome,just loved it 😳
do write more 😳
ArjunfanNAJAAN thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: crystalmoon

Ohhh

Dev - Meera and are becoming my fav couple
and look We have our 1st fanfiction on them ❤️

I just loved how the Payal came to her rescue 👍🏼



yeah thats true. Kafi sweet couple hai.😳
oh thanks.😊

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: shoppingfreak1

OMGGG! I love it so much!

Their dialogues were so funny and amazing!
Totally gave the feel of a write-up of an episode.



Thanks for liking it.😊

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: nicky13

Oh wow what a coincident ... today while ago I was reading Arakshi story on Arjun forum and there I saw your reply on that story and when I came here on this forum and I saw your story and I was like wah kya baat hai ...

And this is my first story of Dev and Meera... and you wrote it beautifully.. liked it very much ... thanks dear ... keep it up




yeah matlab... you might not remember me but i have also seen you around the ARJUN forum. Hehe now its Dev Anand Forum.😉 phir milengein.🤗
oh thanks for liking it.😊

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tanika_11

it was awesome,just loved it 😳

do write more 😳




Thanks for liking it.😊
Okay i will try to write another one soon.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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It was superb look like I m watching new case awesome dear

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