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Fanaah-
An Impossible Love Story

Chapter 1


Princess Vassundravati

1840 A.D - 1862 A.D


In Royal's Mansion

There Was Large Party Going On... King Queen Both Were Very Happy As Now Today There Eldest Daughter Vassundravati Is Now Going To Be Married... Into Royal Family...


In Vassudravati's Room

Vassundravati In Her Bridal Attaire Was Sitting On Her Bed And Her Friends Princesses Of Other Royal Estates Were Teasing Her... And Vassundravati Was Blushing Listening At Her Friends What Were They Saying... In Her Room And Whole Royal Palace Was Lightened Up By Lights Candles And Laughters But Who Knew Their Happiness Lasted For Short Time When A Man Came In Living Hall...


In Living Hall

A Man Came With Most Shocking And Horrible News... Actually That Man Belongs To Groom Family.. And Came Here To Inform About It... That Man That Groom Was Been Attacked By Aryan's Estate... And He Was Mercilessly Killed And There He Breath His Lasts... Listening This News EveryOne In The Hall Became Shocked And For Them Time Got Stopped... Thinking Of Their Daughter...


In Vassundravati's Room

Vassundravati Was Blushing At Her Friends Words... That Suddenly She With Her Friends Heard Some Noises Making Them To Run Into Living Hall...


In Living Hall

Vassundravati Came With Her Friends To Hall.. And Was Shocked To See The Whole Scenerio... Than She Walks Towards King And Queen To Her Parents To Ask What Happened... Then As She Goes King Hugged Her Making Her Shock More... And In A Seconds She Broke The Hug... And Before She Could Say Her Uncle Came Towards Her.. Placed His Hands On Her Head... And...

Uncle: Vassu Beti U Need To Be Strong Now...

Vassundravati (Confusing): Whyy Uncle What Happened...

Uncle (With Much Courage): Beta Griraj's Cousin Came Here...

Vassundravati (Stammeringly): W..Ww...hhh...yyy Is He Okkk...aaa...yyy N...aaa...


(Listening This Uncle Nod In No... Then Vassundravati To Her Father..)


Vassundravati: Father Please Tell Me... U Know Na How Much I...

King (Father. Interruptingly With Closing His Eyes): Beta Griraj's Cousin Came To Give Us Knews Of Griraj That While Griraj Was Coming With His Family... He Got Attacked By Aryan's Estate... Causing Griraj To Be Killed Mercilessly... And There He Breath His Lasts...

(Listening This Horrible News Vassundravati Was Very Much Shocked... She Was In Soo Much Shock That None Tears Fell From Her Eyes Even Her Eyes Wasn't Teary... She Stood Up And Walk While Remebering The Time Which She Spend With Her Love Griraj And Now This News Of Griraj... She Walked Towards Kitchen... And There She Hold Knife Cut Her Wrist Making Deepp Cut... And Then She Fall On Floor Now With Teary Eyes... And None Of The Family Heard It Because They All Were Busy In Their Own Talks Saying About That How There Daughter Will Take It... They Thought There Daughter Need Some Time To Digest It But They Never Thought That She Will Suicide It... So Thats Whyy They Let Her Go...)


After Few Hours

At Cliff

Queen Was Holding Her Son's Hands And Her Daughters Were Holding Her Queen From Left Side... And Were Crying With Other Family Members.. And King Was Holding A Mudka And Revolving Around His Daughter's Vassundravati's Body With Dropping Water From Mudka... And Then With Wooden Stick He Lightened Up His Daughter's Body With Fire... Then Walk Backwards... Holded His Queen's Hands... And Was Crying... Remebering The Time When Vassundravati Was Found Dead..


Some Time Back

It Was Much Time That Guards And Every Members Were Founding Vassundravati But She Was Found Missing... Then In Search Of Her A Guard Came To Kitchen And Found Vassundravati On Floor... Thus Bringing King And Queen In Seconds... When They Comes Alongwith Other Family Members They All Were Shocked To See The Lots Of Blood From Her Cut Of Wrists... Then King Checked The Pulse And Found No Pulse... Then Whole Family Were Left In Cries...


Current Time

At Was Much Time That Vassundravati's Body Was Burning... And Now Forcefully King Took Queen Back To Their Palace Leaving Their Beloved Daughter In Burns...


At Night

Still Vassundravati's Body Was Burning.. That From Very Long Area Of Jungle A Creature Speeded Up His Speed And Walks To Vassundravati's Body... Seeing Her Body In Burning... He Comes Nearer To Her Body And Bite Her Neck... Such That Leaving His Poison In Her Blood... After Biting Her He Moved Backwards And...

Brijumaan (While Looking At Body): I Don't Like Death But I Can't Give A Life..

(As Brijumaan Was Saying This He Saw Vassundravati Opened His Eyes... And Her Whole Body Burns Were Healing. Then Vassundravati In Fire Sits While Her Eyes Were Showing The Hateness... As She Remebered What Had Happened...)


At Aryan's Estate

All Peoples Or Rulers Were Smiling Largely... Because Finally They Were Suceeded In Attacking The Griraj And His Family... Due To His Death Vassundravati Also Suicided.. So InDirectly They Had Killed Vassundravati... Knowing Her Weakness. And Worked On It... As Aryan's Estate People Were Celebrating Their Victory And Drinking Alcohol The Door Was Knocked... Listening KNOCK KNOCK They Were Confused That At This Time Who Would Be Knocking Them... So King Ordered His Servant To Open The Door... And As Servant Opened The Door He Saw Vassundravati In Her Messy Hair.. And In A Seconds She Killed The Servant... Then Pushed The Servant And Walked Inside Showing Herself To Aryan Estate People.. Seeing Her EveryOne Of Aryan People Were Shocked To Core... And Before They Would Stand Up Or To Figure Out And Think About That In A Seconds She In Her Seconds Killed All Of The People... By Biting Them... And Then She Smiled At Herself That She Had Killed Her Love's Murderers And After That Blood Tears Came Out Of Her Eyes As She Remebered The Time That She Spend With Griraj..


UdayVeer Singh

1910 A.D - 1930 A.D


Dehradoon July 1924

In Nursery (Inside Of Uday's House.)

Both Uday And His Jiju Love Planting So They Made A Small Nursery In Their House... As His Jiju Vijayendar Was Watering A Flower... He Sees Uday In His 14th Age Carrying The File And Looked Exhausted... Seeing Him Like This Vijayendar Stood Up And Walked Towards To Have A Glass Of Water Then To Uday... Giving Him Glass Of Water And Making Him Sit... He Placed His Hand On Uday's Forhead.. And... Before He Could Say Uday...

Uday: Jiju Today I Had My Interview.. And..

Vijayendar: And...???

Uday: And Again I Was Rejected... I Give Them My CV (Curriculum Vitae) And My Cover Letter... And Ask That Why I Haven't Mention My Full Education Or Did I Missed That... I Replied That I Received My Education Till 10th Class,,, And In A Seconds They Replied U R Not Qualified For This Job.. Then I Said Okay Taking Back My CV And My Cover Letter...

Uday (With Tears): Jiju I Wish I Could Study More To Get More Better Job... But Atlas I'm Failed I Couldn't Fulfil My Jiji's Dream... Why Mom Dad Had To Go When We Need Them The Most...


(Listening This Vijayendar Eyes Also Get Teary.. And Unnati Was Standing By A Pillar And Listening It Her Tears Also Get Teary And Wiping Her Tears She Left... And Vijayendar To Make Uday Mood Lit Up He Took Him To Nursery.. And While Watering The Plant ...)


Vijayendar: I Had Lose My All Hope For That Plant But U Saved It From Dying..


(As Vijayendar Says It He Looks At Uday's Face Who Was Smiling Now... And It Seems Like That He Forgot What Had Happened.. Then He Continued...)


Vijayendar: Champ... How Did U Do It..


(As Vijayendar Says It Uday Takes The Pipe From Vijayendar . He Pour Some Seeds In Empty Vase... While Giving Little Water To It ...And To Vijayendar)


Uday: Jiju I Learnt All This From U... U Always Say Na That In Life We Shouldn't Loose All Hopes... WhatEver Happens..


(Listening This Vijayendar Was Very Happy And Was Smilingly Largely.. Then He Put His Hand On Uday's Head..)


Vijayendar: True..


(Then He Sees Dog And Looked At Its Direction And To Uday..)


Vijayendar: Look Pappu's Leg Is Also Looking Fine..


(Listening This Uday Smiles.. Then In Serious Tone While Looking At Him..)


Uday: Jiju Should I Ask One Thing..

Vijayendar (With Smile): Sure...

Uday: Jiju On That Day If U And Me Were WIth Mom And Dad In That Bus..So Could We Save Them.. ???


(Listening This Vijayendar Was Sad... And..)


Uday: After Death Nobodys Don't Lives Na. Right..


(Then Placing His Hand Again On Uday's Head.. And...)


Vijayendar: They Do Comes. Comes To Live In Our Moments. In Our Every Celebration In Our Memory.

Uday (With Little Smile): Hmmm...


(Then Vijayendar Walks To Back Of Nursery And Seeing Huge Palace..)


Vijayendar: Uday Look That... In That Huge Palace Somebody Had Turned On Light.. Ohhh Yeahh I Remeber Today Is July's Full Moon..

Uday: July's Full Moon.. Means Whole Palace Would Light Up..

Uday (Now Looking At Vijayendar): Like Every Year...

Vijayendar (Looking At Palace): And Tonight Palace Would Look Again Awesome.. Like As 14 Years Before..

Uday (Looking At Vijayendar): Jiju Tell Me Some More On Of This Palace.

Vijayendar (While Looking At Palace): 14 Years Before This Palace Was Not Less Beautiful Than Any King's Castle. Chandeliar Like Twinkling Stars Of Sky


(With Interior Showing Of Palace. Servants Walking Here There)


Vijayendar: 20 20 Servants Altogether Work In This Palace So That Its Beautifulity Never Fades.. But The Most Important Thing Of This Palace Was Komalita Madam...


(As Vijayendar Says It Komalita Eyes, Her Lips On Which A Sweet Smile Was Playing On And Her Face Was Shinning In The Dark Too... Was Shown)


Vijayendar: But More Than It She Was More Beautiful From Her Heart.. And Her Laughters Happiness Make Whole Palace To Dance...


(As Vijayendar Was Saying It Komalita Was Running In Her Palace.. )


Vijayendar: And When She Fall In Love. Its Myth That In Thousand Years, This Love Is Felt.


(As Vijayendar Was Saying This Komalita Was Talking With Her Prince Charming.. Her Prince Charming Was Hugging Her. Than After Seeing The Palace Both Vijayendar And Uday Sat On Grass.. And...)


Uday: But Jiju What Happened In That Palace.. That The Peoples Who Lives In Happiness R Living In Darkness.


(As Uday Asked This Question Vijayendar..)


Vijayendar: Uday If I Say True So I Myself Didn't Know.. And Not AnyOne Knows About It. But I Guess The Reason Of It Is Komalita Madam's Love. Komalita Madam's Love Has Very Very Sad End..


In Palace

A Lady In Her Red Bridal Dress Was Walking With A Sad Music At BackGround..Then Lady's Face Was Shown And It Was None Other Than Komalita Who Was Dressed Up In Her Bridal Dress And Having Teary Eyes. With Holding Lit Up Candle In Her Hand. And Was Lightening Her Palace With That One Candle. Then After Lightening It She Walks In The Living Hall With Sad Music At BackGround.. Then Walks Towards Her Terrace.. Stand Over There Forawhile. And Lost Herself In The Moments When She Loved Her Prince Charming Brijumaan.. And Then

Komalita (Shoutingly): Where R U...


(She Says It Many Times But No Answer Came... Then In Her Anger She Threw Of Her Candle On Ground And Started Crying..)


In Uday's House

Outside Of Nursery

Vijayendar And Uday Both Were Talking.. And

Uday (With Smile): Jiju One Day A Would See Whole Palace And Komalita Madam Too...


(Listening This Vijayendar Smiled Hugged Him..)


Next Day

Unnati Was Scolding Uday ... Because He Had Gave His Food To The Dog Pappu..

Unnati: U R My Step Brother. And I'm Certain That Mom Dad Had Brought U From Dustbin... I Never In My Life Had Stolen.. And From Past Few Years U R Spending Ur Life On Ur Jiju's Money... U Get EveryThing... But Now U Would Take My Life.. Is That What U Want...

Uday: Jiji I Swear God Promise I Haven't Stolen Anything..


(As Uday Was Saying This Vijayendar Come From Back And Hears It... )


Uday: Jiji Pappu Was Feeling Hungry... So That's Why I Gave My Food To Him..

Unnati: We Haven't Have Money And Foods To Waste And U Brought Dogs And Feed Them.

Vijayendar (To Unnati Interrupting): Unno Stopp... What R U Doing... Stop Scolding Him.. If He Had Given His Food So Whats Wrong.

Unnati: Today He Brought One Dog And Next Day He Would Brought All Animals And Make This Home Zoo... As If Money Grows On Trees..


(Saying This Angrily Left The Place.. And Before Vijayendar Could Hug Him Or Say To Uday He Left...)


In Uday's Room

Uday Holding His Family Photo In His Hands. And..

Uday: Mummy I Don't Know Why Jiji Has Some Problem With Me. Or Too All..


(As Uday Was Talking With The Picture.. He Heard His Jiju Talking With His Jiji.. So Uday Goes Near And Heard It..)


In Lounge

Vijayendar (To Unnati): Unno Why U Do This With Him... He Is Ur Own Brother..


(As Vijayendar Says It He Placed His Both Hands On Unnati's Hands.. )


Vijayendar: Okayyy... Now Tell Where Is Pappu..

Unnati: I Don't Know Vijay Where Is Pappu... And If Entrance Door Was Left Open And Pappu Runs Away So I Have No Fault In It...

(As Soon As Uday Heard It He Was Shocked And Went Out Of The House In Search Of Pappu...)


OutSide Of Ken's House

Ken Was Uday's ClassFellow... Uday Had Stopped His Education But Their Friendship Which Was Started From School Never Finished... So In Search Of Pappu Uday Went To Ken's House . So He KNOCK KNOCK... And Door Was Opened By Ken.. Before Ken Could Ask Him Uday Hurridly Asked..

Uday: Ken.. Jiji Had Made Pappu Run.. Lets Go And Find Him..

Ken: R U Crazy At This Hour.. At This Time Going Out Is Not Safe.. And Didn't U Seeing Full Moon..

Uday: WhatEver... Lets Go Na. R U Afraid..

Ken: Afraid..??? Why Would I Be Afraid..Okayyy... Wait I'm Coming...


(Saying This Ken Was About To Go That Ken's Dad Heard It.. And..)


Dad: Ken .. Where At This Time Where R U Going...

Ken (Stamerringly): Dad. Uday's Dog Pappu... Is Lostt... So I'm Going With Him To Help...


(As Ken Says It Dad Looks At Uday Then To Ken..)


Ken: U R Forgetting That Today Is Full Moon... And In Just Few Time It Will Be 12...


(After Saying This To Ken. Dad Walks Towards Uday And ...)


Dad: Ken Is Not Going Anywhere... And U Too Go Home... Its Not Safe To Roam Around At This Time... Goo...


(Saying This Ken's Dad Closed The Door And Uday Walks From There..)


In Jungle

Uday On His Bicycle Was Roaming In Jungle And In Search For His Pet Dog And Calling His Name...

Uday: Pappu...


(While Walking In Jungle He Came Across Palace's Main Entrance Gate Which Was Left Open.. Seeing It Open He Thought...)


Uday: Might Pappu Walked In It...


(Saying This Uday Parked His Bicycle And Walked To The Palace Gate ..)


Uday: Nobody Walks In Palace.. But WhatEver Happens I Will Find Pappu...


(Saying This Uday Went Inside The Palace By Opening The Gate)


In Palace

Uday Walks In Palace For Finding Pappu And Calling His Name..

Uday: Pappu... Where R U... Pappu...


(As Uday Says It He Heard Komalita Standing On Terrace Who Was Shouting For Her Brijumaan)


Komalita: Where R U...


(Listening Komalita's Voice And Seeing Her On Terrace Which Was Above Than Him.. Seeing Her He Was Afraid... And Then Komalita Too Saw Uday... Seeing Her Uday Ran Inside Of Palace.. Whereas Komalita Was Confused Now As How Did He Get Entered In Palace... )


In Lawn

Uday Seeing Komalita He Was Afraid And He Ran To Lawn As Fast As Possible.. And In That Process With His Foot He Kicked Candle... And He Himself Fall On Floor.. And Candle Goes To The Place Where Young Girl Was Sitting... And Due To Candle Lawn Catches Fire... Then Uday Stood Up And Sees That In Middle Of Fire A Girl Was Sitting Lost In Her Own Thoughts.. And In BackGround A Soft Music Was Playing On..


BACKGROUND MUSIC

Hmmm...

Hmmm...


Aur Ahista Ki Jiye Baatein

Dharkanein Koi Sun Raha Hoga


Aur Ahista Ki Jiye Baatein

Dharkanein Koi Sun Raha Hoga

Lafz Girne Na Paye Honthoon Se

Waqt Keh Haat Inko Chun Lainge

Kaan Rakhate Hain Yeh

Daaro Deewaar Raaj Ki Saari Baat Sun Lainge


(As Uday Sees It He Was Shocked Then He Took Off His Jacket And With His Jacket He Blew The Fire While Seeing Her...)


Aise Bolo Keh Dill Ka Afsaana

Dill Sune Aur Nigaah Dohraaye


Aise Bolo Keh Dill Ka Afsaana

Dill Sune Aur Nigaah Dohraaye

Apane chaaron Taraf Ki

Yeh Duniya Saans Ka

Shor Bhi Na Sun Paaye Na Sun Paaye


Aur Ahista Ki Ji Baatein

Dharkanein Koi Sun Raha Hoga

Lafz Girne Na Paye Honthoon Se

Waqt Keh Haat Inko Chun Lainge

Kaan Rakhate Hain Yeh

Daaro Deewaar Raaj Ki Saari Baat Sun Lainge


(After Extinguing Up All The Fire Uday Holding His Jacket Stood Infront Of That Young Girl.. But Then He Sees A Little Fire Was Left Which Was Going Towards That Young Girl's Feet... So In A Seconds He Threw His Jacket On Fire Making Fire Extinguish It And In That Young Girl Came To Her Senses And Sees Uday.. And Stood Up.. Looking Uday Angrily. While Uday Was Having Little Smile On His Lips As He Saved Her From That Fire.. And Walked From There Because Of Uday Continously Seeing Her...)

BACKGROUND MUSIC ENDS


Chapter Ends


PRECAP

Vijayendar Was Asking Unnati That Why Komalita Had Called Him..

Uday Meeting Komalita

Manvi Slaps Uday

Manvi Plays Chess With Uday Because Torture Of Komalita...

Manvi And Uday Became Friends

Manvi And Uday Enjoys Each Other Company..

Manvi And Uday Plays With Each Other In Water

Uday Gives Manvi Ride On His Bicycle..

Vassundravati. Blood Tears. Komalita Dressings

Brijumaan With Uday...

Komalita's Evil Plan...

BACK GROUND MUSIC Mein Tenu Samjhawan

Edited by Twinkle_alisha - 9 years ago

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