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Heyyy Guyzzz Once Again Im Here To Post A Story... 😊 Not Mine But Somebody Esle...😊
This Story Is Written By My Facebook Friend Nupur
... 😊 As She Didnt Know How To Post It... So On Her Behalf Im Doing It... 😊 So I Wanna Ask Whether Should I Post Or Not... Its Upto U Guyzzz... 😊 If I Received Above 5+ Likes So I Would Post It...😊

THANK YOU FOR READING IT...😊
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THE EGO

A young man was sitting and gulping drink, his face was burning in anger.

'' Kyun Manyata kyun...kyun kiya yesa humare saath'' he shouted and throws his glass on floor.

The glass was shattered on floor.

'' Humne kuch nai kya...kiya tumne h...'' a girl was standing in front of his eyes

'' Manyata! '' He utter

'' Ha Uday...hum...'' she smirks

'' kya karne aayi ho tum...sab barbaad kar diya Tumne ...'', he shouts

'' mene...mene barbaad kiya...barbaad tumne kiya ...hamari jindgi ko jharnum bana diya h...'' she shouts

'' wah... Manyata wah...kiya baat h...apni galti manne ki jagah ...tum hampe ilzaam laga Rahi ho...'' he clucted her shoulders

'' Aur tumhari jindgi jharnum bana di...tumhe tumhara Aakash mil Gaya...yuvrani ka crown mil chuka h...vo sab mil chuka h jisnki tumne khawab dekha tha...aur tumhari jindgi jharnum h...'' he smirks

Manyata can clearly see anger in his eyes...but not this time...not this time

She jerked '' bus Uday ...bus...tumhari jindgi humne nahi ...uski wajah tum khud ho...Tumhari ego h...'' she shouts at her maximum voice

Uday never saw her like this...she was damn angry...her body was shivering...

'' Yuvraj Uday veer singh ...yahi hona tum...'' she pointed her finger on his chest

'' Uday veer singh...the most desirable bachelor ...h na...woh insaan jiske baaho m aane ke liye har larki betaab rehti h...uss insaan se saadi karne ke liye ek larki ne mana kiya kar diya...ye baat tumhari ego ko hurt kar gayi...'' she smirked

'' yuvraj Uday veer singh saadi usse kiya jaata h jo aapse pyaar karta ho...usse nahi jo aapko bus hasil karna chahta ho...

m winning trophy nahi hu...jo tm apne wardrobe m saja kar rakh sakho...m bhi ek ensaan hu...mujhe bhi dard hota h...takleef hoti h...but who cares...you know what sad part is,,, tumhe janna bhi ni h'' hot tears was start falling frm her eyes...

she wept it

'' Uday..tumne aaj tak ek baar bhi mujhse Uday ban kar pyaar kiya h...nahi...tumhre liye m bhi ek politics ka hissa thi. jisse pa kar tum aur powerful ho jate h na?'' she looks straight in his eyes

Uday feel uncomfortable ...dont know why...her every words tearing something in his inside

'' Uday please ,please.. for god sake ...apni ye ego chor do...varna ye tumhe kahin ka nahi chorega... pyaar m ego nahi hota...pyaar m hota h sirf bharoosa ...aur sacchaI...lekin na to tm mujh par kabhi yakin kar paye...aur sachai to kabhi thi hi ni. '' her voice start breaking ..she hardly spoke anything

'' u..Uday...takleef hoti h mujhe ...t..Tumhe iss halat m dekh kar...tum bure Ni ho...Bus tumhara ye ego tumhe bura bana raha h...'' her lips get dry.

her eyes was swelled .

'' m..m. yaha sirf ye kahne aayi thi...ki ...pls try to understand me. Bus akhiri baar ...kehne aayi hu'' she finally complete her words.

She turns and leaves the room.

Uday was standing quietly ...he was dumbfounded ...Is she right?

Uday dumbed on his couch...he was still in shock...

--------- FlashBack --------------


Uday...Uday ...meri baat toh suno'' Manyata was shouting

'' Ab kiya sunne ko baki reh gaya h...princess...sorry yuvrani Manyata '' he smirked

'' Uday tumne jo dhekha vo. ...'' Manyata TRy to explain

'' Pls yuvrani Manyata... Aap humpar apna samai Nast na kare...aap koi ''khaas'' aapka intezaar kar raha h'' he roared

'' Uday tum galat samaj rahe ho .m..'' she try to speak but ...

Uday pinned her in wall

'' bus ek din maaga tha tumse...bus ek din...aur tum vo bhi nahi de paaI...tum ek din apne lover se dur nahi reh paai. Manyata. ...'' he clutched her more tighter

'' u knw what! Manyata ...media sahi kehti h...moniya uses yuvraj Uday for became princess Manyata ...''

his last sentence break Manyata from inside ...she trust him more then anyone ...but he didn't have trust on her...

Her eye was burning for her own hot tears...

But Uday! Uday was lost in his own world where he cheated by her own love..

-------FlashBack Ends---------


It was almost 2 hours when Manyata left him with her thousand questions.

'' kiya kar diya mene ...'' he sat on bed ...closed his face by his hand

'' kyun kiya ye sab...tum sahi thi Manyata ..apni ego ki vajah se sab kuch kho diya...pehle mom ko fir dad...sab chale gaye mujhe chor kar...par m tumhe ni jane duga princess...I never let you go!'' he get up and run toward his car.


RajMahal

Uday's car stopped on his destiny .He jumped out and run inside but he collapsed with someone.

Man- sorry...yuvraj

Uday- you!

He was Aakash.

Aakash - wo I am sorry ...m bus man.

Uday was boiling in anger...his eyes was burning ...he clutched his fist

Aakash who was aware of Uday's behavior. get little bit scared

Uday (angrily) - kiya kar rahe ho tum yaha?

Aakash - m bus Manyata ko thanks bolne. Aaya tha

(He gulp saliva in his mouth)


Uday- thanks? Kisliye

Aakash- dekhiye yuvraj ...m jaanta hu mere vajah se aap aur Manyata ke beech duriyaa aa gayi h...yakin maniye uss din jo hua vo vaisa ni tha jaise aap soch rahe h.


---------FlashBack -----------

''Manyata pls pls meri maddat kro...mujhe kuch samaj ni aa raha h!'' Aakash requested on phone

'' Aakash...tum chinta mat kro...aunty ji ko kuch nahi hoga m hu na...hum unka illaj acchi tarah se karvayege..'' Manyata tried to console him.

Aakash -Manyata mujhe bahut dar lag raha h...agar ma ko kuch ho gaya toh?''

Manyata- Aakash m hu na kuch ni hoga...achcha m hospital aatI hu

Aakash- theek h...

Hospital

Manyata run toward Aakash

Manyata - Aakash aunty kesi h?

Aakash- abhi unka operation chal raha h...

Manyata - tm fikar mat karo sab theek ho jayega...

Aakash dumped on chair..and break him in tears

Aakash - ye sab kiya ho raha h? Manyata...mom ko acchnak se heart attack kaise aa gaya...subhah tak to vo bilkul theek thi..fir...( he chocked)

Manyata sat beside him and put her hand on his shoulder

Manyata - sab theek ho jayega...trust me

Aakash- Manyata ...I am very sorry ...mere vajah se tumhe bahut paresani uttani par ri h

Manyata - is ok...aakhir dost dost ke kaam ni aayega toh kaun aayega ..

Aakash replied in weak smile

suddenly doctor came out ...

Manyata - doctor!

Doctor - oh hello yuvrani sah...

Manyata - hello...a ..a doctor patient kaisi. h?

Doctor - oh...patient bilkul theek h...

Aakash ( interrupt) - doctor kiya m unse mil sakta hu?

Doctor - nahi ...abhi nahi...unhe aaj under observation rakha gaya h...ap unse Kal mil sakte h...filhaal unhe aur aapko rest ki jaroort hai..

Aakash- m theek hu ..m..

Manyata- doctor sahi keh rahe h Aakash...tumhe aaram ki jaroort h...m tumhe ghar chor deti hu...

well..thank you doctor ...

Doctor ( smiles) - its my duty ... highness


Aakash s House

'' ye lo pani pe lo'' Manyata holding a glass of water in her hand

Aakash take a sip and put it on table

Manyata - kiya hua Aakash?

Aakash - m..Manyata ..agar aaj mom ko kuch ho jata to...

Manyata put her hand on his shoulder.

suddenly he hugged her.

Aakash-( sobbing) - thank you Manyata...thankyou...for everything ...

Suddenly door boomed!!

'' wah princess wah...hum tumhara wah intezaar kar rahe h...aur tum yaha apne lover ke sath busy ho...'' he smirked

'' Uday'' Manyata uttered

Both can see that Uday is damn angry on them.

Uday- lagta h tum logo ko disturb kar diya...you guys carry on.

he moved outside like a storm. Manyata was standing in shocked.

---------FlashBack Ends--------

Toh ye hua tha ...lekin na jaane tumne kiya samaj liya... fir uske baad mene news m dekha ki tum dono ke riste kis halat tak biger chuke h...m tumhe sacchai batana chahtauske baad jis tarah se tum Manyata ko har jagah accuse kar rahe the...khair...m yaha bus Manyata ko thanks bolne aaya tha...par tumhe dekha toh..mujhse raha ni gaya'' Aakash finally complete his view

were Uday was dumbfounded...his guilt was suffocating him...

Uday- tm..mera matlab h...Manyata ..aur tum ek dusre se pyaar ni karte.?

Aakash (laughed) - nahi...kisne kaha? hm to bus dost h...hamesha se

Uday- thanks Aakash and sorry mere vajah se...

Aakash( interuppt)- its okkey...

Uday run inside the mahal...he want to say sorry to her...

Uday - Manyata...Manyata

he shouts

'' kisse dund rahe ho Uday'' - jai entered with smile

Uday - Manyata ko...

Jai- oh...kyu hamari jiji ki bejati m koi kami reh gayi thi...jo aaj puri karne aaye ho...

Uday- pls j...bus karo

J( smirked)- m bhi toh vahi keh rahi hu...bus karo Uday...jiji ko paresaan karna bus karo...unhe aur kitne takleef dena h? ...tumhari ego ki vajah se ...unse unka devgardh chinte chinte baccha h...bari mushkil se meri jiji ne khud ko aur devgardh ko sambhala h...phir se unhe mat toro...

Uday- j pls...I knw mene usse bahut takleef diya h...but m usse mafi magna chahta hu...meri iss ego ki vajah se m usse khud se dhuur jane nahi dunga

J - jiji Ghar par ni h...

Uday- fir kaha h?

J- vo...unki aaj flight h...vo USA ja ri h ...hamesa ke liye

Uday- nahi...m..Manyata

He turn back and run outside.

------ BackGround Music --------

Dhoor talak h suuna falak h...

dhoonde tujhko kaha...

tu hai kidhar na aaye najar

sunle ye intezaa...

mat ja re...mat ja...mat ja...

teri kami hai...ssanse thami h..

tanha dil h mera...

Uday was driving ...he was badly sweating ...suddenly his car stopped ...

one girl came with red roses

Girl- bhaiya phool loge?

Uday saw red roses... tha...par Manyata...Manyata ne mujhe rok diya...


------ FlashBack --------


''phool lege'' one cute girl peeped inside the car

Uday- nahi chayie...

'' kyu ni chahiye ? jaroor chahiye!'' one girl smiled

Uday- Manyata!

Manyata - Uday!

Uday- achcha ...le lo

Manyata - thank you! achcha mujhe ye red Walla de do

girl- lijiye...

Manyata - thankyou...

Manyata was smiling ...Uday smiles to see her smiling ...

Uday- Manyata ...yesa kiya h iss red rose m jo tum itna muskuraa rahi ho..

Manyata - inn red rose ko dekh kar lagta h...ki inn Lal rang se kisi ne apni mohabt ki daastan bayyan ki h...

Uday chuckled

Manyata - kiya????

Uday (try to control his smile) - kisi ne inn gulab par itni research ni ki hogi...

Both smiles ...

---------FlashBack Ends--------


'' bhaiyaa lege? ... le lijiye ...aapki koi pyaar ni h...uske liye red rose le lijiye'' girl asked

Uday- abi ni h...par ussi ko lene ja raha hu...ek kaam karo sab de du...

girl- ye lijiye

Uday pov

sayaad tumhari narazgi ye gulaab kam kar sake...mujhe yakin h...ki ye gulaab hamari mohabt ki daastan likhegi...

-----BackGround Song Again Played-----


ye kaun sa rista h..

tere aankho se ristaa h..

do dil ke paato m...ye

pista h..

zid pe bas apne dil ko yese mat thukraa..

mat ja re mat ja...mat ja re...

Uday reached at airport ...he run inside..

'' Yuvraaj Uday '' manager greet him

Uday - USA ki flight ...kaha h

Manager - vo to chali gayi.

Uday Ke jaise per ke neeche se jameen chali gayi ho.

Uday- nahi...Manyata..Ni jaa sakti h...

-----BackGround Song Again Played-----

Ishq dil se banduaa h...

Ek zidi parinda h...

Umeed se h ye ghayaal...

Umeed pe zinda h...

Aas bhari ardaas ko tu yese mat thukraa..

Mat ja re mat ja...{from tanu weds manu return_mat ja by ankit tiwari}

Uday search her everywhere. He was badly sweating.

Uday screamed at his maximum voice

Uday- MAAANNYAATAA!!!!!!

He dumped on floor. He lost his all hope...hot tears flowing ...first time he was crying ...yuvraj Udayveer was crying ...no Uday was crying ...he was crying for his love...his Manyata...

Uday- pls Manyata bus ek baar ek baar keh do

'' Uday...''' he heard his own name...

he looked at her...she was...she was

Uday- Manyata!!!

He run toward her and hugged her...as he never ever let her go

He was crying ...badly...

Uday- I ...I... am sorry ...princess...pls mujhe maaf kardo...

Manyata (worried) - Uday...pls calm down...

Uday- mene tumhe bahut takleef di h...I am sorry

Manyata - kardiyaa...

Uday again hugged her...she hugged her back...

Suddenly one air hosts came

Girl- Mam aapka jet tayiaar h...

Manyata broke the hug

Uday - jet?

Manyata - vo ds ko meri safety ki kuch jayadda fikar h..

Girl - Mam

Manyata - tum chalo... m aati hu

Uday get worried

Uday- princess pls...

Manyata - nahi Uday...kuch adhore kaam h...pure karne h...I will be back

Manyata turn and start going

Uday (pov)

Oh shit!!!...mene toh Vo kaha hi ni jiske liye m yaha aaya tha...

Manyata '' he shouts

Manyata turn

Manyata- kiya?

Uday bend on his knee...

Uday- I love u...will u marry me?

Manyata - hmm.m...soch kar batati hu.

she winked.

Uday chuckled.ss


THE END

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Nice one. ... thnx fr d pm
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awesome OS
uff uday & his ego
finally everything is sattle bw manveer 🤗
lovely proposal that uday did to manyata ❤️
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Loved it 😃 ❤️
try to write more ...
Do pm me and also thnx for the pm !
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great os dear 😃
very emotional and cute 😳
loved it to the core ❤️
do tell your friend to write more and thanks for pm 😊
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This was awesome! 👍🏼
Thanks for the pm! :3
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It's a beautiful OS⭐️
Thank you so much for sharing it with us🤗
Loved it❤️
Thank you so much for the pm
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Wow!!It was lovely,just t so wonderful!
Thank you for the Pm!Loved the ending too,it was so sweet!Tell ur friend that she is a great writer and Thanks a lot for posting it!

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