New update Chapter 9 three cheers for revenge 23/9/2015 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Pls guts tell me should I continue this or is this Is a time waste
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Hey 😊
Sounds amazing ⭐️
Very eager to know more so please do continue
Love the character sketch ❤️
Prologue is very interesting
Please do pm me if possible
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
hey ritu the prolouge is very interesting and the cs is also good.
Do continue ur ff and pm me too (if possible)😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
I will be posting chapter 1 very soon
Edited by wqadf - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 1 love is unpredictable
Manyata has arrived raj mahal after 6 years from London after completing her studies everyone is very happy to see her especially her brother karan he comes and hug her and said that
k-how are you angel I am so happy to see You I missed u so much
M-Even I m so excited to see u all bhai after such a long time especially you and hugs her Back
K-karan mana manyata aapke behen hai par humare bhe toh bete hai hu mae bhe milna hai unae,. Manyata goes and hug komal
k- with little tears in her eyes said aab hum aapko kahe nahe jaana daeng samjhe aap
M- ok boss and hugs her Back . Manyata goes and hug everyone jay vI jay and d's after that karan informs

K- angel aaj humae tumhare aana kie khushi mai party rakhe hai toh tum abhe jao rest karlo u would betired after such a long journey manyata smiles and said ok bhai.
on the other hand a guy inform uday that manyata is back he cuts the call and said welcome home manyata manalo jitna khushiya man nie hain uska baad shayad mo ka na mila manyata sry I mean wify with a anger and evil smirk on his face
with this its a end of chapter 1 pls tell me how was it and give ur views on it they are very precious for me. I will soon be writing next part
Edited by wqadf - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
hey dear it's an amazing chapter n very well written 👏
seems like uday has some evil plan in his mind
evil evil evil I tell you
lol
do continue n pm me if possible 😊
Edited by simi.k. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Manyata , s brother karan
Manyata, s lover varun
Edited by wqadf - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Starting Was 👍🏼 Soon Update Next Part... 😊 And Can Update Would Be Longer If U Don't Mind Just A Request... 😊
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Chapter- 2
Karan go to manyata room .she was attending a call but after seeing karan she immediately cut the call.
M-bhai aap yaha kuch kaam thaa kya ? Asking nervously
k-kYu hum tumsae yuhie nahe milna nahe aa sakte. Vasa kiska call thaa koe naya bf hai toh humae bata abhe taangae todh dae ga uskae saying angrily.😡
M-bhai aap bhe naa hum toh asae apne friend sae baat kaar rahe thae
k-how
M - kya hmm agar app kae adaat mae hum pass ho gaye hai toh app batyaga kie aap yaha kaese
kaare haa maa nae kaha kie tum aaj party mai yeh dress pa hongae
M-oK shockingly bhai yeh dress
K-hhaa angel yeh dress
M-Kya haa bha I can't wear this no no no not at all
k-angel pls
M-no bhai I can't wear this sry
k-pko plz angel tum aap nae bhai kae baat nahe manage
M-bhai emotional blackmailing hai
K-pplz angel agar tumhae yeh dress pahnae na toh humm aapkae aek wish purae ka range

M-pApka promise whatever I say
K-pRomsey
M-oM-oK then I will wear it
k-tko that like my girl he kissed her for head and go out of the room
at uday nivaas
u-be ready princess hum aa rahe hai with an evil smirk on his face
At devgarh palace
palace is decorated beautifully. Karan make sure that everything is according to the taste of her angel party was started guests were arrived.
Manyata coming from the stairs and she was wearing this and was lookin simple yet beautiful she goes to her bhai and maa
M-khush phen liya
k-bk - bhut Kush laag rahe ho na aaj tum rajkumari manayta
komal-Kaese kie najaar na laagae humare bete ko
M-MAA aap bhe na
Here the entery of our prince yuvraaj udayveer singh . The hottest and the eligeble bachelor of India. And he was no doubt looking smashing ly hot a definately we can call him a killer prince .He was wearing this.ggirls were drolling over him. Uday give them a killer smile an goes straight to d's
u-he take the blessings from d's and said gammy khamma d's
D's jeeta rahe ya beta aap akaele aaya a aaya maharaja girl raj and unanti kaha hai
u-jEe dad toh kuch kaam sae jaigar gaye hai and chothi abhe bhe London sae nahe aaya hai
Ds-koe baat nahe hum unae kissae Aur din millage but hum bhut khush hai kie kaam sae kaa aap toh aaya.caaya.chailya hum aapko manyata sae mila ta hai
u-jEe
and they both goes to manyata and she was standing alone
ds- manyata ensae miliya yeh hai udayveer singh jaigar kae yuvraaj and then she gets a urgent call and she excuses herself from them
M- Hii I am manyata and they both shake there hand
manyata was uncomfortable in dress and that's why she was adjusting her dress again and again
u-kya hua not comfortable in dress
m- yaa actually vo add at nahe hai na etna heavy dress pa hen na kei so pls excuse me uday nodded his face in approval . He take a sip of his drink and in his thoughts he said kaab taak bhagao kie manyata .
There was announcement of couple dance and uday goes to find out manyata he found her outside the party she was a hugging a man after seeing manyata hugging someone his eyes burns in a range he immediately call some guy
U-pA person ready hai.?
Person- yes sir
U-good humae papers ja
d sae jalde chaiya got it
p- yes sir aapko kal taak papaers mil jaayge . Uday cuts the call and said humae laga thaa kie hum tumhae Aur Thoda time daeng par nahe u don't deserve it. Manyata went in and uday also went to uday nivaas

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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
very good update 😊
continue soon dear...

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