New update Chapter 9 three cheers for revenge 23/9/2015 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: wqadf

Let s see what we can do




Yuppp... 😊
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Originally posted by: alisha_ashiyal




Don't Thank Us Dear.. 😊 I Really Can Understand Ur Situation As I'm Too Writter.. 😊 I Very Well Understand That When We Expect Very High Hopes And We Get Very Little Of It So How It Feels... 😊 And Yes Dear I Know IF Isn't Active .. As I Was Told That Nowadays Many Members Left The IF Because They Were Busy In Life.. And Reading Task Or Reading Story Very Few People Do It So That's Whyy We Didn't Get Much Likes.. 😔 And Yess Silent Members Don't Comment Nor Active . 😔 For Getting Likes We Have To Wait... And Seriously Don't Know How Can We Make Our Forum Active... 😔


I really do appreciate you guys.. I know how it feels when we don't get responses as much as we expect.. but we should not give in so easily right.??
do continue ur ff dear that is the spirit...
ah and don't forget to pm me 😉
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Originally posted by: simi.k.


I really do appreciate you guys.. I know how it feels when we don't get responses as much as we expect.. but we should not give in so easily right.??
do continue ur ff dear that is the spirit...
ah and don't forget to pm me 😉





Yesss... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I will be posting next part by 4 : 00 pam or may be before it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sorry guys I know I am late but stay tune with story bcoz I m updating in half an hour
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Love is unpredictable part -b
M - you are very lucky kie abhe humare bhai ko yeh sab nahe pta par I bet u when he will get to know about how u trap me in all this he won't spare you
uday smiling evenly said
first of all kie hum usae bilkul nahe da rate bulk humm to chahtae kie jalde sae jalde use yeh sab pta chale
Aur jo hum CHATHE voh ho
m-tears were coming from her eyes kitna ghatiya insaan ho tum tumhae bilkul guilt nahe hai for whatever u have done to me . How could anyone be so heartless how said with heavy voice as she was crying whwhi.le saying all this.
UK with anger in his eyes nahe bilkul nahe humae koe guilt nahe koe bhe nahe u know why bcoz you deserve this.
Vasa bhe hum tumhare yeh bakwass sunane nahe aaya tha yaha , hum toh yeh batana aaya thaa ready rehna bcoz today is our reception party so ok be ready he was going out of the room but turned around and ssaid don't you dare to disobey my orders vara consequences toh tumhae pta hie hai in dangerous ly warning tine
he left the room leaving broken and scattered manyata behind . After some time at evening uday come to his room to check either she is getting ready or not . But when he enter the room he was memrizrd in someone beauty . He never thought that he would found such a beautiful scene in his bedroom. Manyata was struggling to tied her blouse doore as her hands e were not able to reach at her back. Without any delay uday went to her and
And starts tying her dorre but manayta jersey away his hand and said
M-dont you dare to come near me or touch me . Gheen aate hai mujhe tumsae tumhare chunane sae just stay away from me , just stay away you don't't have any rights on me get it any rights . Uday is extremely angry on her no one has ever dare to talk to him like that he come near her and tied her dorre forcefully which was so tight that was giving her the pain and said
Right to jo haina voh tum bhe mujhe cheen nahe saakte anger was easily seeing in his eyes aaj phela Aur last warning hai tumhare liye never ever dare to show this kind of yours attitude towards me. And hold her arms tightly Aur etne uchaee awaaz mai toh bilkul nahe tumhare liya Aur tumhare paarivaar kae liya varna bilkul acha nahe hoga samjhe tum I hope I m very clear .
At next moment uday put his hand on her waist and pull her towards extremely near him and said I hope you would behave perfectly as Mrs manayta udayveer singh at party In front of everyone . I don't want any scene there am I clear she nodded weakly
They reach at the party they both were looking like a perfect couple . They were totally complementary each other all girls were jealous as she was with uday who was a dream boy of every girl . Uday smirked listening to girls conditions and seeing their Condition. All the media cover the golden couple and start taking their flashes.
Reporter -sir can we say abhe tak bachelor thae toh kya aap princess manyata ka hie i
Intezaar ka r rahe thae
U - hum yuvraaj udayveer singh hai aap kissae ka in tezaar nahe kaarate bulky ladkiya Humara intezaar kar the hai he look toward manayta and smirk an again turn towards media I was just kidding hum toh inheka ka intezaar kar rahe tha after all I deserve the best and she is the bed
r - sir aap mam kae sath phale relationship thae
U - of course hum 3 saal sae date kar rahe hai jab sae ye Chicago mai theee
Roman yuvraaj aya an I mean aapke bhai yaha nahe aaya kya voh aap done kae rishta sae khush nahe hai
M-asa nahe hai I mean bhai abhe india mai nahe hai esliya voh yeh function attend nahe kar paya
Uday said now if we plz excuse us manyata was very angry on him as he said they were in relationship since three years uday following manyata
Uday- manyata stop it listen to me but she is continuously walking uday anger got to his peak he made her forcefully turned to him and while doing this manyata dress at her back get ripped her dress broch at the back holding her dress at the back get broken manyata was shocked she dont know how to react and music started without any delay he hold her from her bare back and starts dancing so that no one can see her wife in that condition . He pull her more near him ans lyrics are Zehanaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Mere kareeb, mere habeeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Zehanaseeb Meaning: My Fate (someone who is destined to be yours)

Tere sang beete har lamhe pe humko naaz hai
Tere sang jo Zehanaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Mere kareeb, mere habeeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Zehanaseeb Meaning: My Fate (someone who is destined to be yours)

Tere sang beete har lamhe pe humko naaz hai
Tere sang jo na beete uspe aitraaz hai
Iss kadar hum dono ka milna ek raaz hai

Huaa ameer dil ghareeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Zehnaseeb, Zehnaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

Lena-dena nahi duniya se mera
Bas tujh se kaam hai
Teri ankhiyon ke sheher me
Yaara sab intezaam hai
Khushiyon ka ek tukda mile
Ya mile gham ki khurchane
Yaara tere mere kharche me
Dono ka hi ek daam hai

Hona likha tha yunhi jo huaa
Yaa hote hote abhi anjaane mein ho gaya
Jo bhi hua, hua ajeeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Zehnaseeb, zehnaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

Hua ameer dil ghareeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Zehnaseeb, Zehnaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb Zehanaseeb they were moving with the bits o f the song somewhere uday was enjoying all this I mean manyta near him and manyata was feeling shy as she was never ever close to any boy in this way thanks to her possessive brother there though we're disturbed by the sound of clapping . Uday take her to corner and side her hair from the back and hook her broch again and slightly kiss on her cheek and went away t leaving blushing and shocked manyata
That's sit I hope you like this chapter
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
nice update dear.. really very good..
do continue soon n thanx for the pm 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you guys very much . For next update at least I want 10 likes
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
interesting FF
oh hell uday married manyata forcefully 😡
poor manyata she love varun but now she is married to uday🥺
why uday doing this to manyata 😕
manveer dance was beautiful ❤️
uday was enjoy dance with manyata 😎
loll manyata blush & shocked when uday kiss her 😳
waiting for next chapter
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you guys to appericate my work . It really means a lot to mean I will update next chapter but after 10 like

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