~WHISPERING HEARTS ~ Chapter - 6 UPDATED on page - 9 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Ana..

awsome update...plzz this time update soon :)


Well thnxxx sweetie
I will post the chspter soon...
By the way...what is uf name ? :-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: humairaa1

Hey sis, how you? 😊
Eagerly waiting for the update
I'm so glad that you will be updating soon
😃
Please don't forget to pm me 😊


Hey sis... i m fine .
Hws u ????? :-)
Yes i m gonna update today... this is fr sure.
Chapter is complete. Everything is done :-)

Naah... hw can i forget to pm u yaar.
Its nt happening. :-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: sweetmishthi

Hey hi lovely update . One request pls ...pls dont let manyata cry infront of u.v i want her to fight bravely pls...


Thnxxx... i m glad u liked the update :-)
regarding ur request...lets see wht happens in next chaptwr.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: patakaguddi



Well thnxxx sweetie
I will post the chspter soon...
By the way...what is uf name ? :-)


Yay...u r updating today ^_^ well m Anahika in short Anu 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: patakaguddi


Hey thnxxcc for ur sweet commnt twinkle. U R Wellcome... 😊
From update 7, i will start writing in tht form... past & present Thank You Soo Muchhh ... 😃😃 That Would Be Excellent... 😃😃😃
Ok sweetie :-) Thank YOu ... 😃😃



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Posted: 9 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: patakaguddi


Well i wul just say... tht i hv a story plot in my mind so i wuld write acc to tht. :-)
So evn if manyta is nt able to retaliate in the same manner with Uday, i hope u guys wont stop reading the story. :-)
Wont be able to divulge much now.
u will gt all ur answers in my update :-)


and Sis Ur That Plot And Concept Made Ur Story Justtt Wowww... Loved How Uday With Sahiba And Samrat And Mannie...But Sis Jab Jab Mein Apki Story Parhti Hn Mein Itna Kho Jati Hn Keh Mujhe Samj Nae Ata Keh Past Aur Present Kya Hai... But Itna Im Sure Keh Mannie Aur Samrat Past Main Alag Alag Rehte Tey... Aur Phr Manyata Aur Uday Ki Fights Woh Sab Present Main Haiii... Seriously I Like Keh Kiss Tarhan Se Aap Past Aur Present Ko Lekar Chalti Ho... Likhte Likhte Aap Confuse Nae Hoti Kya Keh Mein Past Likh Rahi Hn Ya Present... Aur Sis Chap 7 Se Aap Dates Dalna Aur Bht Jaldi Jaldi Updates Karna Kyun Keh Wait Nae Hota Jab Story Itni Dashing Minblowing Aur Touching Emotional Aur Every Aspects Of Life Dekha Tha Ho... 😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: patakaguddi


Hey sis... i m fine .
Hws u ????? :-)
Yes i m gonna update today... this is fr sure.
Chapter is complete. Everything is done :-)

Naah... hw can i forget to pm u yaar.
Its nt happening. :-)


Sis Mujhe Bhi PM Karna...😃 Mujhe Nae Bhulna... Agar Nae Kiya Toh Mein Roohngi... 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ana..


Yay...u r updating today ^_^ well m Anahika in short Anu 😊


Anahika Is Reallly Beautiful Name... 😃 By The Way What Is The Meaning Of Ur Name... 😃 R U Muslim Or Non-Muslim Just A Question... And Inshort It Is Anu Or Ana... 😛
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Chapter - 6
"IS THIS THE BEGINNING OF SOMETHING NEW"


Manyata blew air in Uday's eyes which resulted in him loosing grip on her. Taking this as a perfect chance to escape, she pushd him off hr nd tried runnining awy. Folowing hr, he threatnd her to stop but she turnd her back on him. She had moved only a few steps farther whn Uday caught hold of hr.
"Leave me UV, just lemme go. U son of a BITCH, sammy wil gt u fr this" ...she protested loudly.

This ws the last nail in the coffin.
This girl had said what noone else culd even dare to think like that. She had spoken ill againt his mother. HIS LATE MOTHER !
Manyata was so aggravated for being taken away by Uday tht she dint realise hw these words escaped hr mouth. D momnt this harsh reality dawnd upon him, his eyes turnd devilish red in anger. His cold blooded gaze was so infuriating tht jolts ran dwn hr spine. He was blistering with impetuodity nd scorching wih rage. Seething in anger he askd menacingly.
"WHAT THE f**kING HELL DID U JUST BARK M.A.N.Y.A.T.A ?"

Mantata realised, she had blurted tht on d spur of d momnt. Bcoz, knowingly she culd nevr swear against anyone's MOTHER. EVER !
Taking d lump tht hd formd in hr throat, she said-
"I am sorr..." Bt bfore she culd opologise, Uday growled gnashing his teeth. "
"Hw dare u swear against my mothr. Hw dare u Manyata !" Furiously, he pulled her from her hair nd blasted - "Ysterday u mockd me nd nw this."
She flinchd in pain nd culd only whimpr - "I Dint say it delibrately UV, beleiv me. I cn NEVR speak ill against neone's mothr whn MY OWN MOTHR."

He ws so enragd tht he dint let hr finish; Instead, forcibly threw hr down onto d ground.Tears stung hr eyes as she winced in acute pain.
Shockd, she lookd at him only to find his bulging eyes boring her's, evn though her eyes were CONCEALED behind those big, ugly nd outdated glasses of hr. Not removing his percing gaze frm hr, he forcefully held hr from hr jaw digging his fingrs deepr into hr skin nd fumd dangerusly-
"U did a grave mistake by messing wid YUVRAJ UDAYVEER SINGH. U wil regrt Manyata. I will ruin u".

Infuriated in fury and blinded by his vengeance, Uday pouncd upon hr d very nxt moment.
He forcefully laid on top of hr clasping hr arms tightly agaist d ground.
Dis act of Uday hd shook her frm within. Fr a momnt she ws left stupefied as she went in a state of shock.
But, instantly gaining hr composure bck she tried freeing hrsrlf frm his strenuous clutches by Kicking him, Pushing him, Pulling him, Banging him nd wht not.
"UV Leave me Dammit... gt off me. Help ! Help! Sumbody plz help me... whr r u Sammy ! Help me SAMMY !" she yelped loudly on top of hr voice.
"SSHHH !"'... he muffed hr screamings by putting his hand ovr hr mouth. "Koi nai ayega, koi bhi nai. Tumhara YAAR bhi nai ! Remembr, U hd question abt me being a man, rite ? Today i will show u, wht i m capable of Manyata". Frightened, she peekd into his raging eyes as fear of happening something atrocious overtook hr mind.This resultd in a DEEP EYELOCK b/w d two.

Noticing tht she has stopped revolting against him, he removd his hand off her mouth nd slowly startd running his fingers ovr hr cheeks nt breaking the eyecontact.
TEARS MADE THEIR WAY THROUGH HR EYES. An EVIL SMIRK appeard on UDAY'S face.
She turnd hr face othr side to avoid being touchd by him.
Aggravated, he held hr by hr jaw poking his fingers harshly into hr skin nd forced her to look into his vengeful eyes tht wer already shooting daggers at hr.
"Ur life nw solely depends on me Miss Haa nahi toh ! In jst a matter of few minutes, i will destroy ur life by playing wid ur Dignity, ur honour, ur prestige". He roared fiercely nt removing his gaze off hr face.

Thr ws only one expression inscribd on her face nd tht was - TERROR !
Leaning closer to her, he gently brushed his thumb over her lips. Once ! Twice ! Thrice.
Huge drops of tears trickled down her eyes all the way to her rosy cheeks.
She culdnt do anything except being rooted underneath him as she had turned pale, BLANK.
Coming closer towards hr, he whisperd into her ear by caressing his lips "Aur aisa karne se na he hume tum aur na he tumhara Sammy rok payenge, Manyata ! ".

He closed the lefovr distance b/w their bodies nd intertwined his fingers tightly with hers. She stared into his eyes but tears continue to roll down hr eyes.
Sensing him coming dangerously closer nd feeling his warm breathings on hr lips, she sealed her eyes nd lips as tight as she culd do. BUT TEARS ESCAPED HER CLOSED EYES.

[..darkness.. eerie darkness.. lost figure looking fr smthing.. sharp noise.. loud thud.. BAM.. flickering light.. tied.. stuck.. crushed.. shrill noise..unimaginable pain.. boils... more pain.. every place... evrywhere.. breathless..Screamiings.. disgust.. extreme pain.. crushd]

Terrified, hr breathing hd increased as her heart started to beat at a more rapid pace. Crystal like drops hd appeard on her forehead nd hr body started to turn pale. More nd more tears rolled down her eyes. With evry passing second her body ws turning colder as she startd shivering. Uday's INTENSE GAZE refusd to leave her TERROR - STRICKEN face.
"Chorh do mujhe...plz, i beg u... plz, janey do mujhe. Plz Chorh do! Hv mercy on me, pls... Pls... Pls !". In a shaky voice, she pleaded him cryingly.

"Manyata agr hum chahe toh whithin a matter of few minutes, i cn turn ur life upside down.The PRIDE with which, u live with ur head, held high, would lose, would tainted, IF I DARED CROSS MY LIMITS." Uday grumbled angrily. "Bt u knw what, Ms Haa Nahi Toh !" He growled gnashing his teeth. "Hum kisi bhi ladki ke kareeb, unki MARZI aur IJAAZAT ke bina nahi jaate.
I HV NEVR FORCD MYSELF UPON NY GIRL & NEVR WULD". He contd frthr - "hamara naam yuvraj udayveer singh hai. i m a royal nt a cheap, lowly, degraded rapist.".

As these words gradually sunk in, Manyata opend hr teary eyes softly tht were still conceald behind her ugly spectacles nd found his DEEPDARK CHOCOLATE BROWN EYES on her's. He stared intensly into hr eyes nd said -
"Ye hamara, tumare kl ke thappad ka jawab tha. Yad haina kal kaise tumne name thappad Mara thanks !!!"


*** FLASHBACK ***
Finally d BET ws made. The one who wuld loose d bike race hd to paint his face black nd confes getting down on his knees - 'I am a LOSER. I dnt desrve respect'.
But, if UDAYVEER won the Bet, he would kiss Manyata thn nd there.
Manyta culdnt back out nd had to agree reluctantly.
Bt, Samrat ABHORRD latr part of the bet. He ws angry. He was furious. NW, HE NEEDED TO MADE SURE THT HE EMERGD VICTORIOUS ANYHOW!

Finally, d Bike race began with a grand applause nd lot of cheerful noise. The students were split in groups of two. Sum were cheering fr 'SAM & othrs ver rooting fr 'UV' . Manyta, Jalaj, Pranjal, Vijay gave in their full support to SAM whereas Jagat, Jaynandini nd othr grpmates backd UV. Thr ws only 1 person tht remaind oblivious to all those loud cheerings - SAAHIBA. She ws tensd; worried. Afraid of wht future awaitd - RIVALRY / WAR.

D race ws truly proving to b a nail biting session for all. Bth ver tryin to combat each othr. Bth wantd to emrge as Winnr. Both hd d thirst fr Victory. Only d final lap of ws left.
700 mtrs ... Samrat made the lead.
600 mtrs ... Uday made the lead.
500 mtrs ... both were at par.

D throbbing noise of whistls, claps, hootings rose with every passing secnd.
300 mtrs, Samrat made d lead. A huge smile crept on Manyata's face. Bt thn, thudding noise increasd a notch more as UV strtd bucking up.
150 mtrs ... UV got ahead of SAM. And thn,
Instantly, UV slammd breaks of his bike loosing a bit of FOCUS. His bike skid producing a sharp screeching sound nd thn 'BAM' - he fell of the bike. As a reflex, 'SAMRAT WON.'

Sam's friends, supportrs rushd to him in Euphoria. Congratulatd him by hugging him, wishing him wheras UV's supportrs wer too shockd to say nything. Dey culdnt beleiv tht UV hd lost.

Sam's jubiliant face turnd serious as he saw Manyata, walked past him. He shouted loudly.
SAM - "No Mannie ! Dont ! It's no use doin it. Just Don't do it Manie". (Bt all his pleas fell into deaf ears as Manyta hd already reachd hr DESTINATION.)

UV ws perplexd, confusd nd still tryin to figure out - Wht hd happnd. Hw he lost his balnce. Evn nt noticing tht blood ws oozing out frm his several wounds which he recivd whn he fell off d bike. Lost in his train of thouts he hd merely turnd around; 'SPLASH' !

MANYATA THREW JUG FULL OF BLACK COLOR ON HIS FACE .

Everyone present thr ws hell Shockd.The floor swept of their feet.Their eyes were opend wide nd mouths hung, forming a big O. UV stared at manyata wid fire in his eyes. She said acrimoniously wid conniving smile.
"Mr Princey ! Ur highnes, ek choti si race bhi nai Jeet paye aap pr ATTITUDE toh itna h ! SHAYH ! (Uv piercd his gaze venomously) "Attitude doesnt suit u Yuvraj ! Dont carry it. Actually, this is wht suits u BEST." (She took out his hand nd handed ovr a BENGAL to him). UV, dis suits u Best".

Uday crushd d bengal burning in scorching rage. His eyes hd turned devilishly red. If looks culd kill, manyta wuld hv been a dead body by now. He ws on d verge of bursting out. Whereas, everyone else presnt ther wer trying to FIGURE OUT WHT DID MANYTA SAY TO HIM & WHAT DID SHE GIVE HIM as nobody culd hear thm.

Meanwhile, Samrat also reachd Manyta. She joyly came f/w to hug him. Bt, Samrat askd hr seriously .
"Wht d hell hd gottn into ur head tht u did tht Mannie. U culd hv avoid it. I won d race. Wasn't tht enuf ? Kisi ko b bura lagega aur vo toh fir b UV h. ( Sam reasond out seriously)
"Toh ! He shud hv thout bfor mkin d bet." (She argued)
"If it ws d bet thn, u too shuld hv playd it fair nd square Mnyta ! Y did u cheat thn ?" (Pointd SAAHIBA interfrin in b/w.

Samrat lookd at sahiba thn at Manie nd thn bck to Sahiba.
Manyta --- "Wht rubbish ? Jus Shutup CRY BABY nd BUZZ off." (Manyta lookd at sahiba angrily) "Les go Sammie !" (Holdin Sams hand, manita strtd to go bt Sam dint budge. Starin in Manyta's eyes deeply he askd)
Sam --- "Tell me the truth Mannie !"

Noticing, Sam n Mannie lost in each othr eyes, Sahiba turnd around to go bt Samrat held Sahiba's hand. Manyta too glancd at thir held hands.
Sam -- "Sach kya h Saahiba". (Sahiba lookd at Mannie who inturn ws starin bck at hr angrily n thn askd agin).

Finally, Sahiba reveald d truth tht whn UV hd made a lead from Sam in last chunk of d lap thn hw manyta cheatd by reflecting the sunrays directly at UV using d glass. Dis prompted UV to avrt his gaze due to which he lost his focus n balance.

Lookin deep into Manyta' eyes Sam askd hr again. He gt his answr as she culdnt look in his eyes.
SAM -- "I cnt beleiv, u wuld do dis Mannie. U wuld CHEAT, play such nasty game to defeat ur opponent; UV hd made just a lil lead. I culd hv made a furthr lead in thos lst 100 metrs. But no, U cheated to defeat him. Dis shows, U dint hv trust, faith in UR Sammy" (He shouted dejectedly,) Apne sammy ki jeet se zyada tumhe us UV ki har dekhni thi. (Manyta tried xplaining him but he ws so hurt, so dejectd tht he stormd off tht place, fuming.)

Manyta followd Sam to stop him, to xplain him. She hd taken only afew steps forward bt ws instantly taken aback whn she found hrself strenuously trappd in b/w strong muscular arms on eithr sides. She stared in tht direction to see who hr intruder ws nd found out it to b UV who had forcibly pulld hr into him.
She opnd hr mouth to blast at him bt thn he firmly held hr hands nd pinned thm at hr back.

Bending down, he clutchd hr shirt n wipd off his face with it tht ws smeared with paint awhile ago. Staring into her eyes, he took a step f/wd n forcibly grabbd hr, pulling her head backwards nd growled loudly.
"I will kis u if i won, Dint i tel u? B ready nw Manyta"

Minimising d distance b/w thm, Uday leand in closr to claim Manyta's lips - His TROPHY !
She shut hr eyes tightly nd startd awaiting d momnt he wuld suppress his rough lips on hers to claim his Victory. A lone tear trickld down Manyta's closd eyes.

He stared at her in extreme abhorrence nd thn roard wid utmost disgust n aversion - loud enuf to make everyone hear.
" Ek kachre se zyada aukat nahi h tumhari. I dnt want to malign MYSELF by kissing a girl like YOU - (He glncd at hr frm Top to bottom. She instantly opend her eyes. He growld haughtily) "Aur vaise bhi hamare yha Kachra dump kia jata h muh se nahi lagaya jata. U R NOTHING BT JUST A PIECE OF BIG SHIT, MANYTA."

Nd thn, He forcefully pushd her away from him such tht she stumbled on the ground. The students tht ver gatherd around started to laugh at hr. D girls wer making fun of Manyta. All hr friens were too tongue tied to say or react to anythin nd so ws SAAHIBA.

In extreme angr, Manyta movd irately towrds his direction, turnd him around n thn 'BAM' - SLAPPD HIM HARD across his face nd blasted -

" Dobara mere sath aisa kiya na toh i will smash ur face. Dont ever dare !!" ...Wid tht nd widout utterin a word Manyta vanished away frm tht place in a jist.

*** FLASHBACK ENDS ***


"Ye jawab tha; hume thappd marne ke liye, incidentally he shi bt HAMARI maa ke against bolne ke liye." Uday stard into her eyes tht wer still concealed behind those Ugly spectacles n thn finally gt off Manyta's body n stood up.

She ws way too petrifid to move or get up. He smirkd evilly whn he saw hr condition nd mockd hr frthr -
"Dis ws my way of giving bck to u. VARNA hum tumhe choona toh dur, Dekhna tk pasnd nai krte. Tum Jaisi Ladki ... "

He lookd at hr frm top to bottom, d way she ws dressd up in AWFUL BAGGY PANTS, LOOSE ND ILL FITTED SHIRT, A HIDEOUS BANDANA COVRING HR HEAD AND THOSE ILL SHAPED UGLY FRAMES.

" ... jo ladki hai he nahi. Jisey khud ek ladki honey pr itta AFSOS aur sharmindagi hoti h tht you hv disguisd yourself as a boy in these stupid nd ugly clothes.
Ar vaise b, DINT i tll u bfor KI TUM JAISE KACHRE KO MUH LAGANE KA SHAUK NAI H HUME"... He abhorrd hr grittin his teeth.

Manyta who still ws scared gt herself into a sitting position folding her legs close to hr chest. She ws already very traumatizd bt aftr listening to hs awful rants abt hr PHYSICAL APPEARNCE, she couldnt held hrself frm pouring hr emotions out nd begin to cry bitterly... Very bitterrly.

Keeping those thoughts aside, he yelld furthr-
"I wantd to REDICULE u d the sme way u hd defamd "YUVRAJ UDAYVEER SINGH' . Frm ysterday, I ws cravin to see this -"FEAR in ur eyes,' tht u are tremblin wid nw - d 'FEAR of losin ur DIGNITY, d fear of happening somethin INHUMANE to u. I wantd to see u cry helplessly like ths, to to plead to me', to beg me fr mercy.
Nd, wid ur kidnappin I'v evn managd to malign ur reputation as nw everyone wuld beleiv tht sumthin definitely hs happnd b/w 'US' n tht too without me, even gettin to touch ur "FILTHY BODY" He blastd angrily.

She stood up lookin at him wid tearful eyes. Hr eyes hd reddend n turnd puffy wid hr continuous crying.
Penetrating his fiery gaze deepr into her's, He HELD MANYTA frm hr shoulders n spat -

"Mnyta ! I've noticd tht U nd Ur Sammy always try coming in b/w "ME & SAAHIBA", specially 'YOU'. U always try doing somethin tht wud leave BAD IMPRESSION of me on 'SAAHIBA'.
Yestrday also, u put tht stupid BET only to lower my image in frnt of hr. Listen to me v carefully 'Mis Han Nahi Toh', SAHIBA HS ACCEPTD ME AFTR A GREAT DIFFICULTY Nd nw, I DON'T WANT TO LOOSE "HER" , hr trust, hr faith, hr belief in me. SO, I WONT LET 'ANYONE' COME IN B/W "ME AND "SAAHIBA" AT ANY COST . So I it would be bettr fr u only, IF U REMAIN AWAY FROM "US' - ME & SAAHIBA, nd especially "ME''. GOT IT!" Uday shoutd at hr tryin to make hr understnd.

Wid tears still clustrd in hr eyes, she detestfully threw his arms away frm hr nd revoltd bck ferociously.

"UDAY, muje koi shauk nai hai "TUMHARE aur us SYMPATHY GIRL' , ke beech aney ka. I DONT GIVE A DAMN TO BOTH OF U. WHT MATTRS TO ME IS ONLY & ONLY "SAMRAT", so if u evr thot of HARMING "HIM' thn u'd always FOUND ME in frnt of SAMMY" ...(She spat with raging fire in hr eyes nd thn pushing him a bit forcibly, Manyta tightly HELD HIM FRM HIS COLLAR n burstd out ...
" U wnted to redicule me na... CONGRATS Uday, u hv got wht u wantd. I hv been crushd yet again ... ".
Instantly , She closd hr eyes to releive off the pain. More tears rolld down hr eyes. Clutching his shirt's collar tightly, she spat furthr -
"U did all tht to take revnge frm me, bt u hv no idea, wht emotional nd physical trauma a girl goes thru, whn it actually happns. IT CRUSHS A GIRLS SOUL. Tum kabhi nai samjhogey" ...
She cried loudly, tightly holding his collar nd moving him back nd forth.

Little did she knw tht whn she ws so engrossd in ventin hr angr out, she ws standing by d edge of d cliff. So, as she forcefully turnd around to go, she stumbled a bit, losing her balance. Before, she culd ponder upon anything else, she Grabbd Uday's neck fr support. As a result, he lost his balance too.

Clinging onto each othr nd takin a sharp TWIRL dey both FELL DOWN ON D GROUND TOGETHR n eventually ended up ROLLING & TUMBLING ovr each othr.
Manyta cried hr lungs out, "N..O..O.." lookin at a particular direction n held out hr hand in a HOPE TO STOP IT.
But, to her BADLUCK, she hd LOST THE MOST IMPORTANT TREASURY OF HR LIFE. Due to tht sudden twirl n fall, she hd lost hr; Yes that AWFUL SPECTACLES !
Tossin ovr each othr on the slope, dey both haltd at a point wher UDAY ws PINNED UNDERNEATH MANYTA.

Heartbtokn, Manyta blankly kept lookin in d direction hr SPECS ended up falling.
Whereas, Uday's gaze hd gt restrictd to only nd only hr face. He culnt see anything else xcept MANYTA. And, Y wont he ?
She was lookin D.I.F.F.E.R.E.NT. In othr words, BEAUTIFUL !
Dey dint realise, hw n whn her LONG BEAUTIFUL DARK BROWN TRESSES were set opn free frm tht HIDEOUS BANDNA while rollin down d cliff n came tumblin down, all d way ovr Uday's FACE.

Feeling shattered, she turnd hr face away frm tht place to Uday's direction, looking lost.
Upon taking a closr look at Manyta, Uday culdnt beleive tht she actually ws this GORGEOUS. She ws blessd with such pretty HONEY COLORED EYES tht he nevr noticed earlier cz of tht UGLY GLASSES of hers. He wonderd, ws he really dreamin or was it fr real ? Dis girl, who wasGLUED TIGHYLY on top of him nd lookin so FLAWLESSLY PRETTY wid jst hr hair open, was really tht old MANYTA !

His stance broke whn he saw tears engulfing hr beautiful eyes yet again. She ws so lost in hr own misery, tht tightenin d GRIP ON HIS SHIRT, she whimperd softly. "M..a.dhy..a.m ! I lost u once again". Wid tht, she closd hr eyes feeling devastated.

It ws only a mattr of sumtime tht Manita opend hr eyes very softily n found nothin bt just Uday's intense gaze penetrating deeper n deeper through her's.
He ws looking at hr with a soft expression. His gaze wasnt menacing at all. Instead, it felt SURREAL ... soft.

A small gush of wind brought sum of d strands of hr hair over hr eyes nd face which resultd in she closing hr eyes innocntly. She tried moving thm side by turning her head sideways. Seeing her doing tht, Uday's heart skipped a beat as she lookd BREATHTAKINGLY BEAUTIFUL yet so ADORABLE ND INNOCENT.
Uday dint realise, whn his hands found their way to manyta of their own, as he softily TUCKED hr hair, touching the area behind her ear in the most Tender manner.
She shivered at his suttle nd gentle touch as a very sensational feeling ran down her spine. He continud staring at the most beautiful sight he had ever seen without blinking his own.

She couldnt think muc xcept being captivated by d intensity of his gaze. Looking into each othr eyes deeply, dey themselves forgot in wht situation wer they in, how Manyta ws so tightly clinged onto him tht he culd feel hr ENTIRE BODY WEIGHT ON HIM. Whn their simple eyelock hd turned into this DEEP INTENSE EYELOCK.

Manyta's gaze fell upon d loose ends of hr open hair caressing Uday's cheeks, lips playfully.
Once she hd close look of their position nd hw her hair r open, reality struck her hard nd as a reflex huge tears brimmed in hr eyes tht didnt go "UNNOTICE by UDAY".
The SHIELD in which she had completely buried 'HERSELF' for a whole long period of "THREE YEARS " had finally "CAME OFF TODAY" nd tht too in front of "UDAY'.
He culd see the pain of "LOSING SOMETHING VERY IMPORTANT' in hr gorgeous misty eyes.

She got so vulnerable tht moment tht a "LONE TEAR TRICKLING DOWN HER CHEEKS FELL UPON UDAY'S LIP's.


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"SALONI"
Edited by patakaguddi - 9 years ago
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Heyyy Saloni Hows U... 😊
And Ur Chapter Was Perfect As It Is Always.. 😊
And I'm Really Sorry For Commenting Veryyy Late... 😔

Now Coming To Update... 😊
I Remembered When U Had Ended Chapter 5... But After Reading Chap 6 I Was Confused.. Angered.. Happy.. All Emotions...
That How Could Manyata Stooop So Low That She Cheated To Make UV Loose.. Definitely There's A Big Reason.. And How Unwillingly From Mannie's Mouth Those Words Appeared... That She Had Talk About Uday's Late Mother... I Guess Mannie Has 2 Lost...
Who Is Madhyam... And What Had Happened In Those 3 Years... That Had Changed Mannie A lot That She Had Hided Herself From Those Glasses But Saloni Sis I Didn't Got Any Idea Of Mannie's Dressing.. U Used Another Word With Glasses... I Don't Know What's Thattt...

And Uday Did Wrong Thing Swearing All About Mannie... Maybe Mannie Had Reason... But EveryOne Of Us Know That Uday Got Blind Infront Of His Anger...
And How Mannie And Samrat Came BTW Saahiba And UV... And I Don't Like And Dislike Saahiba...

And Sis I Have One More Confusion That Mannie Hate Coming Here So How Come She Is Here... And How And Whyyy Mannie Is Much Bothered About UV... That For Her She Fights With UV...

And Really Love The Part Where Both Mannie And UV Fall Off From Cliff And Seeing Mannie Gorgeous Word Come Out Of UV's Mouth... 😊

Heyyy Sis In short It Was Too Good Too Perfect... And Now I'm Really Loving Ur Story More... 😃
And Sis One Thing Its A Request Do Reveal Who Is Madhyam. And Whyy Mannie Wanted To Hide Herself... And What Had Really Happened In THOSE 3 YEARS...And How Came Mannie Came Here... Heyyy Do Reveal... And Sis Plzzz Update Next Part And Do PM Me ... 😊 😃
Edited by Twinkle_alisha - 9 years ago

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