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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: angleroops

hey anni ur update was fab

i hope at the end of os manveer are together
pls update soon


thank you so much
i am trying my best

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow anni awsome update.Loved it.Feeling bad for manyata but uday didn't know that manyata loves him.But in the end really badly want to see manveer together.plz Update the next part soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shankrishty

Wow anni awsome update.Loved it.Feeling bad for manyata but uday didn't know that manyata loves him.But in the end really badly want to see manveer together.plz Update the next part soon.


thank you so much
yes he was not aware that she loves him maybe
ok will try my best

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2

Forgiveness is the best form of love, it takes a strong person to say sorry and even a stronger person to forgive.

Paris

He glanced up at the orange sky, the clouds hovering above the tall tower, which just parted away with the setting sun. In this five years he never missed a chance to watch the sun set after all the best view could be seen from the Eiffle tower. A cold wind ran through his body, his eyes was filled with brimming tears and his scarf was lossen round his neck. His red nose puffed with each tear that rolled down his unshaven chin. He was still struck on the same day when manyata send her last message that she would keep no contact with him at all, and true to her world she never contacted him again. He searched for her but that went all worthless, he could never forgive himself for that mistake but all he wanted to see by ignoring her that whether she was in love with him. He too like manyata was in love with her since childhood but his egocentric nature tried all possible way to make her confess and that was the last prank he played that completely destroyed him and broke him down. Now all he was a lonely life living that dream that they had dreams together. His eyes were filled with tears as he whispered a name in pain

"Manyata"

But his silent scream died into the air, as he strolled down the garden to his vintage car. Uday s eyes were already blinded with tears and he failed to notice when he banged against a fragile figure. The aroma around him changed all of a sudden he felt a similar feeling, he was too eager to see her face and even he could feel his heart skip beats.The girl was crumbled down on the floor and her hair was scattered all over her face. He lend her hand and tried to look into her face. The winds softly blew her hair away from her face, and time froze for them. It was manyata...HIS MANYATA.. he could not believe, she stood up, she could still feel her knee shaking and a gush of blood running down her body. In this five year her feeling had submerged but as she saw him all her feeling came rushing back into her minds. They looked at each other blindly as there eyes spoke a lot. (here I will also write what there mind told them)

UDAY:hey

His Mind: I really can't believe that it you, it feels like a dream from which I never want to wake up

MANYATA: hey Uday how have you been?

Her Mind: Don't make me fall for you again uday, I cannot go under another heart break, but if I was the victim then why are there tears in your eyes

UDAY: I am fine, and so you are here

His Mind: Now that I have found you everything will be fine ...but why did you part away my love, I was so restless but now I feel peace. Now that my soul mates your I feel complete

There was an unknown pause as his eyes was hooked on the love bite on her neck, her eyes too caught his, today she could see the love in his eyes, her mind knew that she had done something terrible wrong and she no longer deserves him as she tried her best to hide her feeling

MANYATA: yes I came here for a holiday trip

Her Mind:I do not even deserve to talk to you, I have become so disgusting that I cannot even look at the mirror...I have toyed with my life...I had given all your rights to people so that they can play along this game with me...I don't deserve to talk to you

UDAY: oh that great so when are you coming back to India?

His Mind: you are mine manyata and I do not need to be the first to claim your body to prove that as I have already reserved your heart... so just forget everything and let us start a new life let us get married.

MANYATA: have not decided yet ...ok I need to go now.

Her Mind: no uday I will not let you do this, my love story is meant to stay incomplete and I am going ... and I want you to depart with my memories this love in your eyes should not be anymore because you certainly deserve someone better

She turned to go , but with a swift moment her body dashed with him, she looked into his eyes as she could feel his lips on his, her eyes closed automatically as she lost herself completely in his magic. He parted away softly and whispered into her ears

UDAY: there is no way I am going to let go of you Manyata

He took her hands and knelled down on the grass and he said with his eyes filled with love and passion

UDAY:this time I will let my mouth speak the words that my mind has spoken I had always loved you manyata, but it was for my egocentric nature that I wanted you to propose to me and hence played the prank...I never knew that it would affect our love in a way of separation. Manyata will you forgive me and start a new life? Will you be my better half?

This was a moment of pure bliss finally the princess was getting her prince but just as reality crept in her heart as she confessed

MANYATA: but uday..

He would not let her speak as he said to her

UDAY: I asked you to start a NEW life with me that means we are forgetting all our past? Manyata will you marry me please?

She nodded her head in a yes with tears brimming in her eyes, as he stood up and swayed her in the air as the golden ray of the sun fell on there face, he kissed her hair and said

UDAY: I love you manyata

MANYATA: I love you too


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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
awww that was so cute anni!!!
loved it loads!
where derz ego dear cannot be a relationship
I'm glad Uday realized it
loved it to core
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome finale Anni😳. So, the f/b status change was just a prank by Uday as he wanted Manyata to confess her love first ... unfortunately , things took a horrible turn thereafter. I'm glad that both reunited in the end; very happy that Uday was so kind-hearted and forgiving😃.
Really enjoyed the OS,
Loved it loads😳!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful os!

A pure heart-touching confession...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MAHI1198

awww that was so cute anni!!!
loved it loads!
where derz ego dear cannot be a relationship
I'm glad Uday realized it
loved it to core


I am glad that you liked it
yes ego can never get a relationship
thank you so much

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Posted: 11 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Awesome finale Anni😳. So, the f/b status change was just a prank by Uday as he wanted Manyata to confess her love first ... unfortunately , things took a horrible turn thereafter. I'm glad that both reunited in the end; very happy that Uday was so kind-hearted and forgiving😃.

Really enjoyed the OS,
Loved it loads😳!


thank you so much barfi jiji
yes he never thought this would turn in such a horrible way
he was after all truly in love with her

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Posted: 11 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: huma12.

FANTASTIC BABY SISTER


thank you so much appi

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