Meh Humesha Tumara Hu Sanam (Discontinued...) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Nice prologue and please continue ...
And please pm me when u update
All the best
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Hey welcome to the forum.
A very nice character sketch.
Loved it loads!
Do continue asap.
Do pm me if possible.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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well i'm writing it up so about 10 mins or so😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey,Thank you so much with the comments you guys gave😊 so here's chapter one hope you like it😉:
Chapter One
Meh Humesha Tumara Hu Sanam:

The rain glistened, it seemed like the clouds were closing in, there stood a guy looking at the rain from the window thinking about something.

Flashback:

"Uday!Uday come out of the car,look at the rain its so beautiful"

"No way!t Why should i?"said uday .

"Oh come on uday "the unknown girl said

After few mins...

Uday!Uday where are you please come out,i'm scared" shouted a girl Just to make him come out

"No i don't care if you are scared i know you, i bet you, your not even scared just pretending to be scared so i come out but sorry darling it wont work on me and anyway you know me i hate the rain."😆

And then she turned around enjoying the rain to herself,just to make him jealous😆But it didn't bother him so he just watched her dance in the rain but then he got bored so he thought "why don't i play a prank on her"😛 just to see if she be scared or not so what he did he walked out of the car without the unknown girl realizing and hid himself behind the tree in the dark on her own in the wet rain.

The unknown girl thought he was in the car so she said to herself "let me pull this guy out myself because there is no fun without him in the rain."

But when she turned around she sees the door opened but no one inside and she screams

"Uday where are you,uday this is so not funny come out right now!!! Uday couldn't control his laughter😛 but all of a sudden she didn't realize what she stepped on and suddenly she was about fall but thank god someone got caught of her hand,she closed her eyes and the guy says"oh hello your alive open your eyes."

And shes screams saying"UDAY you silly boy where did you go!"

"oh my gosh why was you screaming was you scared?Anyway doesn't matter about that at least you a save otherwise if i didn't come on time you would have been up there"shouted uday.😕

"😡thank you so much you did a favour on me by saving me"said the unknown person..(flashback over)

Someone pinched uday and he screamed "ahh who did that?"

"Dad where was you lost,kuch hua heh kya? said the girl, while she looks at her dad with a bright smile on her face.

mm no why sweetie

She goes in her dads arm and says Because i was talking to you but you wasn't replying

oh ; I was just thinking about something thats all.

oh OK ,i'll make some tea for you dad ,be right back"

"kk"

After few minutes later Dad.

Hmm.

Your tea"

"Oh thanks"

"Dad,can i ask you something?"

"Ask"

"How was mum like?"

Umshe was alright looking girl

"What about your first meeting with mum?"

"My first meeting with your mum,well I saw her in someones sakay and we just talked.

Talked?That sounds so boring😆. She nudges her dad

"Dad aur bato apni aur maa ki bara meh"

"Can't be bothered"

" If mum was here she would have told me. Showing a puppy face to her dad.😃

OK okay my stubborn girl but its a waste of time,you'll get bored


"Come on dad why would your story be boring just tell me how was your first meeting like and how you ended liking each other and how was your life was like as 27 yr. old guy, and how you ended up like this?

ok🥱

It all started 22 years ago

22 years ago...: Kailash house:

"Teek seh laga nah" Shouted a woman in the top of her voice "Sab kuch toh mujhe karna par ka"

a girl pumps into to her "Sabal ga, rhea meh sass meh patti patti log, sakay Ki din hay or sab patani kya kar re hai"

"Ohh maa ab rest karo nah meh sab kuch kar leta ho"

" Kaisa rest karo mera grandson ki sakay mujhe karna parka or ha Harish tyeer hai nah?"

"Ha maa hes ready."

"Offh Backwaan yeh awaas kaise heh"

"Maa lakta heh jameela started new hangarma" said sachin...

Inside a beautiful room music was playing full blast where a girl was singing piya piya o piya piya, piya piya o piya Na Jana yeh dill darka.

Suddenly the door opens oh my gosh jameela what song is that anyway get ready ajj tumara bai key sakay heh agar daddi sees this shes going to kill you and me hurry up.

Oh oh sab tyaar hwa hah yeh nay? Komal! shouted daddi.

Haa maa aye shouted komal Hurry up be ready in 10 mins, I bet you the guests have come omg.

Kk mum chill I will says jameela walking to the bathroom.


While somewhere someone was ready and shouted "HURRY UP! Chalta se laga stupid people ajj bai ki sakay hai and yeh log patnay kya kar reh hai."

"Calm down madhu they are trying to. Bacharai humarei ghaan tumara awaas son key hum deaf hojayge hai yar youve fully gone on daddi (Hitler)"says vijay trying not to laugh.😆

"Vijay!" Shooting him annoying glares.😡 While komal comes in between them

Beta wheres maanika shes nowhere to be seen isnt she ready? says komal.

Haa maa she is shes just with bai says madhu.

In Harishs room "Bai app key sakay heh ajj app kush nay ho kya?"

"Of course I am maanika just that I am"

"OMG bai youre going red shamara ho kya "whispers maanika in her brothers ears "Im going to tell everyone, jameela madhu vijay idahr oh hamara dulha raja sharmara heh "for the first time giggles maanika.

"Maanika tum bhi na jay yeha sey."

"Teek ha Im going but app bhi ajo app ki sakay heh kissi aur kah nay."
"Ha Ara ho meh Ab chal shattan kay ki. "...

The day goes on... In the night when the guests start coming they welcomed then with a smile on their face. That with all the guests arriving the bride side come, welcoming them they all go inside..

Inside... The couple of the day was sitting on the special chair on the stage. Rati is wearing a red legha and Harish is wearing white kind of sherwani.They exchanged a ring and every clapped...


Everyone busy in their own talks a voice coming from the stage disturbed everyone's talks that in silence everyone listened.

"ladies and gentlamen we have a special announcement we going to dance on a special song for the special couple mah ve "

jameela wore a pink kind legeha madhu wore a blue kind of legha and maanika wore white kind of legeha they starting dancing to the song mahi ve. maahi ve that's the way maahi ve

Tere maathe jhumar damke

Tere kannno baali chamke hai re

Maahi ve

Tere haatho kangana khanke

Tere pairo payal chance hai re

Maahi ve

Naino se bole rabba rabba

Mann mein dole rabba rabba

Amrut ghole rabba rabba

Tu soniye

Jind maahi ve soni soni aaja mahi ve

Everybody sing soni soni aaja mahi ve

Jind maahi ve soni soni aaja mahi ve

Everybody sing soni soni aaja mahi ve and they danced to lots other songs until suddenly the light went off and it all went dark, there were screaming, shouting from the outside but no one knew who was in the house why people were screaming and shouting until they saw what happened outside on the doorstep😲

To Be Continued...

Hope you liked it,give it a like if you liked and a comment below 😉And mind the minor errors and spellings mistake i did,Thanks!😳😕


Edited by THEfanOFheartz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
hey thankx for updating
i think its uday whos around 50 yrs old and he has a daughter
but were is manika
i think she is dead
but please it should be happy ending
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😆 well i can't say about that it's a secret 😉 just keep reading and you will find out soon
Edited by THEfanOFheartz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Nice update !
Continue soon ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: THEfanOFheartz

😆 well i can't say about that it's a secret 😉 just keep reading and you will find out soon

i think it like a show how i met ur mother
i guess
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: roopali15

i think it like a show how i met ur mother
i guess

you can say so but it will be different😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: catty2000

Nice update !

Continue soon ...

Ty!😉
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