LOVE IS PRECIOUS ...chappy 4 pg 24

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Nitya Tandon

@nityatandon

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Hey... Kritz...

Description acha hai...

Aur title bhi bhut acha hai...

But ek rquest hai ...

Pls apni bki stories bhi update krdo...

And thanx for he PM...

Aur aage bhi karti rehna...

Quote

monalisa mukherjee

@chocohollic

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

This is an awesome start
Really looking forward to read this story
Well remind me of Anni 's PRINCESS
I am glad that I am getting the opportunity
To read a magical story again
But just for clarification I will like to inform you that
You have written her grand daughter will be a wizard
But wizard are referred for boys as for girl it is witch
Please do send me a pm😊
As I am eagerly waiting to read👍🏼
And please do update your other two ss
As I am growing really impatient 😆
Hope to read this story soon

Edited by chocohollic - 11 years ago

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

hey tis is superb...

luv the concept...

amazing...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

Quote

kritika

@-Kritika-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

hey guyz i m glad u like it its a unique concept ... yeah i continue this story lol 😆😆😆 firstly thanqu so much for ur lovely comments n appriciate me thanqu so much guyz now i gave u prologue ... so be happy n enjoy reading

love is precious

prologue

hey line cutter ... r u blind or something ? i m standing there since 30 min

everyone was scared

one girl : now she is dead ... !!!

2nd girl: he didn't forgive her ... !!

he turn his face ...

r u talking to me ?

no i m talking to ur ghost now back off man ... !!!

she push him

r u new in this collage ?

why did u ask me ?

couz u don't noe me

n who r u ?

he pull her weast ... he took her hand on the wall she try to go other way but he block her way

wat u trying to do ?

introduce my self

really ? i think u try to kiss me ...n than u introduce urself

wow great idea ... !!!

he go toward her face he took his hand on her lips ...

u just take off this fingure i warning u mr ... !!!

she try to complete her sentance when his cold lips touch her soft lips ... he kissed her wid more passion he kissed upper lips her soft upper lip than he kissed her lower lip ... she try to push him but her all strngth were vanished n she touch his chest n some lightning in her hands n she pushed him wid full force n he pined on other wall the lightning is brighting ... everyone shocked the guy who kissed her now his hand is fracture ... she luked her hand shockingly ... !!!

wat is that ?

i don't know ... !!!

some light in ur hand ... !!!!

god swear i don't know ... !!!

watz wrong wid u ?

how can i do this ... !!!

r u ?

wat ... ?

nothing leave .. !!!

vini some thing is litreally wrong

but wat ... ?

that i don't know ?

kritz 😳😳😳

so howz it it gud or its bad ? plz do comment n like ... !!!!

Edited by -Kritika- - 11 years ago

Quote

Jane

@Jane523

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

awesome prologue dear...
plzzz update soon...

Quote

huma

@huma12.

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Awsssmmm yar kritzzz lovely prologe

Quote

jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

hey great prologue...

pleasa update soon n thx fr the pm...

Quote

Ayesha

@Ayesha.behroz

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

awsome lovely amazing prologue
continue soon please
jaldi se chapter one de we can't wait more
awsome story kamal ki writter han tu
jaldi jaldi update bhi de ab
or intezar nai hosakta mujhse ab
continue asap
update quickly fast fast
amazing muah lovely