MANVEER FF.. UNEXPECTED LOVE chppy 5 pg 34 :D pm tomorrow - Page 3

Hey Kritz, how u?
Very nice concept
Loved the idea 😊

Prologue

One girl sitting on her window '. N she luk at a moon ' wid teary eyez n than she luk at her mother's locket

Ammi I miss u so much !!

Tommorow its my 20^th b'day n I know that u alwayz wid me in any condition I love u ammi n I love u aaba !!!n u know wat I decided that I will be going to mumbai for my studies I know aaba u r really scared how can I mange ? right she luk at her fathers photo !! but aaba I m big n brave girl so don't be pannic I can mange all things love u aaba !!! (she kiss her father's photo) n she open the drower n put her father's photo n she closed the drower !! n she going to sleep !!!

In next morning '. !!!

Hey dada wake up !!! u know its to much

Choti plz let me sleep !!

Dada its to late ' wake up !!

He cover his face wid pellow n said!!

Choti I m ur big brother '. N that's my order plz let me sleep !!

No !!! its really late !!! get up !! (she scold him)

No plz choti !!!

''''''''''''''''''''..xxx''''..xxx''''''

Oh hello gud morning madam !!!

Sunrays coming her face n she smile she slowly slowly open her eyez ' !! she sit on her bad ' she strach her arms !!n said !!

Gud morning !!

Hey b'day girl so wats ur plan today !!!

Hey abhi uthi bhi nhi hu phele hi plans puch liye ?

Oh hello mam kuch tho plans bnaye honge !!!

I don't know !! let see !!

Tera tho mujhe ptha hai koi plans nhi banye tho maine bna liya ab thanq u bolne ki zaroorat nhi hai huh !!

Oh hello bol bhi kon rha hai ?

Tu bol rhi hai !!!

Or maine kab bola !!

Kya bola ?

Thanq u !!

Ye le bol diya !!

Tu nhi sudhregi !!!

Agar mai sudhr gayi tho meri mumtaz tera kya hoga ' !!

Hey ALLAH mai tho bhul gayi !!

Kya ?

Are ammi or aaba

Are ha unhe kese bhul gayi !!

Tu aa gayi na isliye bhul gayi !!!

Haye alha meri jaan mujhse ithna pyaar karti !!!

Bhoth zyada ' !!!

Mammu jaan se bhi zyada !!!

Naa fir tho tu chod !!

Chal chod diya !!! chal jake ammi or aaba se mil le vrna !!

Mujhe dar nhi lgta vo mujhse bhoth pyaar karte hai !!!

''''''''''..xxx''''''..xxx''''''..

Ptha hai minakshi ke jane ke badh ghar khali khali lagne laga hai !! kyu komal !!

Komal: ji maa shab !! vo tho hai is ghar ki lad li hai vo !!!

Ds: or dekho na aaj se phele 16 saal phele uday or minakshi ka roka hua tha

Komal : ha maa shaab !! kithne dhum dhaam se hua tha !!!

Menka : maa shab kabhi bhi chize ek jesi nhi rheti !!

Ds : menka !!

Menka: sach hi tho khe rhi hu mai !!

Komal: kya aap janti hai aap kya khe rhi hai !!

Menka: bhabi saa mai janti hu mai kya or kyu khe rhi hu !! jo aap logo ko nhi dikh rha vo mujhe ache se dikh rha hai !!!

Ds: aapse bath hi karna bekar hai !!!

'''''''''''''''xxx'''''''''..xxx''''''''!!

Kya bath hai j bhai aaj tho bhoth khil rhi ho !!!

J: vo kya hai na vb aaj kuch especial hai !!

Vb: kya especial ?

J: aaj jagat aa rha hai !!

Vb: rally se !!

J: ha vb !!!

Vb: kya bath hai tabhi is bandar jaise chere pe ithni khushi hai !!

J: vb jab kisi ko compliment dena nhi ata ho na tho bolna nhi chaiye !!!

Vb: I tell u !!!

J: or vese bhi humare agle mahine se college start hai !! hume bhoth sari taiyaariya karni hai tho plz bhar jaiye !!

Vb: j bhai hum tumahre bhai hai '. Bhai ko bhai se alag karna chati ho !!!

J (wid puppy face): vb ab tho mujhe bhai mat bulaiye !!

Vb: tho kya chudail bulaye !!!

J: vb I kill u !!

Vb run outside'..!!

'''''''''''''''xxx'''''''..xxx''''''

Choti kya plan hai !!!

Plan murder karne ka !!!

Choti tumne kab se underworld join kar liya ?

Dada !!! plz don' teas me

Choti hum mazak kar rhe hai !!!

He huged her !!!

Duniya mai pheli ladki hai tu jize mai ek ghante se zyada jhel sakta hu !!!

Vo tho mai hu !!!

She huged him back '

Hey guyz that it plz tell me howz it ' n do comment n like also !!!

kritz...😳😳😳

awesome
thanks for the pm
please update asap

Bahut accha hai kamini lagi reh..

nice. Concept kritika.
But i want to tell you something Don't feel offended.
Firstly you are supposed to write Allah with capital A and secondly the correct spelling are ALLAH. Please make sure you spell correct next time as it brings change in meaning. I am not offending u but guiding u as you Don't know. Okay :)
btw it is very nice and unique concept. Do PM me.

Originally posted by: -Zina-

nice. Concept kritika.
But i want to tell you something Don't feel offended.
Firstly you are supposed to write Allah with capital A and secondly the correct spelling are ALLAH. Please make sure you spell correct next time as it brings change in meaning. I am not offending u but guiding u as you Don't know. Okay :)
btw it is very nice and unique concept. Do PM me.

thanx yr seriously mujhe NHI ptha tha bthane ke liye !!! thanx meri jaan !! kk i will pm u !! muuuaaa 😳😳😳

Originally posted by: humairaa1

Hey Kritz, how u?
Very nice concept
Loved the idea 😊

i m gud 😊😊
thanx alot !!
again thanqu 😃😃

Originally posted by: anushruthi

Nice concept

do cont soon and Pm me if possible

thanx alot i will pm u plz can u accept my frnd request !! 😃😳

Originally posted by: huma12.

Awsssmmm prolouge kritzzx

thanx alot huma