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sanah12

@sanah12

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#471

Amazing update!
Loved it loads!
Loved manveer convo!
I really liked that part where manyata was like did the thugs hit him a lot that his not in his senses. Hehe it was funny.
Poor kabir I feel sorry for him.
Uday shouldn't have done that.
The promo is something
Can't wait to see how manyata will behave with uday.
It was very well written
Do continue asap
Thnx 4 the pm!

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panchaali

@panchaali

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#472

Very nice update Vibha 😃

Each and every line is cute and real 😳

Uff manveer mein dooriyan hain par woh dooriyan vhi meetha lagta hain tumare iss SS mein Vibha

Sooo sweeet chooo chuite..

Each and every line has life...

That's why this SS draws me closer..😊

And I know jo bhi misunderstanding hoga jald hi thik ho jayega

This is a happy go lucky SS

Please don't make it tragic

P.S:- I finally managed to learn few Hindi due to my new office, because most doesn't know English and Bengali 😕

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pia

@pia.raha

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#473

feeling reallly bad fr kabir,he was doing everythng fr mnyta!!! blooywood scenes,i really like😉😉 starry night and 2 people very romanticc!!!! loved the part whre mnyata thght dat uday ke saaar par chot lagi hai😆😆 precap,finally mnyata gt to know abt the truth!!!

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zainab

@--Zinay--

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#474

That was a very cute update. loved it, Udayveer's inner feelings are true, but why does she not gives him a chance. :-(

I hope they become friends at least. vibha can you please please give a romantic update too? please. :-D

update ASAP & thanks 4 the pm. <3

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angleroops

@angleroops

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#475

hey pls update this ss

and i m writting a ss

pyaar ke ek kahani

if u r free do read

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Vibha Bangalore

@..IshqShava..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#476

Originally posted by: Anam Ali
I'm first to comment yay
Amazing Update Vibha you write with so much depth and detail
Manveer scenes were nice and Manveer became friends it was short lived Manyata will know the truth about Kabir being in jail now she will be very angry with Uday

Cont Soon

awww...Thank you so much for the appreciation di...🤗
i'll update in few min😃

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Vibha Bangalore

@..IshqShava..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#477

Originally posted by: Karkit
Nice update...
Manveer scen cute
poor kabir trap uday plan n tanya ws gud girl she help kabir
uday n manyata nw frends bt promo i think manyata knw about kabir n she blem uday fr his condition...
Love it...
Continue soon

Thanks Shruthi😃

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Vibha Bangalore

@..IshqShava..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#478

Originally posted by: ...anju...
nice update vibha.
interesting promo.
continue soon.

Thank you so much Anju😃

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Vibha Bangalore

@..IshqShava..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#479

Originally posted by: pari_pooja
hey!
awesome update dear
manveer scenes were nice,
& interesting precap
please do update next part soon
& thanks for the pm

Thanks Pari😃