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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome OS Hina 👏. U write suspense very well 😃. For a moment there , I thought .. Uday shot Manyata because she let him down and accepted the proposal from Aryan. But it was not so , and I'm very pleased about that!! Loved it Dear 😳, ... thanx 4 the PM😊.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Another beautiful os from u, hina.
Hats of to u.
I thought it was manyata who was killed. But i am happy it wasnt so.
Do write more os
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
~res~
*edited*
omg its awesome bf reminded me of my school n college days btw who was my crush 🤔 🤣
hahaha i loved the part aryan jumped from bridge 🤣 good job bf☺️
titel is good 😳 no need to worry u did a great job 😎
luv ur OS looking forward for more n more 😳
👏 👏 👏

🤗
Edited by mrs_kapoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
😊Awesome, awesome, awesome awesome!
Loved it to the core!
Manveer are such adorable!
Sad for that girl who died.
Really happy that aryan committed suicide.
Do write more os.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: annesha18

yes first to comment 🥳 you are 1st to comment 😆
it was awesome
loved it
Thank you
awn it was really the other way around
Indeed it was😆
felt bad for the innocent girl
me too😭
woa aryaan died
koi shaq😉
awesome




Thank you so much Annie🤗

Originally posted by: htgcute

Well it is jus awesome...



Thank you Harshita😃
Edited by -DEATHmusic- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: ...anju...

minblowing os dear.loved it loads Thanks

at first i thought d girl shot was
manyata.den found dat it was not her.den i was relieved. My intention was to make the reader feel so. Now I can take sigh of relief.😆

loved d way how manveer confess
their love. Thanks again😃

hehehe.aryan commited suicide.
got d pinishment for wat he did. He deserved much more cruel dead 😡

last part was pretty and cute.

now tell wen r u going to update
ur ss.please do it super fast. I'm writting another OS now. SO I guess the update'll take time.

thanks for writing such a beautiful
ss.and thanxs for pm Welcome😊

Thanks for the wonderful comment anju
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: catty2000

Nice OS !

Loved it 😳 Thank you !!
I liked their first adventurous date 😆 I'm glad😃
But felt sorry for the poor girl ! Yeah she didn't deserve it.
I liked the ending of Aaryan committing suicide ! He deserved it

Thanks for the PM !



Thank you for the comment Vidhi😃

Originally posted by: prernakhandelwa

awesome os...i really loved it...nd thanx for pm...



Thank you so much. Glad you liked it.😛

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

awww that was so awesome... Thanks
poor girl... Yeah!!
loved the manveer bond... Manveer are always fab😳
awesome os



Thanks Mahi🤗



Thanks Huma
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18


😃😃😃😃😃😃


Thanks Bhumi😊

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi



Great OS Hina..👏👏.very cute and sad that a girl died..the best part was Aryan committed suicide😆

My best part is same as your😆 Thanks Gargi di.

Originally posted by: serat

awesome os
loved it!!!!!!!!

Thank you😛

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Awesome OS Hina 👏. U write suspense very well 😃. Thanks Navi mom😳 For a moment there , I thought .. Uday shot Manyata because she let him down and accepted the proposal from Aryan . I wanted the readers to feel so😆 But it was not so , and I'm very pleased about that!! Me too😃 Loved it Dear 😳, ... thanx 4 the PM😊 No problem mom.

Thanks for the awesome comment mom🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: andy.a

Another beautiful os from u, hina.
Hats of to u. Thanks uncle.
I thought it was manyata who was killed. But i am happy it wasnt so.I am glad to know that😃
Do write more os I am writing one now but I don't think people will like it

Thank you so much uncle😃

Originally posted by: sanah12

😊Awesome, awesome, awesome awesome! Thanks,thanks,thanks thanks!😆

Loved it to the core!
Manveer are such adorable! Yes,they are!!
Sad for that girl who died. I too feel the same.
Really happy that aryan committed suicide. Me too
Do write more os. Yeah I will.
Thanks for the pm. Welcome😃


Thanks for the comment Yasmeen🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: -Zina-

res, I'll edit for sure😳

Do that fast😆



ek kaam kar aalsi..jaake mere scrapbook open kar..aur wahase jo comment likha hai..copy paste kar🤣

hayye my gf☺️🤣
Edited by -DEATHmusic- - 12 years ago

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