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Posted: 11 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: humairaa1

Hey di

hey
How u? 😊
im fine what about u?
So glad u updated, missed ur updates
thank u dear
Flashback was sweet
glad u liked it
Loved how Uday ran after Manyata
lol even i did
Wonder what Uday did in his past that Manyata hates him
hmm well both hates each other and to know what happened u need to read the next part
Or does Manyata have a big misunderstanding 😕
maybe she does
I hope Pia gets well soon, so we can find out what actually happened in the party
Love the update ⭐️
thanks even i hope she gets better
Thanks for the pm 😊
ur welcome
Plz update soon 😃, waiting eagerly for next update

will update in a bit and thank u so much for the comment

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Posted: 11 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: prernakhandelwa

superb update...and thanks for pm...

thank u so much for the comment glad u liked the update and ur welcome for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: nityatandon

Hey... Preya...

hey
Thank god that you updated...
lool i know i take ages to update sometimes
Actually thank you...
ur welcome
The update was very nice...
thank u
Tha flashbacks are really helping a lot...
To understand the story...
thank god im happy they r helping
Awww... I feel really bad for Pia...
even i do
I am waiting for the next update...
updating in a bit
Thanx for the PM...
ur welcome... and thanks for commenting


PS: Please update you other ff forever and always also...

already updated that few days ago hope u liked the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: ...anju...

NICE UPDATE PREYA

CONTINUE SOON.


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Posted: 11 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: janeniroopa

the only reason I'm still visiting IF is Manveer:') and ur ff is awesome <3 it😃

yep even that y i keep coming on if... thanks glad u liked it and thanks for the comment
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
thanks glad u liked it and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: serat

yaar

plzzz
contiune
update
plzzz


updating in a bit
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Hey , I just read all 4 parts now ... and I think the story is amazing👏. Great job👍🏼. Please update soon.


hey navina thank u glad u liked the story... thank u will update soon and thanks for the comment
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Komal: manyata beta we have something to say to u

Manyata: ji maa

Mrinalani: beta the thing is giriraj and vasu came here with a proposal

Manyata: what type of proposal dadi

Mrinalani: beta when vasu saw u for the first time she instantly liked u and thinks ur the best for uday' manayata was getting a little nervous

Manyata: dadi r u trying to say that' she left her sentence hanging

Mrinalani: yes beta vasu asked for ur hand for her son uday' DO U ACCEPT THIS PROPSAL AND AGREE TO MARRY UDAY' asked dadi but manyata just looked on and without saying anything went to her room only Mrinanli last word echoed in her ear (the one in caps)

Komal and mrinalani didn't go and see manyata as they knew she needs some time to decide... It was evening time and brij and and vijay had cane back home from office while j was still on her way... Meanwhile in brij and Komal room... Komal was sitting on the bed holding brijraj Kurta pajama in her hand

Komal: brij

Brij: yes Komal he said taking of his tie and looking at Komal through the mirror

Komal: brij we spoke to manyata about the proposal... Brij turned around and went and sat next to Komal

Brij: what did she say

Komal: she didn't say anything just went to her room after we told her and didn't come out till now but we should give her some time to decide

Brij: let's just hope for the best

Manyata was still in her room standing near the window...thinking that how can she marry the guy who is the cause of pia's condition... She was really Angry and didn't know that a happy j rushed into her room and hugged her

J: omg didu dadi just told me that Vasu aunty sent a marriage proposal for u... didu u know uday bhaiya is just so sweet and I'm sure he will keep u so happy... Plus u know I was about to lose a big contract today but because he knew that person I got that contract he is so nice .. Im happy my car broke down today and I met uday bhaiya on the way and told him about that client u know he just dropped me and left... Before j could continue manyata took out her anger on j

Manyata: SHUT UP J JUST SHUT UP .. UDAY THIS UDAY THAT...JUST BECAUSE UDAY GOT U ONE CONTRACT U R JUST KEEP ON GOING ON ABOUT IT... AND IT HAS ONLY BEEN A FEW DAYS SINCE U MET HIM AND U ALREADY THINK HE IS NICE... Manyata stopped speaking when she saw the tears in her sisters eyes and realised she made a mistake by taking her anger out on j before manyata could say anything

J: sorry didu I thought I could share this with u... But all I don't understand is what problem do u have with uday bhaiya... This was all j said and she left the room... J who was walking to her room got stopped by vijay

Vijay: hey my annoying sister where r u going and did u tell manyata about u getting the biggest deal


J: I did vijay bhai but she started to shout at me... (J narrated what manyata said to her) once j finished she wiped the small tear that was about to come out... Vijay bhai I always tell dedu everything but she has never reacted like this... Vijay put his hands on j's shoulder

Vijay: don't worry my lovely j bhai... I'm sure manyata was tensed about something and she took the anger out on u...u get changed and we will meet at the breakfast table but don't tell anyone about what happened ok... J nodded while vijay walked to manyata room angrily...

He knocked and then opened the door he saw manyata standing near the window resting her head on the wall with her arms folded

Vijay: what is wrong with u manyata he said angrily... Manyata startled when she heard vijay speaking and turned around to find an angry vijay looking at her ... She walked towards him confused by his question

Manyata: what happened vijay bhai y r u angry

Vijay: shouldn't I be asking u that manyata... Y did u get angry on j

Manyata: vijay bhai I was worried about something and j was keep in going on and on and on and in that I lost my anger she said lying

Vijay: oh please manyata j exactly told me what she told u and what u said in return... Seriously manyata what problem do u have with uday... Infant what is going on between u too and this time I want an answer and an honest answer... But for now let's go down but after dinner I want to see u on the terrace without any excuse is that clear... Vijay said in a serious tone while manyata nodded...vijay stormed out of the room while manyata followed him after a little while...

Everyone was sitting on the dining table while vijay and manyata walked...manyata looked at j who didn't look at her and she knew her sister was hurt because manyata has never shouted at j like this... She always scold j but lovingly... All were having their dinner when brij asked a question

Brij: manyata beta what did u think about the proposal but before manyata could answer vijay spoke

Vijay: dad don't u think its a bit too early to ask I mean let manyata and uday get to now each other and after that we can see what they have decided

Komal: vijay is right brij let them have time to think because marriage is not a joke

Brij : I guess u r right plus giri still needs to ask uday and said he will let me know uday's decision soon... Finally all had finished their dinner and went to their own Erin while vijay and manyata headed towards the terrace once reaching towards the terrace manyata spoke

Manyata: thanks vijay bhai I didn't know what to tell dad when he asked for my decision but u saved me

Vijay: manyata I want to know the truth about u and uday and that also now so start please

Manyata moved turned her back from him and started to tell him about her and pia and how they met uday and how they became friends ( manyata tells vijay about the past which i mentioned in the other parts the rest of the past will be continued In this part)

Vijay: so u and uday knew each other so then what actually went wrong and about pia i completely forgot where is she manyata

Manyata: she is in coma vijay bhai and about what wrong between me and uday is that and she started to tell about the past

Flashback scene

As time passed manveer had become good friends manyata was about to finish her first year while uday was about to finish his second year... Uday and his friend had organised a party as everyone was going to move into a new year of uni so they wanted to celebrate it

Pia: god manyata I can't wait for the party it's going to be so fun I even chose our dress see look

Manyata: wow pia this looks so lovely yaar... After few hours pia and manyata got ready and headed towards the party which was located at their uni in a big sports hall uday was with his friends ... While all the other students were coming... Uday turned his attention towards the entrance casually when he saw manyata and pia walking in...for a moment he couldn't take his eyes from manyata but came out of his staring session when pia waved her hands in front of him

Pia:hey supercool what were u thinking about

Uday: nothing pia by the way u two are looking beautiful

Pia: aww thanks... First pia hugged him and the manyata hugged him... After a while one of udays friend rajveer bought a drink for all of them and after taking their drinks they headed towards the dance floor. And the song that started to play was party on my mind (from race 2) all the students were enjoying' suddenly manyata received a call and she went outside to answer it because of the loud music

Manyata: pia I will go and answer the phone pia nodded and continued with her dance.

Once reaching to a quite area she answered the phone but nobody was answering after not getting any reply she hung up and went back to the party only to find that pia was not there she searched the whole sports area but there was no sign of pia she thought she could ask uday but there was also no sign of him too' she went out and started to search the whole corridors when she heard pia shouting udays name' she ran and found pia in a room who was on the floor and was bleeding on the back of her head and her dress sleeves were ripped' manyata rushed towards pia and cuddled her in her arms

Manyata: pia' pia who did this to u pia '. Answer me pia what happened ' pia wake answer me she said crying out loudly'. And was trying to listen to a semi-conscious pia who was trying to say something

Pia: ma' manu'I ' got 'rap' Raped ' and 'ud..ud'uday' he' he ..tri' tried to' and with that pia lost conscious' manyata tried to register pia word and put it together and all she got was "I got raped'uday he tried to" suddenly manyata found a watch laying near pia she picked it up and tried to register who it belonged to only to remember that she had seen it on uday's wrist'.. manyata got angry she remembered pia's word' and now the watch she couldn't believe he would do something like this but right now she had to take pia to the hospital ' manyata came out of her thoughts and ran outside to call the driver as she didn't want anyone to know about pia's state yet' the driver and manyata rushed in and placed pia in the car and took her in the hospital' manyata was waiting outside and she saw udays call on her phone but she kept on ignoring it' after few hours the doctor came out who had a gloomy look

Doctor: im sorry but the patient has slipped in to coma because of the head injury' manyata went numb she didn't know what to do her pia was in coma' pia was the one who talked a lot and now she will no longer talk and she blamed only one person for it' the next day she reached to uni and went to a class room as she knew that this time uday and his friends are alone in that class' she walked in and looked at uday with rage' uday who saw manyata got up and walked towards her

Uday: manyata where were u last night I kept calling u but u never answered the security guard told me that he saw u go out with pia in the car' u know yesterday I saw pia in a room ' but before he could continue manyata slapped him on his cheeks' udays friend looked shocked while some students who were standing outside saw the scene and was also shocked

Manyata: enough uday stop ur drama' don't pretend to care about pia after what u did to her

Uday: manyata what the hell r u saying I didn't do anything to pia (only uday and manyata know what state pia was in)

Manyata: oh really that y ur watch was in that room right uday she said throwing the watch on his chest' uday was getting angry coz manyata was blaming him for something he didn't do'

Uday: manyata do u know what ur blaming me for he said gritting his teeth

Manyata: of course I do uday coz pia mentioned ur name' plus ur watch was found next to her and also u know what state she was in' before losing conscious pia said she got raped uday and only u were in that room because that watch was there but I know nobody will believe me coz there is no proof except ur watch which is of no use' ur so disgusting uday I never knew u were that despo

Uday: ENOUGH MANYATA JUST ENOUGH U CANT ACCUSE ME JUST LIKE THAT' uday was about to continue when he heard whispering sound' and he turned towards the door to see many people standing there looking at them' he couldn't take this insult as people everyone was talking about them

Manyata: I hate u uday I just hate u I will never forgive for what u did to pia and with that she left'

After that day she didn't see uday as she decide to shift back to india and transfer pia to a hospital in india' she informed pia's dad who was heartbroken but she didn't mention about uday because she no proof against him all she had told him that pia mentioned that she got raped and because of the head injury she slipped into coma'

End of flashback

Manyata: and look now after three years I see him in front of me and also our families wants us to get married she said turning around to see vijay looking at her shockingly

Vijay: cant believe pia got raped' but manyata uday doesn't seem to be a person who would take disadvantage of any girls body' he doesn't seem to be that type of guy

Manyata: then what about what pia was trying to tell me vijay bhai was that all a lie' what about his watch which was near pia what about that vijay bhai' when I was searching for pia I heard her shout uday's name but when I reached there he was not there at all only his watch was there

Vijay: manyata I told u what I think but all I can say is I hope that pia recovers soon so that we know exactly what happened

Manyata: but vijay bhai uday is the one

Vijay: manyata u never know anything could have happened but for now we wont let anyone know about this k lets go now and haan do apologise to j as u know she is very upset as u shouted at her' manyata nodded and both headed down manyata went to jai's room as she knew her sister would be awake she knocked but j didn't answer

Manyata: j please open the door please' after a few minutes j allowed manyata in but didn't speak to her.. j im sorry I know I shouldn't have shouted at u like this but I lost control im really sorry,,, but she got no reply' nandu im sorry u know I have never got angry like this on u before but I promise I wont do anything like this but in case if I do then u just give me ur warm hug and im sure my anger will vanish' but j was stubborn as her' manyata stood in front of j and held her ears' look im holding my ears now forgive me,,, this time j looked at manyata and gave her a small smile

J: its k dedu but next time don't get angry please

Manyata: I promise I wont.

Precap: manyata: what the hell uday let go of me

Uday: what so hurry manyata after all in ur words im a despo man right' he said with a smirk but after a cold look appeared on his face

Manyata: you have no right to come close to me

Uday: I do manyata I do

Ok guys that's it for now thank u so much for the previous comments read all of them and they really motivate me to continue for the next part thank u also to those who pressed the like button'. I hope u like this part' do leave ur comments as I will be waiting to read them and don't forget to press the like button

Sorry for any spelling or grammar mistakes

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Edited by preya_radev - 11 years ago

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