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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: snowdream


vgkantu, Nashia, krittika89, alina.mahar, priyamvika11, nxaa, Sunsnow, aathiraa, chocohollic,

Thankyou all the above mentioned people... And also i would like to inform u all that with 2-3 chapters i'll end it as this SS take my brain in writing and the result is never satisfying me..Perhaps i had more expectation from this SS... So to satisfy myself iam gonna to end it...so sorry to all my loyal readers..You all have been good readers and i truly respect u all😊




as per ur wish jijiii 😕😕😕
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: snowdream


... And also i would like to inform u all that with 2-3 chapters i'll end it as this SS take my brain in writing and the result is never satisfying me..


Krishna , I respect your decision and am grateful and u will end it appropriately -
... but ; for the sake of those loyal readers that followed this story from the very beginning and who love this ss more than anything else😳 ...
can u make it ; 3 LONG CHAPTERS😃?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...


Krishna , I respect your decision and am grateful and u will end it appropriately -
... but ; for the sake of those loyal readers that followed this story from the very beginning and who love this ss more than anything else😳 ...
can u make it ; 3 LONG CHAPTERS😃?

do u really think navi by 3 long chapters i can end it properly...its a mess...will end it as much as i can😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: snowdream

do u really think navi by 3 long chapters i can end it properly...its a mess...will end it as much as i can😊

U can end it perfectly Embarrassed , WE HAVE FULL FAITH IN YOU !!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

U can end it perfectly 😳 , WE HAVE FULL FAITH IN YOU !!!!!

ya hopefully...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 30



I sense your presence whenever u r near


Because u live in my heart but u seldom realised.


The course of wind is changing and that is disturbing me like anything. Iam fully restless. I can feel her presence near me..Yes she is near, her aroma, her feeling is all coming to me. Its said your eyes always meets the one whom it wants ..And if thats true then Manyata is the beginning and end of my wants. I was sensing her feeling her all these time since I realised my love for her.


My car stood on a traffic signal and my eyes wandered in search of her...All of a sudden a chill ran down my spine..A black figure, yes its she in that black full sleeve shirt and jeans...Yes its her ..it is...


.A goggles covered her beautiful eyes...Her hairs as usual so shiny and beautiful...Those brownies danced with the coarse of wind catching attention..She carried a hand bag on her hands and was about to enter her hair..But there is something a sort of change, but what,..


My eyes searched to spot it and finally it was caught..Yes her chest had groomed..Its a bit heavy than before but then it suits my wife..


Shit Uday what r u doing man,.you are explaining ur wife as though she is a new rose in your garden..No Uday she is ur rose so just go to her.. u need to have a talk . You have a lot to hear and say...just rush...my inner voice ordered...


..I didn't realised when I was out my car and it almost touched the rushy road but then I was taken aback by a sudden push , just to realise my position...I was about to cross a rushy road and that too when signal was on..Poor Albert my personal assistant took my destiny and he is there down at road with bleeding head .


He needed a doctor but then Manyata I can't let her go like that..I need to talk...Before I could decide or move she boarded the car, and the taxi moved ahead fastly leaving behind me...I viewed her from a distance but then soon I was pushed by some1 to the car where albert was lying senseless. The driver without waiting for my order rushed to hospital..


But then on the way I was in my own world..I saw 2 more people with Manyata.. One was young lady of J's height, but iam sure its not her, as she was practically thin and also her hair was blond short up to shoulders. And another a middle aged women carring something perhaps a baby...Who were they..Was it Manyata ya its just like my usual imagination where I imaginate Manyata whenever I wishes to have her near...


I looked at Albert who was near me and for a second I felt like killing him..How much a fool he is..ya I know he wanted to protect me but meeting her was the need of my soul..She is that burning part of mine which hurted me all these days.. Only she can soothe me..


Albert man I hate you for this but then poor man he was in pain perhaps..and also I felt her elbow too bleeding...Poor guy...i had sympathy but then Manyata..


Oh god...what will I do now.. I need to make sure that if iam right in seeing her but how...

Soon we reached hospital and I accompanied him in stretcher..


Doctor took him to ICU while I just waited outside..My mind was blank because her face was haunting me..None has heard about Manyata and J since then..Today all of a sudden I met Manyata but not J..Wait iam not sure if its Manyata or not too...oh god...


Soon disturbing my brain a baby's cry reached my ears...Urghhh can't this baby's mother shut his mouth. Here iam worried and this cry is now pinching me...My face was reddened in irritation...


Finally it was enough for Uday and he reached to the baby to shout at the incapable mother..


But then seeing those pearls down his eyes his heart melted like anything..The baby he was crying for someone and his hands was pointing to the scan room perhaps..Perhaps his mom is inside ..The women carrying him is a bit older to be mother of the child..


Meanwhile Briganza was having tough time with baby..He was not at all shutting his mouth even after many a trial..She tried keeping nibble so as to shut him..But he was in his worst mood and blowed it off every now and then...


Baba please don't cry.See your mom will be back fast. She is just near baccha pls...she tried to pacify


But he seldom listened to Briganza and went on crying...


Each droplets from his eyes was pricking his heart and he couldn't see the baby crying..


Hunh Excuse me mam why is the baby crying...He asked politely but with a wimping heart..


Hunh ya his mom is ri8 inside the scan room and iam his care taker...

Perhaps he is hungry...i spoke with a try to make him silent...

Ya mi8 be ...she replied plainly


Mmm if u don't mind can I take the baby...hunh what if he calms down then, he is crying so badly and I fear he mi8 end up in hurting himself of he cries like this. i tried to impress her


Briganza at first didn't liked the idea of handing over the baby but then his concern for the baby melted her. And also baby leaned a bit to the guy..


Seeing it a smile came up to Uday's lips all of a sudden and he took the baby off to his hands all lovingly..


He lifted him slowly and gesturing his happiness baby calmed a bit..


Hey champ why do u cry like that..Don't u know these tiny pearls from your eyes will hurt ur mom-dad.. You are a good boy ri8...Uday kissed the baby's forehead all lovingly..


Unknowingly he was getting a bit affectionate to the boy...He felt an unknown bondage ...and couldn't help but kiss the baby's face...


Soon the baby was fine and started playing with Uday's shirt and scarf...


Briganza was surprised by his affection to a stranger when he is so stubborn in many things.


Ahh pardon sir can I just go n inform his mom...perhaps u were ri8 he is hungry...


Ya but I think he is enjoying in my hands so can I be with him outside,..Briganza gave a confused look and Uday who got it continued...don't worry I won't elope with him, the hospital is well covered with security..


Both Briganza and Uday smiled at the statement and she marched in to the scan room leaving behind baby with Uday...


Ahhh whats his name...Uday asked briganza who by then entered the scan room not hearing him..


Hey champ do u mind me knowing ur name...He asked the baby all lovingly and he giggled in return Just then he noticed the baby bag Briganza was holding b4 which was now kept in the chair outside.


It had an airway tag in it...Perhaps his family came here just today (Uday concluded) . The tag did mentioned baby's name which Uday read out ...Anshul Kapoor ...he whispered with a bit of shock and pain...For a moment her face flashed to him...while the baby leaned closer to Uday by the time and rested his small head at his chest. A unknown pleasure came to Uday and he kissed the baby lovingly all over his face...


He felt a special protection for the baby..and hence let him comfortable at his chest and patted his back driving him to sleep..


Within seconds briganza came out and saw baby sleeping peacefully in the stranger's arms..


Hunh can I take him she asked politely and without waiting the women took the baby to her arms...thereby woking him...


She was about to leave that Uday stopped her...mam where's the baby's mother..


Briganza smiled at the stranger's care and replied with a smile..Ya they r out through the other door out there...and thanks for taking care of anshu baba..


Uday smiled weakly ..btw anshul kapoor its a pretty name..


Thankyou briganza replied...Uday took his hands and kissed him once finally..Briganza started moving but then anshul went on looking at Uday with a cute smile. Yes he was asking Uday to accompany perhaps...


When the baby was moving away Uday felt a very weird feeling of some1 taking away his heart...His eyes became moist soon...and something drived him to follow him...


He was about to that Albert's doctor came out to say a word about Albert.In front of his eyes they moved away..


Uday waited for the doctor to finish off and once it done he rushed to check on the baby but couldn't find him but then he saw some1 else...yes his Manyata there she was moving out of the hospital.. He saw her clearly this time though she didn't..In front of his eyes she moved away and got vanished once again all of a sudden...perhaps destiny didn't wanted them to meet...


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One the way back J leaned to Manyata's shoulders while Mnayata caressed her head...


Jiji what if my report...


Wihout letting her complete manyata jerked her..It will be fine J it will be understand...


J well aware of his sister's anger shut her mouth and looked out at crowd forgetting everything...


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Bro do u really think u must go to mumbai...rahul asked Rajat all seriously...


Yes Rahul i think u are asking the 5th time...i need to go bro..i need to...you know unknowingly i did a crime..Uncle Brij and Aunty Komal loved me like their own son and still i hid this very truth about their daughter..ya they had full right to know about J her illness but then Manyata and J, theit stubbornness stopped me..j even threatened to cancel her treatment if ever a third person was aware of this..I had to bow my head in front of her then but now never more..I know iam still in her promise but i'll bring them here taking advantage of my marriage where they will get to know these truths all themselves...


But bro...


Don't worry J-Manyata will never get to know all these...I know if they get to know they will cancel themselves from our family list...


Rajat walked off leaving Rahul behind...


Do u know bro..i always thought how beautiful our life would have been if u got ur love...If manyata di was my bhabhi...Life would have been something else for sure but then...it all was a dream...,Now Mishika will be my bhabhi ahhh...ladkiyon ki time...J and she will together kill my brain...saheliyon ko kabhi ek saat ghar pe nahi rakhti...


Rahul apni ye bhakwaas bhand kar aur jaake so ja..kyunki ek baar meri puthar log aagayi teri neend chain sab udd jayega...Tanushree Garaiwal smiled with a evil smirk at her son...


Mom u know i doubt if they r ur original daughters


Just shut up rahul or else iam going to throw u out 2day...hunh Tanushree sighed at her son and left the room



To be continued...😃

Hope u enjoyed reading

and do hit like all active and silent members😊


Edited by snowdream - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey MOM...!!!

Howz u...???

Yayyy am first to comment theoretical as u said...

Well now cuming to the update...

Aww... loved the bonding between father and son...

Btw nice name of the son...

Hope to see all of them 2gether again soon...

Missing manveer...

And uday is so loving and caring...

And that albert he was so loyal to his boss...

I miss manveer mom...

Hope the bro duo gets successful in bringing manyata's family..

And rahul's dialog was a quite funny in the end...

All n all loved it mom..

Do continue soon..

Love you
Hugzzz...

Edited by htgcute - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
first to comment techinacally
i did not let my record break
hey jiji
you made my day or probably night by this update
awn uday is still so madly in love with manyata
so he finally saw manyata
the way he described was too good
she lost such a good guy'
aha a mkd dialogue it is not missed by me
ahh albert poor he
omg finally uday gets to hold his child
ahh the son and father scene was super cute
i hope jai is fine at the end
aha truth is going to be out
awesome
love you hugss
Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
update soon.

by d way krishna r u really going to end dis ss.
Edited by ...anju... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsssmmm jiji hope uday and all come to knw the reality soon
Edited by huma12. - 12 years ago

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