Angel of my life...updated - Page 4

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

Great OS Krishna..Loved it...Uday Manyata's personal butter😲😳...That was so cute!😳...the narrative style was cool and beautiful!...

Keep up the good work👏

Originally posted by: Chamakchallo30

one more superb piece of writing Sisu👏👏
you described it so perfectly😛
Manveer calling each other as 'Personal butter' was my favorite😃
and also where Manyata sleeps with Teddy and Uday slips into its place, that was so cute😛😛
omg they were apart for 5 years but all is well that ends well😛
i enjoyed reading it so much⭐️

Originally posted by: serat

yaar yeh bas yahi tak finish
is se aage contiune nahi hoga😔
😔😔😔

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Originally posted by: Sanarasheedroxx

Originally posted by: annesha18

unres
woa jiji awesoem os... Thanks dear
awnnn how badly i wanted to be in manyata shoes while reading this os.. lolz ...so do u want me to write a annuday OS😆
it is too good
I rushed up to the hallway not seeing her and bang...we both lost our balance and together went to the muddy floor,..She was beneath me ...loved the way manveer meet... One of my imaginary meeting sequence but never saw one
I had an urge to kiss her desperately but then would that be ri8 i questioned myself..What would she think of me...Should i take the initiative.
.uday and his naughty thought ... he would never change😆
but really got mad on him
after knowing made fun of manyata
loved the trial room scene
awn she still sleeps with teddy and he switching the place in bed was awesome.. childish😳
So some1 checked my lappy...But then i am happy that its read by my personal butter...so no worries and only joy
loved manyata mimcking uday awn so cute
so they lived happily ever after

Originally posted by: snowdream

Wow such a beautiful comment🤗