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Posted: 12 years ago



hello...manveerians🤗...see we r on time with the update to torture u all...😆..
*ducks down n covers my head* :P so all the chappals and tomatoes r welcome...😆here we go...and plz dont forget to give your feedbacks...either good or bad...love u all <3 <3 <3


manyata's house

jay-what r u doing jiji????lagta hai aj suraj purab se nahi pashchim se nikla hai...come out soon jiji...m waiting...we have to attend party tonight not tomorrow night

manyata-arey jay m coming in just 5 min ...u were not ready so I was doing my packing...just coming

jay enters manyata's room...

jay-OMG...jijiii so much of packing... r we going somewhere...wowww hum hum sach mein kahiin ghumne jana chahte the aur dekhiye apne humari wish poori kar di...u r too good jiji...

manyata-hum nahi sirf mai jay...I received an email from LONDON COLLEGE OF MEDIA & JOURNALISM confirming my admission there n I have to leave by tomorrow evening...I just checked the mail, I have not yet informed ma n papa also...will do in the morning

jay- what?????...r u jokinh jiji...oh no jiji...u r going so suddenly n what will I do...no no u r not going anywhere...ap kahiin nhi ja rahi n thats final...

manyata-oh come on jay,don't be sooo kiddish its a lifetime opportunity for me,I always wanted to do journalism from there n when I have got a chance today I will definitely grab it...n u can do your modelling as u always wanted...

now lets go everyone must be waiting for us...

manyata n jay descend down the stairs,manyata all happy n cheerful n jay all sad n gloomy...they sit in their audi n move to the party venue as rest of the family has already moved out...

uday nivas

dada dadaa...where r u ...oh m sooo happy...unnati is jumping all over the house all super excited...

till then shruthi ,akash n giriraj come out hearing all the shouting n screaming...n seeing unnati all happy n screaming...

shruthi shouts-what is all this unnati...behave youselves...ap bhul rahi hai ki ap bachchi nahi rahi aur usse jyada ap ek rajkumari hain to apni tehzib yad rakhiye...n by the way why r u howling like animals,may I know...

meanwhile uday comes out...n seeing shruthi shouting at his darling sister clenches his fist n his jaw tightened..he speaks...

Uday:- Bas Mrs Shruti, humare dad ki wife hone ke natte Aapko humari ghar ki laadli par is tarah Awaaz uthaneka koi haq nahi milta... Aap yeh maat bhuliye ki humare liye sirf Mrs. Shruti Singh hai.. naa hi humari Mom aur naa hi jaigarh ki Maharani.. So plz stay in ur limits.. Or else be ready to face my Wrath... And Mind u dis is d Last tym m telling u... Take it as a Final Warning...😡😡

shruthi stares at uday and unnati in anger but keeps shut knowing what is better for her n silently gulping all the insult in front of all servants n family members...while akash n giriraj r mere spectators of all the drama...

uday moves to unnati n wiping away her few tears...

uday-chhoti ap ek rajkumari...apko kabhi bhi kisi badtamizi bardasht karne ki jarurat nhi hai aur ye apke mote mote ansu apka sara foundation aur kajal baha denge so stop crying...now tell why were u calling everyone...

giving a slight smile,unnati starts...

unnati-vo dada actually just now my friend called me n told me that my application has been accepted n now I can complete my fashion designing from SOUTHAMPTON UNIVERSITY,UK n u know dada it has been my dream,,,,,,,,,wooowww...hum ab apna sapna pura kar sakenge

unnati's smile brightens up ,she also informs her family that she has her flight the next evening...

uday hugs unnati n wishes her luck for her upcoming journey...but rues that he cannot give a party for his kid sister as she has to leave the next day and there is no time left for the party...

unnati then hugs her father n half brother akash n goes to shruthi n mutters a faint sorry but shruthi just turns her face n moves away...

seeing this uday attempts to cheer up unnati n calls her to get ready soon as they have to leave for the party...while moving up uday announces that he too will leave for his university,US as his vacations r now over n not caring to answer anyone's queries,he moves into his room...

akash,giriraj,unnati n shruthi who was at her room's entrance move into their rooms after hearing from uday

party venue-MAHARAJ PRITHVIRAJ'S PALACE

brijraj-arey lo pari a gayi...kaha reh gayi thi ap beta,hum kab se apka intezar kar rahe hain...chalo go n meet others n enjoy the party...

suddenly there's an uproar outside n the media were going all crazy ...of course it marks the entry of prince uday veer singh in the party...he enters the party venue along with with his chhoti followed by his rest of the family...

uday whose mood is still off moves to the bar counter away from the crowd...

unnati comes to him.-dada let me take u to my best friend...

uday-no chhoti,its ok u enjoy the party ,I'll meet her later...

unnati-I know dada u r upset becoz of chhoti ma incident but its ok dada...come u need to have fun ,for me plllzzz...unnati holds his hand to take him into the party ...meanwhile the lights go out n the dj announces the guests to put up their masks for its time to dance with the unknown partners...

uday ,unnati ,mnyata,jay n all youngsters move on the dance floor...n the song plays

uday n manyata unknowingly move towards each other and hold their hands , looking into each other eyes all lost, they make their moves on the dance floor all lost in the beauty of each others eyes...uday takes in the jasmine smell coming from girl in his arms...

uday(selfthinking)-why does it feel sooo good to dance with this girl,who is she,I need to find out, it feels so good to be with her...udays grip on manyata's waist tightens sending shivers through her spine in anticipation and an unknown feeling...her hands grip on his shoulders tightens in anticipation scratching his shoulders n the musky smell from his aftershave n his cologne is drowning her in a frenzy n driving her crazzy

manyata(self thinking)-what is happening to me,I have never felt sooo...

uday n manyata r all lost in each others eyes n gradually their dance turns passionate with every move on various romantic numbers n their trance breaks with the loud sound of applauds n they realize that they were so lost in each other that they occupied the whole stage ruling out everyone else...

uday looks at others n smiles ,his eyes searching for those eyes to no result...

meanwhile manyata moves out after informing her father that she is tired so moving for home...

manyata in her room feeling uneasy looks at her waist,red bruises of the stranger's grips...all exhausted she changes n moves to her bed to forget him

uday returns home unable to find those eyes again n when he changes, he finds marks on his shoulders from that unknown girl...

uday(self thought)-kaun thi vo ladki jo mujhe yuraj udayver ko nishan dekar yun gayab ho gayi...she felt sooo good in my arms...n her smelll oooh...get a grip on yourself yuvraj ...u r drooling on a girl whose face also u have not seen...lekin kuch baat to thi un aankhon mein

next morning,manyata's house...

manyata wakes up forgetting the incidents from previous night n descends down to the breakfast table...

manyata-good morning papa...good morning everyone

vijay-good morning manyata bhai...ap finally a gayi hai , I have a good news to share...mujhe sanjeevani hospital mein practice karne ki permission mil gayi hai...

brijraj-arey wah vijay beta,congratulation n this good news calls for a party...hai na????

Manyata-congratulations vijay bhai par I cant attend the party bcoz I have to go to UK today evening as I received a mail confirming my admission there...

Komal-ye ap kya keh rahi ...aj achanak itni jaldi,apne pehle kyu nahi bataya...

Manyata-oh ma mujhe kal rat ko hi mail mila aur ap sab log party mein the...

Brij -thik hai beta ,hum apki flight book karwate hai lekin apne DS ko inform kiya kyunki vo to kal jaigarh se wapas ayengi aur agar ap unse mile bina jayengi to unhe achcha nahi lagega...

Manyata-arey nahi papa vo humne tickets book karwa li hai... ...aur DS ki chinta ap mat kijiye ,humari unse bat ho gayi hai aur unhone hume ashirwad bhi diya hai..waise where is jay...

Brijraj-Arey jay jas gone to some friends n from there she will go for some photo shoot...

Uday nivas

Unnati's room

Uday-unnati apki packing ho gayi???ye lijiye apki tickets...

Unnati -thanku dada.ha packing almost ho gayi...apko pata hai aj manyata bhi UK ja rahi hai

Uday -chalo achcha hai,aj hum apki friend se mil lenge,kal to mil nahi paye party mein...Chaliye aj hum apko apke favorite restaurant mein dinner ke liye le chalte hain...

Unnati -oh thanku dada...u r sooo good...I love u...

Unnti hugs uday n then they move out for dinner...

Manyata house

Brij-beta apka sara saman gadi mein rakh gaya...chaliye jaldi kijiye nahi to apki flight miss ho jayegi...apko pata hai wahan aryan bhi apko drop karne airport a rahe hain to ap unse bhi mil lijiyega ,waise vo apse naraj hain ki ap itne short notice par ja rahi hain

Manyata-arey ha papa...koi nahi hum bhai ko sambhal lenge...

Manyata n her family moves out in different cars to drop her at airport

AIRPORT

uday enters the airport (with his goggles on)...

unnati- oh no dada hum apna wallet to car mein hi bhul aye...

uday-chhoti ap bhi na,ap chaliye hum lekar ate hain,

uday moves to the entrance ,a small kid who was skating collides with manyata(she too has her goggles) who has just reached the airport making her stumble on uday who holds her protectively by her waist n both get lost in a trance admiring each others face...

manyata composes herself first,

manyata-oh hello mujhe choroge ya aise putla bankar khade rahoge,idiot...pata nahi kaha kaha ke majnu chale ate hain ..haan nahi toh...

uday -oh hello miss han nahi to ,tum kya khud ko miss airport samajhti ho sari beautiful girls ko chodkar mai tumhe pakdunga...instead of saying thanku for saving u from falling u r showing attitude...hell with u girls...

uday leaves the place smirking...leaving manyata all shocked with her mouth wide open n spitting out something like,meri flight nahi hoti to phir mai tujh jaise majnu ko achche se batati, haan nahi toh...meanwhile aryan and riddhima enter the airport and after exchanging pleasantries and hugs with the couple, manyata boards the flight to UK after giving a teary farewell to her family thus marking the beginning of a new phase in her life...on the other hand unnati too boards her flight to UK giving uday n her dad a heavy hearted farewell...

coincidentally manyata n unnati had their seats together so they had a nice journey... on reaching the airport both the girls move out for different ways promising to meet again...

*phew* I know i know too long an update n a total crap but I guess this one was needed to set the background of the story so that the story may move forward...plz bear with us...next update would be starting with a 3 years leap...😉 and its gonna be a passionate love hate story ,maybe dark too...😉


P.S-I would take upon the opportunity to thank my writing partner...she is very sweet and commendable...THANKU SONIA🤗


Edited by aksuji - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Writers note...

hello guys...love u all ...🤗

thanku for the likes n comments for previous chap...

we have edited manyata n uday's age...uday is 21 n manyata 19...plz check cs on page 6 if u have any confusions..

this chapter is a filler setting the
background for the story...
next chapter will start with...

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We wont tell so easily...😉
U all hve to Wait till the next update for tht..😆
Till Then keep Thinking...😃

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Plz do shower us with ur Likes + Wonderful comments..😳

Hope we didn't bore u guys much...
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Nimmi(aksuji)
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Edited by princessSonia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey... i hav started reading this ff now... and its really nice... pls pme me
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey nice update
i hope we get manveer meeting
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
@aksuji and sonu: kaha hai mera pm 😡🤣
@rockingal: res queen...sonu ki dost jo hai🤣
@rockingal nd sonu: kamini isse ct samajhkar champa ka shaadi majnu ke saath plan karrahe the tumlog

@writers: res...sonu aur rock ki jo dost hoo...pakka 1 haftemain edit kardungi😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW WOW just a fantabulous and superb update for sure... 👏

Plz... add me to ur pm list if possible... 😃
Edited by htgcute - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

loved it ❤️ .loved it ❤️ .

continue soon

luking forward to know wat twist

and turn story take after the leap of three years😃

Edited by anjuroopak - 12 years ago
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sorry for double post


Edited by anjuroopak - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -DEATHmusic-

@aksuji and sonu: kaha hai mera pm 😡🤣 same Q 🤣
@rockingal: res queen...sonu ki dost jo hai🤣 ha toh .. ussiki adate hai ye 🤣
@rockingal nd sonu: kamini isse ct samajhkar champa ka shaadi majnu ke saath plan karrahe the tumlog chup kar kamini... yahape kisiki shaadi ka plan nahi chal raha.. 😆 tujhe chahie toh tere shaadi ka plan karte hai 🤣

@writers: res...sonu aur rock ki jo dost hoo.. ha ab humlog pe naam mat daal... bdw tune prove kr diya tu sonu ki sabse acchi wali frnd hai 🤣 .pakka 1 haftemain edit kardungi😃 iska matlab ye commnt iss week me unres nahi hone wala 🤣

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Posted: 12 years ago


Sonu and aksuji ki tarafse...

Thank you for the wonderful comment 🤗🤣🤣🤣

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