(J of a Wife - BOOK 3) A FAMILY REUNITES - Page 97

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Posted: 12 years ago
Again superb updt ...
Jai watched the rest of the wedding very intently ; until a pair of eyes disturbed her concentration. From over Unnati's shoulder , Udita , continually stared at Jai. The child was some distance away , but Jai noticed Uday's eyes in her at once. She smiled at the baby ... but Udita turned away. When Jai went back to watching the wedding ; Udita repeated her act. Jai suddenly realised that the child was playing some sort of game with her. She moved back a bit , hiding her face behind Vijay's head and Udita raised her head and tilted it back & forth, searching for her new friend. When Jai waved at her ... she giggled out loud. I loved this part...hope J kamini sudhar gyi ho..warna Udita to hai hi J k band bjane k liye
I m so excited to red further.....

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: htgcute

Hey NAVI..!!!

Hi Harshi😊

HOWZ U...???
Fine (at the moment) ... how are you?

WELL LET ME START WITH THE CHAKAR PAKAR...

LOVED THE UPDATE AS USUAL...
Thank you 🤗

JAI BEING NICE IS REALLY GRT...
Hmmm, it's a pleasant change😳!

AND THE GAME BETWEEN UDITA AND JAY WAS SO CUTE IT MADE ME SMILE THANX...
I'm glad u thought it "cute"

OMG UDAY IS REALLY AN ANGRY YOUNG AND HANDSOME MAN...
Hmmm ... totally drool-worthy!

WONDER HOW WILL UNNATI AND VIJAY BHAI WILL BE 2GETHER BUT KNOW THAT U WIL MAKE THEM 2GETHER...
Really? U think I can take on Yuvraaj UdayVeer Singh?

DON'T KNOW WAT IS COMING UP WITH THIS STANLEY ANYWAYS NOT TO TALK ABOUT HIM...
But he's very important for a future track ... especially if you're hoping to get a BOOK5😉!!!

AND MANVEER SAILING GOSH THERE WILL BE VERY MUCH NAUGHTYNESS AND FUN...... and romance😳.

OKAY ENOUGH OF MY BORING YOU BYE FOR NOW...
U didn't bore me! Bye Dear.

PLZ.. CONTINUE SOON..
Yep , next Friday

HUGZZZ
& the same to u🤗

Loved the comment Harshi , thanks a lot 🤗 .
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nityatandon

Hey... It was super duper...

Thanks Nitya 🤗 .
Yaayy... I was correct... It was J...
Yep , congrats to u😃.
But thank god she din't created any drama...
Aww... it was so cute that J became gud...
Yep , it's time , she reformed.
And Udita was playing with her masi...
Because she's tired of her Buasa now 🤣!!!!
Ohh... god Uday really does'nt like Vijay...
Nope , he doesn't
How he was angry on Manyata..
But I luv this angry Uday too...
Me 2 😳.
Haww... Why book 4 will be the last one...
Because I don't want to bore anyone with continuing this story till forever.
U can write many more...
I can , in fact I have so many ideas that will definitely give us book 5 too.
Anyways... as u said it depends on the writter...
But in this case , the WRITER IS VERY CONFUSED😕.
But I have a request...
After finishing book 4... if u will not write book 5...
Then please try to write another story on manveer...
I have another ss on Manveer , but haven't updated it in ages.
I am insisiting u on this bcos I luv ur way of writing...
Awww thanks , that's such a sweet compliment.
And I am sure many more people also luv it...
The rest is ur decision...
That's a very difficult decision for me to make right now , but will consider your words!

Thank u Nitya , for this delightful comment🤗.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Loved the comment Harshi , thanks a lot 🤗 .

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Navina
Shocked to see "MY COMMENT"
well yeah, finally mujhme thodi sharam agayee n my inner voice slapped me with its hard words.
i am so so so sorryy...
this silly mistake will not be repeated again.
and please accept my apology dont be like : "its ok sanju, no probs"
i know u r very angry and disappointed with me.
DENY IF U WANT!!! cross ur heart. dont tell me wether u r angry n disappointed or no. just keep it to urself, but seriously, dont even try to tell me that u arent cross with me.
if i was in ur shoes i wud be definately disappointed n a bit bit bit angry also. this feeling might have occured to u fr a second, but surely it wud have crossed ur mind.
(i confess... sorry if it wud have hurt u, but it might happen. i dont know cuz abhi tak aisi situation nahi aayi)
i know i am tooo much nikkami, hopeless and shamless to handle, but i know, i have to get out of this skin sometime.
so at the end of this story, there needs to be a good and proper ending. it goes like:
Navina needs to give Sanjana/Pranoti a nice good and worth a punishment. which Navina cannot deny n neither Sanjana/Pranoti is in a mood of denying it. So, we request our dear dear Navina to give Sanju/Pranks a good punishment!! (The verdict is final. u have to give me a punishment)
WELL, now i think its high time that i turn towards the update...
IT WAS MINDBLOWING AS USUAL!!!
well i loved the small game between Udita and J. i am happy that Udita is not at all disliking J
becuz after all J is recovering and becoming a good girl. besides she is her massi
loved J giving Jaggat a nice kiss!! hope u will bring J back in the story soon! THE IMPROVED VERSION OF J
now to the suhaag raat!
nah navi, u ruined it all!!! it was all becoming so fairy tail-ish...
pch...😒 *puppy face*
well thats great that manyata is making things all right
feeling sad for unnati n vijay
but i know u will patch them up
and Uday's graciousness will never die out! so nice of him that he gave Cora an advanced payment! he has a very very very huge heart
hope stanley ka problem gets solved soon
and the honeymoon seems a too much rocking thing!!
but this is the worlds most unique honeymoon.
with the husband and wife, goes there child!!!( Udita is going na??)
yacht n stuff sounds and seems cool!
cant wait to know ahead!
and i am very sad that i couldnt contribute a like to ur fantastic collection of 61 likes!
i know navina, this comment is just faar tooo long to give a reply or quote. i know u prefer short sweet and to the point comments, but my stock of so many days was pilled up!
bare this with...
from urs silly hopeless friend:
Pranoti aka Sanjana
P.S.: Dont forget about punishment! please...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks Huma 🤗 .

Originally posted by: serat

wowww
raelly gooddd
wowww

Thanks Serat 🤗 .

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

hey Navi...ur FF always refreshes me, no matter how much stupidity Manyata shows😡...Her intelligent Husband and sweet n charming daughter is enough to keep me glued n smiling😆

Thanks Gargi 🤗 .
Thanx Shruthi 🤗 .
Thank u Sonali 🤗 .
Thanks Neha 🤗 .
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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic update...loved it...manveer marriage was fab...udita and jai scene was superb...why manyata brought vijay topic in between her weeding night...uday seriously don't like vijay...i hope he agreed...manveer coming back to india...
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Posted: 12 years ago
ossum ossum ossum
jst loved it to the core
next part will be fantastic
plzz do pm me plzz


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

Awesome chapter as usual Navi...Thanx Gargi 🤗 .


The chapter had some positive and some problematic parts.. Really? Which were "problematic"😕?

Positive part was J showing signs of progress and taking Manveer's wedding in a good note. But i still can't believe this when it comes to J...Somewhere i still feel she wants revenge from Manyata. Maybe , maybe NOT.May be thatswhy she went away before M could hug her n she was all the time looking at the floor. i found her pretentious.Confused Well , Jai is still receiving treatment ... so let's not read too much into these tiny matters. Anyways , I don't have the energy left in me to write about an EVIL Jai again🤢.

Why did Manyata had to spoil her suhaag raat by talking about Unnati n Vijay?😡😡...She thought that it was the best time , because Uday would be TOO BUSY to refuse her😉! Neither did she enjoy, nor she let us enjoy it😡...Awww , poor Gargi😆!! It will be fun to see Manyata convincing Uday 😳 U think she's gonna try again , especially after what happened?

What surprised me was that they are sailing back to India for their honeymoon, Ahhh , but that's only quarter of the honeymoon plan😈. where sailing will be definitely very very romantic, but going back to India...🤔...India is the EVENTUAL DESTINATION ... the honeymoon is on the way there☺️. i don't like the idea...as there is a BIG PROBLEM COMING UP😳 as you had told earlier... Yep , a huge problem ... have the tissues ready😭.

The story is getting inteersting n i just don't want you to end it..not even in Book 4 dear😛...Keep writing it...you are so imaginative...you will come up with grt ideas for sure😳 Thanks for the vote of confidence. I do have ideas that will surely get a 5th book out of me ... but I'm just SO TIRED NOWADAYS.

Loved the comment Gargi , thanks so much 🤗 .
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Posted: 12 years ago



😃😃HAI NAVI..😃😃.

MINDBLOWING UPDATE NAVI.LOVED EACH AND EVERY

PART OF D UPDATE👏👏.LOVED IT LOADS.


SO ITS J.SO HAPPY TO KNOW DAT SHE IS RECOVERING

N REFORMED.MAY J N JAGGAT TIE D KNOT.HAVE A DOUBT

Y DIDNT😲 SHE HUG MANYATA.


NOW MANVEER COMPLETED SAATH PHERAS.DEN UDAITA

MASSIS HID N SEEK GAME WAS SO CUTE😆.REALLY ENJOYED IT

.I THINK SHE IS BORES OF BUASA.


Y DIS MANYATA ACT AS A DUMP 😡😡AT TIMES.IF SHE DIDNT HAVE

ASK ABOUT UNATI-VB WE MIGHT HAVE GOT SOME ROMANCE.


AAAHA UDAY IN ANGRY MODE.😳😳UDAY DOESNT LIKE VB.MANYATA

HAD TO WORK HARD TO CONVINCE UDAY FOR

U-VB MARRIGE.I TELL U.

WAT IS DIS STANLEY CUKING.MAY B HE S GOING TO B REAL

THREATS 😕TO JAIGARH N DEVGARH.


DEN MANVEER WID UDAITA GOING FOR HONEYMOON DAT TOO

IN A YATCH. 😳SOUNDS INTERESTING NAVI😆.HOPE WE GET SOME

ROMANCE.☺️


ENJOYED D CHAPPY SO MUCH NAVI.😊EAGERLY WAITING FOR PROMO

PART.TRY TO CONTINUE SOON DEAR.




Edited by ...anju... - 12 years ago

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