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Posted: 12 years ago
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prologue
Manyata is sitting on her and uday's wedding bed...other side uday is getting restless for seeing manyata.But he cann't because of his friends...they donot allow him to go...but it is the limit.so he says to his friend,dekho i have to go to my princess.isselia ab age ki baat kal karang ge.his all friends understand that he is not going to stay here anylong so they say,ok.kaal miltay hai.And his friends leave.
Uday is going to his room and he reaches ,he take a deep breath and enters

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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
character sketch

Maharani manyata:she is the maharani af jaigardh...she is married with maharaj udayveer singh.she hates uday.

Maharaj udayveer singh:a handsome,dashing,cunning king.loves manyata a lot.

Yuvraj karanveer singh:yuvraj of raigardh.handsome,smart,cunning prince.cousin of uday.loves manyata very much.

Rajkumari unnati:very sweet princess.loves manyata and uday.sister of uday.

Yuvrani minakshi:she loves uday q lot and wants to marry him at any cost.
Rajkumar vijay:a very sweet guy.cousin of manyata.loves unnati.
Edited by subhakha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
very nice concept!!
continue soon & pm me if possible!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
very nice plzz updated soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5

Very interesting👍🏼, do continue soon.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
Nice Character sketch !
Continue soon !
Do PM me !
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
Nice start 👏
It's different ...waiting for ur update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start but when are u going to update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved the character sketch. Its a very nice concept. Eagerly waiting for the update so do continue soon and do pm if possible.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
chapter1
Uday enters his room and sees manyata is sleeping...uday is feeling hurt bcoz he wants to talk to her...he wants to prove that he is the right hubby for her..he can give her all the happiness which she deserves...but she is sleeping now.
he goes to near her...she is looking breath taking beautiful...seeing her,he smiles..he is thinking how lucky he is for having such a beautiful and lovely wife...he knows that she hates him..but he also knows that one day she will fall in love with him...

In the morning manyata wakes up ...she sees uday is sleeping beside her...seeing that she becomes sad..then she goes to washroom..
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ sorry for the short update...vo meri exm chalrahi hai...isse lia dari ho gaye...or chap vi choti ho gaye...and plz my spelling mistakes
Edited by subhakha - 12 years ago

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