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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashish.Holic

awsomee...update vibha
bhaigiri wala uday🤣
love it...
update soon
thanx for PM.



Thank you Sweta 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago


Kar rahi hoon half an hour me 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: humairaa1

Hey Vibha, sorry for the late comment
Now back to the ss
Loved the udate, its amazing 😊 🥳
Can't wait for the next chapter and thank you so much for the pm



Thank you Humaira 😃
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"Achcha, theek hai ab main chalti hoon'mujhe yahan aur nahi rehna..(im not gonna stay here, let me go)" she moved to the door.

"Sun, tu itni raat ko kahan jaayegi? Wapas marne ke liye?, nahi main tujhe aisa nahi karne doonga(Where would you go at this hour of the night? I won't let you go)" Uday tried to stop her and she ignored him.

His temper rose 100 degrees suddenly. The chit of a girl! How dare she refuse him!! He caught her arm and pulled her back. The force of it was so much she collided with his chest. He caught her and turned her so that she was facing him.

"meri baat maan ja, aur itni raat ko bahar mat jaa, ladki hai tu'yeh jagah insane roopi bhediyon se bhari hai( Listen to me you! Don't go out, this place is full of Wolves in guise of humans)" Veer said with clenched teeth, looking straight into her eyes in order to drive some sense into her brain. Udayveer!! Suddenly the memory sprang up in her mind. His anger was pretty much same! Same intensity!!

"agar maine baat nahi maani, toh mere saath zabardasti karoge (if I don't listen would you force me)?" uff..her voice came out as a whisper, not as fiercely as she had intended to.

Alas! She was still wrapped up in his arms..The arms that were tanned and all muscular'the body that was strong..and the male odor'STOP MANYATA!! YOU ARE JUST TOO MUCH..YOU ARE NOTICING THESE THINGS WHEN YOU ARE SUPPOSED TO BE GRIEVING FOR A LOSS'she yelled at herself mentally..

"Zabardasti karni padegi'ladkiyon ke bheje me ek baar me baat ghusti kaha hai (I have to force you, because a girl wouldn't get a thing at once)?" Veer said.

She came out of his grasp and sat on the bed. "Theek hai, aaj ki raat main yahaan rukoongi'par subah hote hi chali jaaoongi" she warned him.

"theek hai theek hai, apun tere liye kuch khane ka bandobast karta hai(I would arrange the food for you)" Veer said.

"Ok'mere liye Burger aur Fries leke aana, McDonalds se; kisi aur brand ka mujhe pasand nahi you know" Manyata said waving her hand to shoo off a pesky mosquito.

"Oh madam, thodi der pehle marne wali thi aur ab mehngi dukaan se khana chahiye tujhe'yeh sab nahi milega idhar'vada paav se kaam chala warna bhooki so ja.." Veer said.

"Uff..kaisi jagah hai yeh'itne saare machchar(Mosquitoes)! Tum log yahan kaise jeete ho!(how can you live here)" Manyata said in a haughty manner.

"Tumko yahan rehne ka hai toh inhi machcharon ke saath rehna padega..nakhre mat dikha(don't show me attitude, you have to manage with the mosquitoes)" Veer said with an angry look.

"alright..mujhe koi shouk nahi hai yahan rehne ka'im leaving tomorrow morning, ab jo bhi laana hai jaldi se le aao, I'm hungry" Manyata said shaking her head.

"aey, tu phir angrezi boli, mera khoon mat jala..apun ko angrezi sunke kuch kuch hota hai(you spoke English again! it makes my blood boil) " Veer said.

"toh main kya karun" Manyata said rolling her eyes. Now that her pains were out of her system, she was regaining some of her earlier behavior.

Veer left her to battle the mosquitoes and went out to buy some food for them. He was starting to like this girl in spite of her snooty and snobbish behavior. She was pretty as a flower and when she spoke, her pretty little dimples flashed urging him to touch it.

He looked at the sky and said " mummy tu yahan hoti, toh apun tere ko kehta ki iske ghar rishta leke jaane ka..apun ka dil aagaya ispe toh(mom, only if you were here, I would tell you to ask her hand from her parents)" he blushed.

He had bought Vada paav and handed it to her. She looked at it with disgust once and began to eat.

"Yeh batao, main aaj raat ko soungi kahan?" Manyata asked Veer taking a bite of her Vada paav.

"Yahi, isi ghar me, chinta mat kar, apun us type ka ladka nahi hai..tere ko haath bhi nahi lagayega aayi shabbat (im not that kind of a guy, I won't touch you, I promise)" he touched his neck in a promise. Somehow Manyata was compelled to believe this stranger.

He slept on the floor after dinner where as she had the string cot for herself.

As Manyata tossed and turned in her uncomfortable bed, her thoughts turned to two men who had been in and out of her life in these two days. The glow of street lamp was falling on her face through the open window. The sky outside looked serene unlike her over active mind. She couldn't help drawing comparisons. Those two men were as different as chalk and cheese. While one had literally driven her out in the middle of the night, other had twisted her arm so that she wouldn't risk herself by going out at night. His touch! Wow! She felt like she had been on fire when he looked at her with those coal black blazing eyes. Akash never looked at her like that. Sure he believed in lots and lots of PDA but it wasn't the same as it was with Veer. Did Akash ever give her a reassuring gaze? No perhaps; this Angry young man's one look had her going on a trip to lalaland. She shut her eyes and tried to sleep. But it seemed like sleep was on leave today. Her thoughts kept turning back to certain guy with poor dress sense but with the charm of a prince.

Prince'according to her parents she was married to a prince. A guy whose memories in her mind were just faded blur. She didn't realize when her thoughts turned into a dream.

A little girl of about 3-3.5 years old, wearing a pink frock, climbed the steps of the Temple holding her mother's hand. She suddenly spotted a Yogi (Sage) sitting below a tree, meditating. His long white beard fascinated her and she let go her mother's hand and ran to touch it to see how it felt.

As she neared, he opened his eyes suddenly scaring her. She was about to run back to her mother, he called her out with a soft voice. "beti, ghabrao nahi, humare paas aao.."

She approached him slowly. He placed a hand on her head to bless her and said "tum badi ho kar bohot naam kamaogi, tumhari shaadi ek raj kumar se hogi" the child obviously couldn't understand what he meant, but she smiled brightly. He was happy seeing her smile and he took a turquoise pendant out of his side pocket and handed it to her. It was round in shape with something written on the back of it. She liked the pendant very much and held it on her little palm. When the sunlight fell on it, it gave out a glow. Suddenly out of nowhere Udayveer appeared and snatched the pendant out of her hand and ran off with it. "Udayveer! Wapas do mujhe!! She yelled.

The dream broke and she woke up in cold sweat. The dream had been very clear. But she couldn't remember the faces of the people in it. Who could they be?

There was a bedside clock beside her which was glowing in the dark. The time was 5 in the morning. Somewhere a rooster crowed loudly announcing the onset of dawn. Veer was still asleep on the floor. She looked at him and felt ashamed of her holier than thou attitude last night. Poor guy' he had given her a place to stay when she had nowhere to go in this world. She thought of a way of making it up to him.

Fifteen minutes later she was in the kitchen, making breakfast. This was Manyata's way of saying sorry. Though she had never set foot in the kitchen ever before, she used her common sense and got ready to make breakfast. Veer had placed some eggs and other vegetables on the kitchen counter.

She had the basic idea of how an omelet is made and accordingly broke an egg with a ladle. The egg broke in her hand spoiling her dress. Never mind she tried one more time and this one too had the same fate. She decided she would first cut some onions and then move to the eggs one more time. There was a knife there and she picked it up to cut onions and cut her finger instead. Blood oozed out and she screamed in pain. Veer woke up with a start and ran to the kitchen.

Ok this is it for the fourth chapter 😃

tell me how was it?

Thank you all who liked and commented in the previous chapter 🤗

(P.S- Payel di, as you asked, i have given the english translations with hindi dialogues in this chapter, they are in black color)



Edited by Chamakchallo30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey vibha,🤗
finally i gt the time to read ur this story nd more importantly to give my comment on the same😆

Once again, u hv done a splendid , mindblowing nd great hob vibha sweetie.👍🏼
hum toh je apke fan ho gaye hai.😉
no seriously, trust me dear😳

but before i begin with, i rea;lly want to opologis eto u fr nt commenting earlier becuse i guess u already knw i was occupied with my college nd otherstuff dear.

Ok now coming to the chapters, they are awesum yaar. i wonfer how u gt such nd great idea yaar.
i mean Uday is a " TAPPORI " here,,,, 😆
i really loved this avatar of uday in this story.
nd the dialogues tht u r using fr him,,,typically bhaish language is just swesum yaar,,,really great
I shapath...😆

But i m really confuse with this thing vibha, was manyta ever in love with AKASH. coz i dont think so.
she accepted his propoasl because she wanted to revolt against her parents
bt thn
whn akash dint agree to maary her nd left her thn y the hell she tried to commit suicide.,,,,, this is something tht nt going down my brain.
I completely agree tht it was hr pride tht was not letting hr to go to her parents place but was she blind or rather i wuld say stupid tht she was trying to give her life fr this stupid reason.
she culd have left this place nd moved somewhere else rather thn committing suiceide.😕

But alls well tht ends well.
achcha he hua na tht she was trying to commit suicide otherwise hw uday wuld hv met her nd thn bring her down to his place to stay😉😳

so uday has started liking her too nd she is physically attracted to him...😳☺️

I really hope manyta agrees to stay with him at his plce sumhw nd thn uday teached her his TAPORISH language nd manyta teaches him "angreji"😉

waiting eagerly fr ur next chapter,,,,,
cant wait to see hw uday wuld help manyta with the brekfast😉😆

rest of the update was mindblowing yaar.
loved it frm the beginning till the very end
u hv done a mindblowing job

thnxxx fr such an awesum story
will comment on the other story as early as possible.

Huggs
SALONI
Edited by coolsaloni.nira - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsssmmm updateee vibhaaa love ittt👏👏👏
Edited by huma12. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

reswa. again not first



its ok Tumhare exams ke baad jab tum loutogi... tumhi first Res laga lena 🤗 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
res 😆
comment edited on pg 20 😉
Edited by edward123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
very Nice one
so the pendant veer has is
de one M got from de priest ...
cont soon
thnks 4 PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
Vibha loved d update !!!!
Thanx for the pm and plz update soon... 👍🏼

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