OS: Whiskey Lullaby - Page 2

tjats great!!!
luvd it...
u r really a great writer...

Pls write another Os!!!!!!!!!!!
And pls a happy ending is a must
and pls pm me
and u r a very good writer
I wanna appreciate u for ur talent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: coolsaloni.nira

Hey dear !!!!!

ur story was beautiful, amazing nd awesum yaar.👏 👏 👏 👏

Though it was a sad ending but still i really loved it alot.

U had written it in such a beautiful nd lovely manner tht i could literaly visualise everything.

For a sec i really gt emotional reading the scene whn uday gave up his life recal;ling his love,,,jis life manyta...Tht scene really touched my heart.It was beautiful...👏

I m glad i read such a beautiful OS.

but just a small req to u , if u plan to write something in future thn plz do pm me as well.

i would love to read ur work...😳

nd if possible, do write something more on manveer . I m sure people would love reading ur work👍🏼

Great job dear.

Saloni

Thnxs dear...
glad u liked it
surely pm u from the next time👍🏼

Originally posted by: eyecatchers

Pls write another Os!!!!!!!!!!!
And pls a happy ending is a must
and pls pm me
and u r a very good writer
I wanna appreciate u for ur talent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ok dear, i'll write a os with happy ending the next time
but it'll take time as my exams are coming...😕

Originally posted by: princessSonia

hey Hina,

nice work...👍🏼

loved it...👏

it was

heart touching...❤️

but a sad end...😭

tht Devils J- Akash...🤢

hate them...😡😡

bdw m sonia...

Hey Sonia😊
glad u liked it
yes, j and Akash are the devils😡

Wow read your os just now and i simply loved it
it was really sad
poor manveer
feel bad abt them and then jai and akash
send them to hell please
do write more
u r really a promising writer

sad but romantiiccc and lovelyyy jai and akashhh kaminayyy

Originally posted by: andy.a

Wow read your os just now and i simply loved it
it was really sad
poor manveer
feel bad abt them and then jai and akash
send them to hell please
do write more
u r really a promising writer

sure will try 2 write more
jai nd akash will sure rot in hell😊