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Panther_panja

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Posted: 12 years ago

#321

Originally posted by: deepsoul
the way u say dear Nandani n all so I thought u take it seriously 😆

See dear when your friend is taking her job of writing the story so nicely you love to encourage her. 😊

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deepsoul

@deepsoul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#322

Originally posted by: anj1208

See dear when your friend is taking her job of writing the story so nicely you love to encourage her.😊

ya but don't take it seriously 😆

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deepsoul

@deepsoul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#323

33part!
Next morning(raj room)
Raj packing up his suitcase .yuvraj n unnati come n ask" tum yeh kaya kar rahey ho?kha jarey ho?" Raj with sad mood say" ab yaha rakha kaya hai?" Yuvraj say" tu ESE hari hui bat nhi kar saktey ho?" Raj leave cloth in frustration n say" tho kaya karu? Jab usney hi sath chod diya hai?" Unnati say" aap ek ladki key wajse tho aap puri jindgi karab tho nhi kar saktey hai na?" Yuvraj" tu fikar mat kar tu yaha bhi raheyga or Nandani Teri bhi hogi yeh mera promise hai" raj say" nhi Yarr ab mujhe kuch nhi chaye" yuvraj say" acha thik hai!par tu ab yaha nhi raheyga" unnati say" par Dada abhi tho apne kha ki yeh yaha raheyge?" Yuvraj say" choti humara matlab yeh tha ki humare sath hotel ja rahey hai" unnati say" ohhh!!!!!! acha ! Dada aap jaye hum rani se milke atey hai" yuvraj say" OK" n they leave
Next scene
A man entering palace with shoes close up n shouting " rani kha ho dekho kon aya hai?" Suddenly he crash with unnati n she going to fall down that he caught her ... a eye contact between them after few min unnati say" dekh kar nhi chal saktey ho kaya ?"

This is vijay who caught her (vijay is cousin brother of rani. He love rani a lot infect more then Nandani but why? well u will come to know in this story in short positive character ) vijay say" I m sorry humney apko dekha nhi" unnati say" its OK but agey se dekh kar chalye ga!" Vijay trying to say something but suddenly rani come n say" vijay Bhai aap aa gaye?" Rush n hugs vijay Bhai .vijay say" kese nhi atey?" Then rani look at unnati n introduce unnati to vijay by saying" vijay Bhai yeh unnati hai yuvraj ki bhen!" Vijay say" hii" to unnati move his hand towards her then suddenly yuvraj n raj come.yuvraj say" hello sale shaib hum se bhi miley akir hum is ghar key honey wale jamai SAA hai?" rani got shocked to see him .vijay say" namstey jamai SAA" rani did not feel good n say" chaley vijay Bhai mujhe aapse na Janey kitni sari batey karni hai aye" n take him to her room after that komal come by saying " koi aya hai kaya?" Unnati tell her that vijay has come n komal feel happy but she got shocked too see raj with suitcase n ask" yeh saman kuy raj?aap khai ja rahey hai?" Raj say" han aunty mai jaa raha hoo!" Komal say" kuy beta humse kuch galti ho gyi ya kisi ney aapse kuch khey diya kaya?" raj hide his emotions n say" nhi aunty kisi ney kuch nhi kha hai!mai soch raha tha ki papa ,mummy ko aney mai time hai tho mai hotel mai ruk jata hoo!" Komal say"hotel mai kuy beta yeh bhi tho aap hi ka ghar hai?" Raj say" han aunty but devgradh ke pass hi office ka kuch kam hai so manage karna easy hoga bas islye !" Komal say" acha office ka kam isyle hum nhi ROK rahey" n all hands together take permission n leave
Next scene (rani room)

Rani ask to vijay" vijay Bhai apko usko jamai saa kheney ki kaya jarurt thi?" Vijay Bhai" humne tho wahi kha Jo sach hai!" Rani with anger" iska matlab aap bhi use? Aap ese kese kar saktey ho? Aap nhi jante ho ki usne Nandani ke sath kaya kia?" Vijay say" rani Jo bhi kia hai raj ne kia hai! Tho in sab mai yuvraj ki kaya galti hai?" Rani say" vijay Bhai use Sab kuch pata tha or Jo bhi uske kheney par hua hai!" Vijay say" par usney yeh kuy kia yeh Janey ki koshish ki?" rani say" mujhe nhi pata hai or mujhe Jana bhi nhi hai"vijay say" tho tum kaya karna chati hoo?" Rani say with confused mind" pata nhi vijay Bhai WO jis mai Nandani ki bhi kushi ho!" Vijay say" ohh ab samjha Nandani ne kuch kha hai na tumse?" Rani say" nhi vijay Bhai Nandani ne kuch nhi kha hai" vijay say" tum kuch bhi kho rani par mai janta hoo bachpan se Nandani ko tum WO deti ayi hoo jis par tumara hak hai par yuvraj koi gift nhi hai jise tum wrap kar ke de do GI samjhi" rani say" nhi vijay Bhai aap samjh nhi rahey ho mai kisiko gift wrap kar ke nhi de rahi hoo! Bas mai Nandani ko bhi dhuki nhi kar sakti hoo akhir WO meri bhen hai" vijay say" samjh nhi ata rani tumara kaya karu? Tum us Nandani ke bare mai soch rahi ho Jo srif apney aap se payar karti hai!" N leave the room in frustration here rani feel sad say to herself " vijay Bhai aap samjh nhi rahey hai mai Nandani ko islye deti ayi hoo kuyki use yeh na lagey ki use koi payar nhi karta hai"
Next scene (yuvraj room)
Raj say" tune mujhe ROK tho liya hai par mera maan bilkul nhi hai mujhe bas use dur rehna hai!"
Yuvraj say" don't worry Yarr mai hoon na!! Kal Maine ek party organise ki hai tho tujhe rani key pass jakey use invite karna hai!"
Raj say" what!! No ways mai khai nhi ja Raha hoo!"
Yuvraj smile n say" Jana tujhe padega hi kuyki us mai Nandani bhi aa Rahi hai" raj say" but use kon invite karega tu!" Yuvraj say" wow!! Tu tho intelligent ho gaya hai!"unnati say with frustration" dada aapko nhi lagta hai ki rani ko invite aapko karna chaye?" Yuvraj explain her by saying" choti!! Hum karna tho chate hai par wo kaya haina humari princess mane gi nhi " raj say" Yarr Nandani tho maan jayegi par rani maney gi kaya?" Yuvraj " WO jarur mane gi!" Raj ask with confused mind" WO kese?" Yuvraj give evil smile

Next morning (office room)

rani seeing balance sheet n feel strange that so much donation give to only one NGO suddenly one servant come n say" gustaki maaf ho rajkumari saa Mr raj apse milna chatey hai!" Rani got confused n say" hum se!! Thik hai uney lekey aao!" after few min

raj enter n hands together n say" namastey princess rani!" Rani welcome him n say" namsatey! Aye khaey humse kaya kam tha?" Raj say" princess rani kal devgradh ke pass wale resort mai humane ek party organise ki hai tho hum apko invite karney aye hai!" Rani say" sorry Mr raj hum nhi ayege actually humhey esi party pasand nhi hai!" Raj say" nhi aap samjhi nhi basically yeh ek charity party hai good cause key liye hai!" rani say" so apko kitney paise chaye Mr raj?" Raj say" nhi princess humhey apse paise nhi apka wqt chaye !" Rani say" hum kuch samjhe nhi?" Raj say" humhey bas apka wqt chaye waha par kafi games hai jis mai bas apko participate Lena hai or Jo bhi aap jitey gi WO charity mai jayega!" Rani say" sounds good!! Hum soche gey!" Raj say" thik ab hum chaltey hai par agar aap aye gi humhey bhut acha lagega!" N leave after that vijay come n saw raj going n ask rani" rani yeh raj yaha kuy aya tha?" Rani say" humhey party ke liye invite karney!" Vijay say" humhey lagta tumhe jarur Jana chaye!" Rani say" thik tho aap bhi humarey sath chal rahey!" Vijay say" thik hai!" here raj in parking area getting into car his phone rang this yuvraj ask" kaya hua WO aa rahi haina?" Raj say" pata nhi !" Yuvraj say" pata nhi matlab Tunney thik se batya tha na? Yeh party kis liye hai?" Raj say" han mainey thik se batya hai jese tune kha tha? Par WO khey rahi thi ki wo soche gi!" yuvraj say OK n cuts call n call to Nandani .Nandani say" wow! Jaigradh ke yuvraj ne humhey kese yaad kia?" Yuvraj say" yaad tho humhey sabhi princess ki ati hai! par is wqt tho hum invitation dena chate hai" Nandani got confused n ask" invitation wo bhi humhey jiji ko bhul gaye kaya aaj? Ya fir tumari yadash chali gyi hai?" Yuvraj say" yaad tho humhey ache se par wo kaya haina hum party mai thodha glamour lana chatey hai!" Nandani blush n say" wo tho ha!! hum se Jada Glamour's koi nhi hai thik hai hum aa jaye gey!" Call cuts

n give evil smile!
To be continued ...

Edited by deepsoul - 12 years ago

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Kritika

@Karkit

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Posted: 12 years ago

#324

Wow nice update...
Ye jay kabhi nahi sudaregi
unati n vijay eyecontact sweet n gud...
hmm party so maja aayega...
i hope uday n rani dance together...
thanks 4 pm n update soon

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Panther_panja

@Panther_panja

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Posted: 12 years ago

#325

Story is moving very nicely and interestingly. seriosly enjoying is every bit of it.

Lets see what happens next I feel in this manner Yuvraj will show Nandini her real face in a beautiful manner as he is yuvraj confidance his nest identity 😃. I feel that his next identity is gifting a smile back to his friend who have lost the reason to smile.

Hats off to you deeps as your story is moving smoothly and interestingly. Just keep it up 👏 ⭐️ 👍🏼

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MAHIMA

@MAHI1198

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Posted: 12 years ago

#326

nice update yar!
let's c nw wat happened happens in the party!
update soon

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TINA

@...Tina...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#327

thanks for the PM😳,

this is interesting...!!😉u r indeed a good writer...!!👏

still reading the previous chaps,

do PM me the updates...!!😳

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tabby999

@tabby999

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Posted: 12 years ago

#328

thanks for sharing ..

nice part

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deepsoul

@deepsoul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#329

Originally posted by: Karkit
Wow nice update...
Ye jay kabhi nahi sudaregi
unati n vijay eyecontact sweet n gud...
hmm party so maja aayega...
i hope uday n rani dance together...
thanks 4 pm n update soon

thank u karkit n jay agar sudhar jayegi tho negativity kese ayi GI story mai 😆 ya sure dance tho banta hai 😳 BTW basically this is a love story so i m concentrating on each character that why vijay n unnati 😆

Edited by deepsoul - 12 years ago

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deepsoul

@deepsoul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#330

Originally posted by: anj1208
Story is moving very nicely and interestingly. seriosly enjoying is every bit of it.
Lets see what happens next I feel in this manner Yuvraj will show Nandini her real face in a beautiful manner as he is yuvraj confidance his nest identity😃. I feel that his next identity is gifting a smile back to his friend who have lost the reason to smile.

Hats off to you deeps as your story is moving smoothly and interestingly. Just keep it up 👏⭐️👍🏼

thank u priya for taking interest in my story 😎

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