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Posted: 12 years ago
will read and comment later deepu😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely part deep ...nice story ..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hay Deep

Just loved your update. Really very nice and good you can say awesome.

Rani had really put her parents into shame by taking a revenge step. And Yuvraj as usual a prince with an attitude.

And nandini also too cunning .

😊👏 a clap to you.for nice update.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tabby999

lovely part deep ...nice story ..😊

thank u tabby for reading my story! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesme update
uday rani scene to gud thanx 4 pm n cntinue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
20 part
In komal room rani saying " nhi maa mai us se mafi nahi maag sakti hoo" then komal said " thik hai agar aap mafi nahi maag sakti hai tho aapko humse bhi maafi nahi mil sakti hai ab fesala aap pe hai" n move out from room rani try to stop her but she didn't listen n leave the room
N rani was like huahhh

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In Yuvraj room raj saying to Yuvraj " OH my god! Par yarr ek bat bata agar wo tujhse maafi mag leti hai tho tu maaf kar dega kaya?" then Yuvraj with naughty smile " tujhey kaya lagta mai use ese hi maaf kar duga thoda tadpana banta hai kuy?" then raj say" tujhey bada maza aata hai use satney mai?" then Yuvraj say" yeh hi tho chemistry hai hum dono mai" then raj get confused " chemistry kaya bol raha? Kese chemistry ?" then Yuvraj " rhende tu nahi samjhega" raj still in confusion but Yuvraj move out from room n accidentally meet rani in corridor n rani look at him for a second with angry face n try to move from there but Yuvraj stop her n say" badi jaldi hai janey ki " rani with attitude " tumse matalb " then Yuvraj say" itna sab kuch ho gya par tumari akad ab tak nhi gyi" then rani say" akad tum mai hai mujhey mai nahi samjhey " then Yuvraj " acha akad nahi tho humse maafi kuy nhi mang leti hoo" then rani get shocked " kaya matalb hai tumara mai kuy maagne lagi maafi wo bhi tumse?" then Yuvraj with confident " kuy komal aunty ney abhi tak tumse maafi magney key liye nahi kha kaya????" then rani get scared n say" tumhey kese pata?" then Yuvraj say" yeh kesi chotey bachey ko tak pata hoga ki komal aunty mujhey maafi magney key liye hi kha hoga" then rani get angry" acha par tum itna kush mat ho kuyki mai tumse koi maafi nahi magney wali hoo samjhey " then Yuvraj say" let see " then rani with confident "han dekh lena" n both move in opposite direction n here nandani saw all this n say to herself " yeh hui na kuch damakedar news humhey lagta hai ki humari jiji ko humari jarurt hai" give evil smile
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In hall komal sitting on sofa n thinking about last night that if maharaj will know that how he react on it n take newspaper n search that if some news is publish or not but not find anything then suddenly brijraj come take his hand on komal shoulder n komal get scared n look back then brijraj get tensed to look komal like this n say" kaya hua komal aap thik tho haina?" then komal say in nervous tone " nahi kuch nahi hua hai bas humari tabiyat thik nahi hai" brijraj say in caring tone" humhey lagta hai aapko apney room mai aram karna chaye " komal in low tone" han maharaj aap thik key rahey hai humhey aaram karna chaye " n move up for room here brijraj feel strange n also feel that komal must bi hiding something from him
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ria cleaning rani room then suddenly ranI come n say" apney aap ko samjhta kaya hai ab kaya hum uskey hisabh se chaley gey kaya? " then ria get confused n say" kaya hua rani shaibha kiski ki bat kar rahi hai ?" rani get calm down after ria voice n say" or kon hoga wahi raj ab tho usney sari had par kar di hai" then ria get shocked n say" had par kar di hai khai use esa wesa kuch tho nahi kia hai na?" then rani get frustrated n say" ohhh ria tum bhi na esa kuch nahi kia hai" then ria still in confusion n ask" tho fir? Kaya hua?" then rani tell her whole thing whatever happened in komal room n whatever happen at corridor n ria get relax n say" bas itni si bat tho us se maafi mag le jiye" then rani get shocked n say" tumhey itni bat lag rahi hai hum rajput sir kata saktey hai par sir jhuka nahi saktey hai" then suddenly nandani come n say" bikhul shai kha jiji" rani n ria get shocked n look at back then nandani come in say" par yeh bat aam log kha samjhtey hai" n look at ria with evilness n here ria saying in her mind " fir se aa gye rani shaibha ko badkaney " then rani get nervous n say" par humhey kaya karna chaye nandani ?" then nandani smile n say" jiji aap humse puch rahi hai?" then rani say" yeh mazak ka wqt nahi hai batana?" then nandani say" agar humse puch rahi hai tho humarey riaye mai aapko uskey sath deal kar lena chaye" rani n ria get confused n rani say" deal kesi deal" then nandani say" aap use akele mai bulaye or khaye ki aap us se maafi nahi maag sakti badle mai wo kuch bhi maag sakta hai is se aapko maafi or aapka kam bhi ho jayega what say?" then rani say" plan tho acha hai" then ria say" magar rani shaibha usney kuch bhi maag liya tho?" then nandani say" wo esa kuch nhai magega or agar magey tho aap deal cancel kar dena yeh aapkey hath mai right " n look at ria with angry face n rani say" right hum abhi us se bat kartey hai" n rani leave to talk n here ria feel something fishy in this n say to herself in mind " yeh jarur chaal chal rahi hai mujhey rokna hoga rani shaibha ko" n go after rani n here nandani saying to herself " teer tho nikal gaya hai ab rokney se kaya faida?" n laugh

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In corridor ria stop rani n say" rani shaibha mat jaye yeh jarur koi chaal hai" then rani say with confident " ria is mai kaya chaal hogi or kon chaleyga nandani wo humari bhen hai so relax " n ria couldn't say anything to rani becoz rani has full trust on nandani n rani say" acha ria ek kam karo raj terrace pe bejh do khao humney bulya hai" here ria goes to Yuvraj (raj as per rani) n say rani is waiting for u n Yuvraj feel happy that finally rani say sorry to him!
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Rani is waiting for Yuvraj ( raj as per rani) then suddenly a voice come " mujhey tho laga tha ki tum sorry sab key samney kho gi " n rani look back saw Yuvraj n say " oh hello mainey koi sorry kheney key liye nahi bhulya hai samjhey?" then Yuvraj come close to her n look at her eye with naughty smile say " tho fir kis liye bulya?" n rani push him back n say" mujhey se dur raho or mainey ek deal key liye bulya hai" Yuvraj say" ohh tho tum deal bhi karti ho? Bolo kaya deal hai? " then rani say" dekho mai tujhey koi sorry nahi khu gi par badle mai tum jo chao maag saktey ho?" then Yuvraj with naughty smile " soch lo princess hum kuch bhi maag saktey hai?" then rani with confident " soch liya bolo kaya maagtey ho?" then Yuvraj say" fine tho thik hai aaj rat tum mere sath date par Chalo badle hum aunty ko khey degey ki tumney sorry bol diya hai" then rani get shocked n say " humney jitna socha tha tum us se jada cheap nikle tum jantey ho na ki humari shadi Yuvraj se honey wali hai tho tum yeh kese maag saktey ho?" Yuvraj " mera character certificate bad nikale ge abhi jaurt tumhey hai tho agar manzoor ho tho haa khao" rani start thinking that if Yuvraj will know then how would he react but how he will know If no one say to him n say" thik hai par yeh bat Yuvraj ko pata nhi lagni chaye " then Yuvraj say" Wase bhi agar tum nhi kheyti fir bhi mai nhi batana" then rani say ok n leave after that Yuvraj saying to himself " yeh tho humari first date hai humari honey wali biwi " here nandani again listen all this convo. N say to herself " fikar mat kijey jiji Yuvraj ko koi nhi bateyga par agar wo khud dekh le tho" n give evil smile
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rani in her room in angry mood walking her n there saying to herself " date pe wo bhi us shetan key sath hey bagwan ! aapney mujhey yeh kha fasa diya hai?" then suddenly one servent knocks the door n rani say come in n when servent come in then rani say in angry mood" kaya hai ?" then servent say by handover a gift with one letter " yeh jamai saa key dost ney bejha hai or kha ki aap jaldi se tayar hokey pichey waley garden mai ajaye" rani accept it n say" thik hai tum jao or suno yeh bat kis ko mat batana thik hai?" then servent leave by say" jo hukum " rani open that letter which written like this " bagwan ko pareshan karney ki koi jarurt nahi hai kuyki wo neechey nahi aney waley tumari madat key liye islye jaldi Se garden mai akey milo kuyki mujhey der se aney wali ladki bikhul pasand nahi hai " after reading this letter rani crash that letter n through that in dustbin with very angry mood n say" huahhh apney aapko samjhta kaya hai or kheta hai ki der se ananey wali ladkiya pasand nhai hai tho mujhey konsi us se shadi karni hai but jana tho padega warana khai maafi na magna padjaye "
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Yuvraj wearing cool informal shirt n wearing jacket over that with normal jeans n which look like this

n waiting for rani in garden n after some interval he looking at his wrist watch suddenly rani come in white top n wearing pink jacket with casual pant whick look like this

n when Yuvraj look her he feel that his world stop for a min n background music start
" Tera mera rishta hai kaisa
Ik pal door gawara nahi
Tere liye har roz hai jeete
Tujh ko diya mera waqt sabhi
Koi lamha mera na ho tere bina
Har saans pe naam tera

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho"
rani close to him n hold his hand n say" Chalo ab chalna nahi hai kaya agar Ksisi ney dekh liya tho" take him to near car n he continue looking at her but rani feel strange the way he looking at her n say" kaya hua date ka plan cancel ho gya hai kaya? " then Yuvraj say" yeh tumse kisney kha" n rani say" tho fir rukey kuy Chalo na kuyki yaha kisi dekh liya tho gadbad ho jayegi " then Yuvraj say yes n they sitting into car n they go for date here nandani saw all this from her room window n say" dekh tho liya hai jiji bas kisi or ki dekha baki hai" n give evil smile
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they reached disco where music is so loud everybody enjoying on the dance n rani get so excited to see disco n say to Yuvraj " wow tum mujhey yaha lekey aye ho mujhey tho laga tha ki koi boring si jagey le jao but this is so cool place" then Yuvraj say" Chalo tumhey kuch tho pasand aya " rani say with sad look " agar tumarey jagey Yuvraj hota na tho bat hi kuch or hoti " then Yuvraj with naughty smile" awww bat aaj tho humse hi kam chalna padega " then rani with attitude " esa kuch nhi mai chau tho mujhey yaha koi mana nhi kar sakta samjhey" then Yuvraj " but mujhey se best koi nhi " rani get yet another naughty plan n say" acha yeh bat hai mai khau us ladki ko agar tumney dance kar liya tho man jau gi" then Yuvraj " agar yeh challenge hai tho mujhey manzoor hai" then rani saw a girl with a Strong muscles , body builder type boy friend n say " wo ladki dekh rahey us admi key sath " then Yuvraj saw that girl n say" han" then rani say" han bas tumhey us ladki key sath dance karna hai" then Yuvraj say" par uska tho already boy friend hai?" then rani smile n say" kuy dar gye bas itna hi attitude tha?" then Yuvraj say" attitude or charm tho bhut hai madam bas mai tho yeh soch raha tha khai mere wajse wo apney boy friend ko na chod de" then rani say in attitude " wo bad mai dekhey gey khai phele wo tumari hadi falsi ek na kar de" n start laugh then Yuvraj " yeh hasi bacha key rakho bad mai kam ayi gi" then rani" wo dekh le gey phele jao tho shai" then Yuvraj start moving on n here nandani come to raj room n say" kaya aapney jiji ko dekha hai kaya?" then raj say" nahi kuy?" then nandani smile n say" kuyki mainey abhi raj or jiji ko khai bahar jatey huey dekha hai tho socha aapko pata hoga" then raj get shocked n say" kaya ?"

To continue...
tabby999 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank u so much for a wonderful part
lovely deep
thanks😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful Update deepu,.👏👏👏
just loved the attitude of Rani and Yuvraj..
They r so perfect for each other
waiting for the update when rani falls for him😊
..Continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome blossom great update deary
rani and yuvraj on date nice
pagal nandini thinks that she is parting the couple
instead unknowingly woh rani aur yuvraj ko sath larahi hai...
update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank u guys for lovely comments!🤗

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