love always find a way...42 part updated page no 67

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hi deep

Loved the new update in 15th part in your story I just loved it. Hay really I feel that you should try your hand in script writing 😊.

Yuvraj had been really very mean he should not have done this making the horse 😔 of rani drink wine as it does effect the health of the animal also. 😃 Health is wealth na whether its animal or human being .

Hay one thing for you just accept it 👏

Chul byee

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manisha98

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

awesome update deeps...

it was 2 gud...

thnx 4r d pm nd do continue soon..!!😉

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Awesome update 😛 sorry for late comment...
Thanks for PM dear 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

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16 part!
nandani come to raj n say" kaya hua aapka dost aapko chod key Chala gya? But bura mat mana yeh jo apka dost apki dosti key layak nahi hai" then raj get confused n say" kaya matlab ?" nandani " humara matalb hai aap uskey liye kaya kuch nhi kar rahey hai jesa wo kheyta hai wesa aap kartey but wo hai aapki itni si bhi kadar nahi karta hai ese hi chod key Chala gaya" then raj remain slient n feel realy bad after nandani say" chaley koi bat nahi hum tho hai hum aapko chod detey hai apni car se" n move towards car n give evil smile then they sit in the car n nandani start driving after sometime nandani say" humari kesi bhi bat ka agar bura laga ho tho" then suddenly raj say" nahi esi koi bat nahi hai" then they both remain slient n they reach to mahal n they come out of the car then nandani stop raj n say" par aap humari bat gor zarur karna" n raj doesn't say anything n here ria again saw them together from mahal window n feel realy shatter to saw them together n say to himself " yeh choti rajkumari ki problem kaya hai jab dekho jamai saa key aas pass gumti rhey thi hai " n here raj start moves toward mahal n nandani stop him again say" Byee" raj also say Byee n go to his room n here ria still seeing them n saying to himself " Byee tho esa khey rahi hai jese khai or rahey rahi ho ek mahal mai rheti hai fir bhi huahhh kuch tho karna padega is choti rajkumari ka"
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In raj room where Yuvraj is waiting for him n raj entered in room n Yuvraj saw him n say" tu aa gaya mai tera intezar kar raha tha" n take his hand on raj shoulder but raj in frustrated mood back out his hand n say" tu khey tho esa raha jese tujhey meri bhut fikar hai" then Yuvraj get shocked to see raj like this n say" kuy kaya hua tu esi bat kuy raha hai? " then raj say with angry " nahi kuch bhi tho nahi hua tu mujhey waha ese hi chod key Chala kuyki wahi tho hota hai jo tu chata hai " Yuvraj get confused that why he is behaving like this but still he he try to explain n say" us wqt mera mood karab ho gaya tha yarr or mujhey us wqt kuch nahi suja " raj is still in angry mood n say" wow us wqt tujhey suja nahi or tu yeh bhi bhool gaya ki mai bhi waha tha right " then Yuvraj get frustrated n say" us wqt us rani esi bat kar di thi ki mai akela rhena chata tha islye us wqt dayan nahi raha mujhey " then raj " ese kaya bat kar di thi ki tu mujhey bhool gaya? " then Yuvraj get more frustrated by remembering rani words n say" rheney de tu se abhi bat karna bekar hai pata nahi kese bat kar raha " n moves out of the room n here raj get shattered
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nandani enter in her room with very happy mood where ria is waiting for him n nandani get shocked to ria in her room n say" tum... Yaha kaya kar rahi ho? Tumney yeh nahi lagta hai ki tum galti se is room mai aa gye ho kuyki yeh tumari rani shaibha ka room nahi hai jo tum es try se gus ayi ho? " then ria with smartly answer her n say " mujhey achey se pata hai ki yeh rani shaibha ka room nahi hai choti rajkumari saa " then nandani with angry mood say" tho fir tum yaha kaya kar rahi ho?" ria " wo kaya hai na mainey aaj socha ki kuch galt cheezo ko theek kar leti hoo" nandani " ohhh tho tum safai karney ayi ho?ok kar lo" ria " han safai tho karney ayi par room ki nahi balki jo apkey dimag mai jo gandigi bari hui uski" then nandani with high voice " ria tum apni aukat bhool rahi ho yeh mat bhoolo ki tum srif ek aanat ladki wo humarey dad ki essan ki wajse se tum aaj yaha rhey rahi hoo" ria with sadly " nahi choti rajkumari saa mai kuch nahi bhoolI hoo kese bhool sakti hoo us din ko jab wo rakshas mujhey apney sath le jaa raha tha or mai usse bachney key liye rani shaibha ki car mai chup gyi thi or rani shaibha ney mujhey dekhney key bad mujhey bachaya hi nahi balki us rakshas ko police key hawaley bhi kia tha or apna dost banaya or mujhey is mahal mai assara bhi diya or ab aap yeh mat bhoolna ki mai rani shaibha key liye kuch bhi kar sakti hoo" then nandani " han karo na par is room key bahar " ria " mai tho bahar chali jau gi par aap jo kar rahi hai wo shai nahi hai" nandani " akir hum esa kaya kia hai yeh bato gi ya yuh hi lecture de raho gi?" ria " hum sab jantey hai choti rajkumari saa jo aap jamai saa key kareeb janey ki koshish kar rahi ho" then nandani get scared n say" esa kuch nahi hai or kaya saboot hai tumarey pass ki hum esa kuch kar rhey hai" ria " aap mujhey se saboot ki bat mat ki jeye kuyki hum jantey hai ki aap kaya karney ki koshish kar rahi hai" nandani say in angry mood " humney esa kuch nhi kia or tum hoti ko humhey shai galt sikhnaey wali? " ria" shai kha mai koi nahi hoti hoo par mai rani sahibha key sath kuch galt nahi honey do gi or app sudhar jaye warana humey maharaj or maharani saa ko batana padega" n moves out of room n here nandani get very angry n thinking that I should have do something to this ria otherwise she will be big problem for me
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Rani enter her room n thinking whatever happen in club n Yuvraj behaviour n saying to himself in very angry mood " khud ko smajhta kaya khai ka Yuvraj hai kaya? Uski himat kese hui humarey macho sharab pillaney ki khudh tho sharabhi hai hi humarey macho ko bhi bana chatta hai kaya? Huahhh is raj ka tho kuch karna padega " suddenly her mobile phone rang n rani pick up it n say" kaya? Sachi? Kab hai? Kaya kal hai? Sure hum jarur ayegey " n cut the call n feeling very happy n top of the world n say " ab dekhti hoo u raj ko humse uljaney Chala tha na" N go to hall where maharani n maharaj sitting n talking normaly then rani comes very happily n say " maa n dad " brijraj n komal get very happy to see her daughter smiling then brijraj say" kaya bat aaj humari betiya bhut kush hai " then rani smile n say" han kushi ki bat tho hai" then komal say" kaya bat humhey bhi batey " then rani say" humarey college ki reunion party hai humarey sab friends aa rhey hai or hum jana chatey hai" then brijraj proudly say" han jaur jaye par is bar aap akele nahi jaye gi balki Yuvraj ko apney sath le jayega kuyki sab ko pata hona chaye ki devgragh ki Yuvrani ki shadi ki se honey wali hai" then suddenly nandani come n say" kha janey ki bat ho rahi hai? " then rani say with excitement " humarey college ki reunion party ho rahi hai " then nandani also get excited n say " wow jiji college reunion party hum bhi chaley gey " then brijraj say " hum jarur jayega " then ria come with tea tray n give brijraj n komal after taking tea cup brijraj say to ria " ria tum jakey Yuvraj ko inform kar do ki kal rani college reunion party hai agar wo jana chaye tho" then nandani interrupts n say" dad is mai ria ko khaney ki kaya jarurt hai hum khey degey " then brijraj is about to say yes but rani interrupts n say" agar hum khey de tho " nandani get shocked to hear this n brijraj say " han beta tumara hi hak banta hai " n here ria smile n saying in her mind" bagwan ka shukar hai ki rani shaibha ko thodi akal de" n nandani saying in her mind " yeh aaj rani ko kaya ho gaya hai phele tho kabhi esa nahi kha " n rani thinking that this chance to invite raj in this party n giving him a realty check
To continue...

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Vibha Bangalore

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Posted: 12 years ago

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fantastic update Deeps 😛
Continue soon 😊thanks for PM

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Priya46
oh dear someone save poor uday

don't worry dear he is Yuvraj

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Panther_panja

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

Nice update in 16 Part. Hmmm must say that yuvraj had been very rood to macho horse of rani and then to his friend Raj. Bad attitude of Yuvraj 😔.

I just loved your update. 👏

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: anj1208
Nice update in 16 Part. Hmmm must say that yuvraj had been very rood to macho horse of rani and then to his friend Raj. Bad attitude of Yuvraj . I just loved your update.

no this raj misbehave with Yuvraj becoz of nandani ! It was just a misunderstanding !

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Posted: 12 years ago

#139

nice chapter...

loved it...

poor uday...

continue asap...

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Posted: 12 years ago

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it was awesome deepu, 👏

and now party ahhh i am sure yuvraj has his own methods to tackle the angry princess of his.😆...thanks for the pm dear and do continue soon...take care..love u...😊😊😊

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