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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 14

Finally they were Married but was it a marriage? Was it? Can a human get married to a Ghost a lingering soul. She was busy thinking about the fact of her so called marriage or we could say a drama to teach someone a lesson.

She remembered the past days events, when she got a call from giriraj and he called her to meet him in a caf, he said he has some important things to show her.

Flashback

why did he call me here, and he himself is no where to be seen...she was frustrated and was sitting when someone called her...

I CALLED YOU HERE, "YUVRANI MANYATA"!

She was a bit dazed to see Ds in front of her and most important she was calling her by her real name. she knew this was to happen, so didn't react a lot.

DS came near her and looked at her all lovingly and caressed her cheeks with her hand, with that she dropped some tears from her eyes. Seeing her in that state manyata could no longer hold on and just hugged her for the time being.

DS: why manyata why did you leave us for a heartless man? She questioned her still crying.

M: there is no need to cry DS, she wiped her grand mothers tears. What ever happened was my fate & no one could change it. Let's not think about the past but the present, I am very happy that you have made jay the yuvrani. I know DS that you hate UdayVeer now, but DS it's not his fault. I fell in love with him, he did not, neither he asked me to love him. Ya, that's a different thing that he betrayed me in Friendship & he deserves punishment for that. Don't hate him DS, he is worth your love. Now he has changed and has realized his mistake too.

She tried her best to convince DS, not to hate Uday and somehow she got success.

M: Ds please promise me one thing, the last thing I am asking you for?

DS: say my child?

M: Promise me that you will not hate Uday and not point him for my death.

Please DS.

DS: Manyata I can never forgive him, but for you only I wont say a word to him.

M: Thank you DS. And she hugged her.

Manyata you will get married at your real house, I have asked giriraj. Manyata nodded in a yes.

End Of Flashback

Her thoughts were broken when uday back hugged her, but she backed off, she pushed him away from him.

She was not the girl whom uday saw the first time, or every time. She looked different, very different, she looked at him with fiery eyes, hatred full eyes. He was baffled to see her expressions. What happened Piya? 'he asked with concern and moved forward to touch her cheeks but she forcefully pushed his hand back, shocking him further. Don't touch me, she shouted. What has happened to you God Damit, why are you behaving so strange today. He tried to go near her but was again pushed back. Are you gone Mad piya? 'he barked. Who is piya? She asked him twisting her hands in the air. Her strange behavior was irritating him a lot. I guess you are drunk darling, its better if you take rest.

I don't need rest yuvraj udayveer singh, I think its gonna be you who will need rest now. I have been taking rest from a long time, but now its time to give my soul some rest.

Now I am sure you are playing some prank with me, carry on baby I'll come back in a while. Before he could go she twisted his hand and shook him hard. He was surprised to see her strength, something was really wrong with her.

Piya' we can peacefully talk about what is wrong. Com,, cut of by her.

Manyata!! Yuvrani Manyata kumari, she said raising her brow.

What do you mean piya?

I am not piya, she screamed like a furious lioness. My name is Manyata. Manyata kumari of devgarh.

Hmmm, so wifey is joking with me han. Okay, then your manyata han. Well nice name. but I thought that Manyata kumari is dead.

Yes!! She died the day you rejected her.

How does she know that thought uday.

Flashback

Hello uday! Its me manyata

Uday=who! Who is manyata well there r so many girls in my life that I don't even remember there names well will u please introduce me to u once again!

Manyata=its me uday the one u love the one u got engaged to the one u promised to spent your life with your manyata'!

Uday=(laughing hardly)what I love u hahaha!! Who said so'!

Manyata= how can u do this to me uday u love me don't u remember the promise we made the day u left for us'we promised to stay together and love each other forever 'I love u soo much uday!

Uday= (getting serious)listen miss love'. i don't remember any promise and more over u were my fiance don't tell me manyata u don't remember that our family's has broken all relations 'so there is nothing between us'I don't deny the fact that u love me u see I am the most eligible bachelor of India girls die for me and all girls love the yuvraj udayveer singh!

i was shattered with your words i didn't knew what to do i was badly hurt my heart was broken I fell on the floor on my knees crying.

u betrayed me I always loved u and I still do I waited for u my life but u denied my love u made fun of it 'I went against my family for u' they all love me a lot and I'...

End of flashback.

The weather was more than worse outside, the winds were blowing hard and fast, as if a storm would come.

Uday couldn't understand what was going on, what all the girl was blurting in front of him shocked him, how did she knew this all. Till now no one knew the cause of manyata's death & if she is manyata only she can tell what exactly happened that night when she committed suicide. Uday's head was reeling, the circumstances around him were confusing him more. Who Was this girl, manyata or Piya. If she was piya, how come she knew all this & if she was manyata O My Gosh! No, that's not possible, he whispered to himself.

That's possible, came her reply. He looked up to find her in terrace, he rushed there to her. She was just so close to the railing & could fall any second

Move away piya, u will fall down.

A ghost cannot die again, she replied calmly & faced him. Now he noticed that she wasn't in the bridal dress, instead she was wearing a white dress.

Now you got it, I had cut my veins long back, and now I am just a lingering soul. I have got what I wanted ' to destroy your life, like you did mine'.

Uday had finally realized that she wasn't lying, she was indeed a ghost, a ghost of manyata who had come to his life to destroy it. All those meetings were a lie, all those polite words of love were a lie, in fact her whole existence was a lie, because she never existed. Thinking about his harsh behavior towards her when she called him to tell him how much she loved him and he made fun of her, really made him hate himself, without knowing he had eventually started crying.

Please manyata don't leave me, I will die without you, please Princess please. He pleaded her sitting on his knees in front of her.

I was in the same state uday, when I pleaded you, I cried in front of you being help less like this. I cried the same way, I pleaded you the same way. But there is only one difference today you are on the spot where I was three years back.

Uday I am not like you, not to understand your love. I too love you a lot the same as I did before. But I have to go back my time is finished. I cannot stay more.

I wanted to make you realize my love for you & that you have realized. I don't want you to waste your life uday. Look at me, if u love then promise me that you will live your life. I love you and I don't want you to rot to death like me your Manyata is leaving you forever. She kissed him on his forehead and after a second everything became blank.

Is he fine doctor? Asked a confused giriraj. Yes sir he is absolutely fine. Why is he sweating and having fever.

Well it often happens in sleep, its noting new. When a person has a bad dream or is stressed it happens, its not fever its because the body temperature gets high due to the tension in the body, it can happen due to stress mostly it happens due to Nightmares.


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Edited by -Zina- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg so everything is clear now. the way u wrote mannyata's confession was just fab. but end par mai confuse ho gai. thoda help kar dena plzz
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Posted: 12 years ago

res😊

edited :

Hi Zainab ... Awesome update Dear👏.

As I had initially thought ... there was no Piya - it was Manyata's lingering soul .
It is said that when a person commits suicide ... their soul does not cross over to the other side , instead it lingers until it obtains salvation. So , now that Uday has learnt his lesson - Manyata's soul has been freed! It was great - I really enjoyed that ; not to mention ... it was very well written👏.
NOW , THE PART THAT CONFUSED ME - DID UDAY DREAM THE ENTIRE SS😕??? And if he did dream it ... is there a possibility that Manyata is still alive? (I HOPE SO ).
Lastly ... 1 question - IS THIS THE LAST CHAPTER? I really wish it's not ... because we still have so many questions which are answer-less!
Thanks 4 the PM😊.
Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Now am confused
so manyata was a ghost?
But does a ghost have a body? Do you feel a ghost
this was one super update zainab
beautifully written and awsome
but it left some doubts in my mind
felt sad for manveer
please update soon as i want to know what is actually happening
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Posted: 12 years ago

lol😆 why😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Jarin04

omg so everything is clear now.
Hopefully😳
the way u wrote mannyata's confession was just fab.
thank you😃
but end par mai confuse ho gai.
lol wo to hona hi tha😆
thoda help kar dena plzz
kru gi na😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
Heya zina love...
this chapter confused me deary... What is actually happening is she indeed a ghost or not...
Cox it can't be uday nightmare :-/
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Zina,
I'm confused, did Manyata die n turn into a ghost and that's y uday got scared or was it Uday's nightmare 😕
Thank you for the pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg it happened at last...
bechara uday...
i knew this wud happen one day...
let me tell u i was sooo scared dat i m having goosebumps...
n i knew dis wud happen den tooo...
awesome update dear...cont. soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
amboo soo coolio
but dat means manveer wnt meet
thx for the pm
it was gr8
but do not mind last part was
a bit confusing

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