Originally posted by: vampire12345678
This chapter is so beautifully written soulmate * claps* the whole thjing was so wonder and nice
I loved the feel and the emotionsThank u Saira 🤗 .
Shivani being jealous feels like ice in hot summer lolArre ... kya comparison diya tumne😕😆!!
I love how u should the inner turmoil of the driver and loved komal she had always being the one who stands in the corner and knows the truth but never says a words she had always being helpless but I like how u use her character
I still love dS what ever she did she had her reasonsAnd you'll NEVER GUESS what her reason was😳.
I am glad manyata now knows the truth and is finally going to devragh to fulfil her duties
Yes - it's time she showed that she's worthy of being the Yuvraani!!!The begging manveer scene was awww again manyata falling into a reverie again and it was beautifully written just amazingI bet ... U WISHED THEY DID MORE IN THE DREAM😉.
I loved th newspaper thing was awesomeThanx😃.
Now the complain partEeeks ... time to run away😆.
I did not like manyata's reaction I mean she was a man who looked like udayveer a carbon copy she was in his arms and all she sais uday and that's it such sophificated behavior I mean she was VEER who looked like udayvver she was suppose to uum hug and act all crazy remember what she did whjen she saw aryan and this is her hsuband and all she did was nothing
I mean nothing she had to jump and hug him that's what I was acceptingGood point ... I'll rectify it in the next chapter. Thanks for pointing it out.Just a reminder for you ... my story began , FROM JUST AFTER THE TAJPOSHI. So in this story , she NEVER MET ARYAN ... & ACTED ALL CRAZY FOR HIM!!!
I mean even if manyat was dead and the great udayveer would see her look like he would also go all crazy but the meeting was not as I thought but then its just my pov its ur story and u know what u doingNo Saira ... U WERE RIGHT. And I'm glad u said something about it. I will correct it.
Over all I loved the chapter and please update super duper soonNO!!!
I also loved veer's confrontations with his mother and the last line was superbAwww 😳.
And manyata saying this is her uday
I want veer and uday to be different poeple please
So that u can have Veer ... RIGHT???Manyata should make her share of mistakes lolzPlease elaborate ... 😕
And I loved the scene where the kids tease uday for being a prince aww my veer * winkOh , the scene where SWETA makes her debut😆.