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Hi , comment edited on pg 22. Thanks 😊.

Originally posted by: ...navina...

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Splendid👏!!! Awesome update di 👍🏼. It truly was!

Varun and Uday's "double-meaning" talk at the beginning was great. Then Udayveer's conversation with the soldiers was rather informative ... I mean , he was given a lesson ; right there , whilst on the trip😆.

Yes informed him its not gonna be that easy😆

The meeting with his guru , was utterly perfect😃. Brilliantly written. I loved how humbled Uday became after just a single sentence from Manyata. He really became dedicated to fulfill the task he came there for. I thoroughly enjoyed his dialogues there. The best part was when he told Manyata that he will call her "PRINCESS" ... and she agreed to it😳😃!

age age dekho hota hain kya 😊😉

Then , his flashback of the last time he came to Devgarh ... was beautiful. Manyata was so chirpy then😳 ... hope in the next 6 months that Uday is going to be here ; he brings back the CHEERFUL , WITTY PRINCESS that he knew.

Yah of course...thats why I brought him in Devgarh😉

Happy about the fact that Manyata has permitted Uday to stay at the LIBRARY with her☺️. Maybe he will be able to stir up the repressed memory she has of him😉.

Of course he'll do that but dhire dhire...this love story is gping to be bit slow as they are teacher and student and that too in ancient time😊

It was a great update di.

Really enjoyed it😛

Very eager to read about how Uday copes with the 3:30 am "wake-up" call 😉😆!!!

Please update soon,

... thanx 4 the PM😊.

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Finally the most awaited Manveer meeting.Uday is losing his control.he rly finds her Goddess Saraswathi.Their dance was beautiful tho it was dandiya.its colourful.

Originally posted by: andy.a

i know am late but am really sorry

i did comment before but it did not get posted

the update was really lovely

poor uday got a class when he came to devgarh starting from the guard

manyata is indeed like some goddess calm, composed

really want uday to stir her hidden feelings and make her lively as she was before

uday is really gona have a tough time with manyata

continue soon and thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: panchaali

Awwwn Thanks and hugs dear 🤗

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

finally we hav uday here
kitne updates tadpake rakha tha mekko. sigh of relief lol...
aur manyata kitni nadaan hain, thodasa chota tha kya update?? i mean jyada kuch hua nai. and luvd uday's sense of humour...
unnati hain isiliye sab kuch thik chal raha hain...
warna toh i mean...
cant wait for the teaching to start...