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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
Outstanding it was confusing but it seems intresting
I really like it
I have two suggestions
1) Ahaana
2) Arya
For the two royal girl names
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
Great Promo
guess Manveer got separated bcuz of sumthing
and Manyata doesnt tell UV abt deir daughter for 2 yrs
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
U all r at the point but somewhere u r wrong.. So keep reading guys to know the truth and andy thanks for appreciating but i don't think that i m better in writing than u and navina. And yeah i don't think i can deserve a hat off to me. Well thanks andy. And zaneb and san.gar thanks for those royal names , i will think about it..and now anushruti i think u r some right but a little bit wrong..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Hey safia
you write really well
what i commented came from my heart
you deserve it
continue soon
and continue to pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
u r writing really good or should say fantastic
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: andy.a

Hey safia
you write really well
what i commented came from my heart
you deserve it
continue soon
and continue to pm me

well thanks andy.. Will pm u when update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
nice promo!!
ManVeer have a daughter!!
its so interesting!!
update soon!!
thanks 4 pm!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
____Chapter 6:____
SUB CHAPTER: THE HONEY MOON
The next day was beautiful for the couple. It was as if there all problems were solved and now would be a happy life EVER AFTER.but ;life is a race in which problems always come and be solved and they never stopped; this is called LIFE.
(I think that u all get my point)

The sunlight lit at the beautiful sleepy couple , who were in each other arms. This was the first morning of the married couple for their new HEAVEN LIFE (who are we kidding, nobody's life is like really heaven in this world, whether they would be rich or poor).

Manyata first woke up, braided her hairs, got out off of the comforter, wore her slippers , and get in the bathroom. After taking a steam bath she come out of the bathroom, choose to wear blue anarkali dress. She was almost ready when a servant with their hot tea , knocked on the door.
After taking the tea , she awaken Uday , with her wet kiss on his forehead.
hey princess, good morning; get ready.
I'm all ready Uday. Not routinely ready; i mean pack your bags.Why ;are we going to direct to heaven. No , for now ; we are going to NewYork, but yeah one day i will take you to heaven ; specially made for us.
What do you think yourself Mr. Udayveer singh that everything in this universe is your's . And by the way NewYork for what?She asked huskily.
Oh hhoo princess, don't u like my idea. Okay we can make this trip as our honeymoon.
Well mr. Udayveer , what we will do on honeymoon? We are happy moreover here and i don't want to leave my dear homeland.
ohh princess u r saying just like we are leaving india for the whole life.
But uday...
But watt kuch nhi ab jaldi se ready ho jao,, oh god how i could forgot it ..
Now what happened?
Princess i have to attend a meeting and then have to take some papers and plus our tickets.. So u carry on your packing, driver will pick you and i will meet you direct at airport ok..
okay. She said in a awful mood..
Princess now don't be so sad, did u had your breakfast??
Kichh! Nhi ..
To phir sirf apne halkat vera hubby ka sir hi khao gi ya breakfast bhi karo gi!! Chalen.. Hmmm.. In a cheerful mood.
After having Breakfast and taking a steamer shower , uday left he mansion.
Whereas manyata in a meanwhile get ready for the long and restless flight of 1/ half day.. She left the mansion after greeting everybody. Both were then met at the airport. When they get in the airplane, she remained shocked as the whole plain was only for them. There were rooms with full useful things for the married couple, the bathrooms, lounge , kitchen, living room and other things that would be at a home. Now for manyata; the flight wasn't restless as she felt so. For the welcome , they were amazed, not uday but only manyata; as she met her own sister and her jiju ( yes jai and jagat are married and happy couple, just because uday was in comma and the other problems were ruining devgardh family, they got married simply, a little bit celebration was there , as jagat had to marry fast otherwise than they couldn't marry for one year; as jagat had to go for canada because his full work was there unfinished and manyata didn't wanted to force their problems on jai and jagat's life so she agreed them and excused jai for marrying jagat if she wants) ..
Jai tu yahan... Said an extra happy manyata..
Han jiji, and u know aapke hubby ka hi ye sara plan tha..
Aur hamara bhi madam.. Said cheerfully jagat..
Well jiji, aap se mil k bohut acha laga. U don't have any idea that how i miss u in canada for last one year.. And now u know what we are again back in india.. Said jai..

MANYATA: really.. Tu sach bol rahi hai na jai.. Aur han jagat agar ab tum hamari behan ko humse dur le gae na to phir hum jai ko tumhare sath nhi chorenge.. Soch lo kahin mahenga na par jae..

JAGAT: oh god!! Yeh toh sach mein mehenga parege. Hum in k bagair ek minute nhi reh sakte or tum humein humesha k liye door kar do gi ... Not fair manyata...
UDAY: agar tum sab convo khatam ho gae ho to hum yeh batana chahte hain k hum bhi yahan per mojood hein wifey... Aur wese bhi jai tumhari behen ne hume to itna yaad nhi kiya..Indicating manyata..
JAI: uday don't be so jealous of two sisters love.. Aur wese bhi uday jiji jitna tumhara khayal rakhti hai na tum utna unka khayal dreams me bhi nhi kar saktey hmmm...
Tumhe pata hai uday, jab tum comma me the tab bhi jiji daily fast rakhti thi sirf tumhare li...ouchhh!!! Manyata pinched her hand as she don't want uday to known about her daily fasting for him..
But uday noticed manyata's indication to jai and understand that her princess is hiding something..
MANYATA: ohh hoo tum sab bhi na kya purani batein lekr beth gae.. Uday and jagat tum dono apne rooms mein chalo hum aur jai abhi kuch baat karke aate hain..
Both the gentlemen's left and the sisters sit in the living room and start their conversation.
MANYATA: jai , pagal hogae thi kya .. Uday ko kuch bhi nhi batana hai.
JAI: but kyon jiji, uday ko pata hona chahiye ke apne uske liye kitna kuch kiya, fast rakhna , roz roz her mandir jaakar pooja karwana, hafto tak khana na khana , and yes how can i forget , raaton tak uday k liye jaagna to jese apki life ban chuki thi...
MANYATA: phir bhi jai yeh baat uday ko nhi pata chalni chahiye warna...
UDAY: warna kya.. He was witnessing all their convo between the two sisters..
MANYATA: uday tummm yahann...
JAI: uhemm uhemmm... Jiji hum chalte hain..
MANYATA: hmm.. Chal uday hum bhi chalte hain..
Both left but uday in a angry tone asked manyata: manyata i need answer...
He shook her and grab her in their room in a jet speed and locked the door..
UDAY: manyata i need answer.why did u do that, (but soon calm down) itna pyar karti ho humse!!
MANYATA: khud se bhi zyada..
UDAY:
Aur humain batana bhi nhi zaroori samjha. Manyata yeh sab karne ki kya zaroorat thi.
MANYATA: uday tum to ese keh rhe ho jese ab to fast rakhti hi...
UDAY: what , don't tell me manyata that today is also your fast.. Uhhh... Subha ko breakfast kiya tha... Manyata!!! Why u r doing all this.
MANYATA: because i love you uday..!!
UDAY: per ab hum theek hain princess.
MANYATA:tabhi to fast rakh rhi hoon, kyon k mene wada kiya tha bhagwaan ji se k jab mera halkat verra theek hojaye ga to mein ek hafta fast rakhoon gi.. And fikar not because today is my last fast..
UDAY: i love u too princess. I hope hum bhi tumhare liye kuch kar sake..
The next evening their flight landed on the way of newyork airport. Both the couples proceeded to the Uday Niwas hotel NewYork.
Uday you didn't tell me about this hotel. I forgot.. That's not fair uday. Princess if you are talking about fair then u also not doing fair to me. What! Yes see na this is third week of marriage and see nothing has happened between us yet. Manyata knew very well that what he is talking about! Uday k bache , every time u are thinking about one thing.

The days were passing like a jet speed and both the couple then come back to india. The love between uday and manyata was unlimited . She asked uday to join a institute as she was enrolled. Soon she joined the english institute.




So this is today's chapter..šŸ˜† I know its not better than others but all i could do is this. Next time would try for the better update.šŸ˜• Today i couldn't do because i was busy in my school project.🤢. Ones again sorry.😳
Edited by safia25 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
Very nice update
aww Manyata kept fast for Uday
how sweet
do cont soon
Edited by anushruthi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
Awww...how sweet manyata kept fast for uday sooo...cute...lovely update dear
love it...plzz...update soon
thanx for PM.

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