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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
nice update waiting for the secret to reveal
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
plzzz update next part quickly can't wait to know the past incident and don't forget to pm me. i'm waiting for it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Wow awesome update loved it
Cant wait till the next update
Their past is going to be revealed
Really curious
Thx again
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Awsomeee...mind blowing update
cnt wait for next part plzz...update soon thanx for PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
booosh i read all the chapters and i must say all were very awsum... and well written...u did great job jan...👏 👏 👏... loved it to the core... the idea of making PKHTNIK 2 was awsum...keep it up... GOD bless u ... plz plz plz give the 5 chap sooon i cant wait further and thanks 4 the p.m...love u
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
hey when r u going to update next part plzzz make it fast u promised me thatu'll update it soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 5:

After long night manveer were tracing their way to their room quietly , so that no one could disturb from their deep sleep because of their voices. They went to their room now where after changing stood near the window to feel the cold breezes of air. She was kept thinking about the night when the flash of their past came in her thought and made her more nd more sad as some strong thunder storms has crashed her. She just hold the handle of the window tightly and soon fresh tears fell from her eyes . She recalled his name" uday ... Uday... " by holding the handle of window more tightly.. He immediately came And asked her: are u okay princess" in so much terrible voice but then calm down he saw her fine.. What happened manyata? He asked.. Uday our past,... Our past.. It was so horrible!! I thought that i would lost u ever after..she replied. But now the fact is that i m with u and u r with me forever, he complimented. But uday that day was so terrible.
FLASH BACK 1:
When akash killed manyata by shooting him of four bullets. She screamed in pain and took promise from uday that he would have to live his life without her as she knew that she wouldn't be anymore. But he didn't accepted her promise as he couldn't live without his princess. When manyata declared that their dreams of being manveer wouldn't complete then uday filled her maang with his blood which was still bleeding when akash shot his shoulder. They became manveer and she asked for a kiss as the last kiss of their life, she suddenly losses the grip of her from his neck and then she breath lastly in her life as they both and others thought but destiny wants something else. Uday who was lively kissing her bride suddenly felt that she losses her grip , he knew that she was not anymore and screamed in harshing tears " manyata , princess no , u can't leave me , u have to come back. If u can come back to me after 16 yeArs then why don't now? Plz princess wake up" by shacking her. And when all the family members came there beside both of them they saw that both were laying on the floor. The good thing was they could feel the heart beat of uday but not as of manyata.
Jai suddenly felt that her sister's index finger moved a bit.she declared that took jiji and uday to hospital now! as she was feeling ashamed for what she done with her jiji. she made her fool to meet to akash and because of her , her jiji's live was in curse but she could feel that her jiji was still alive As both the sister have the same and true blood relation. her hatered was now turning in love, true love..(kehte hain na k jab koi chala jata hai ,us ki qadr baad me hoti hai) same happened to jai. Manveer were taken to hospital, the family knew that manyata is not anymore but still only hope was there for the good.after one hour, when all members were praying for the good including jai, the doctor came and announced: " i have two news, one is good and other ... ,,, other is bad.!! The good is that your,,... Her highness is now out of the danger" when Ds interuppt :" but howz its possible as of manyata's heart beat was not working, i meant its super good that manyata is alive but is it god's miracle". Where jai responded: Ds when we were there where akash shot jiji, after her last breath, i felt that jiji's finger was moved a bit".doctor:" well may be its god miracle". All of sudden unnati asked to doctor: howz my dada?". Doctor replied:" the bad news is thAt yuvraj sa' is in critical condition. I m sorry to say but he,,... He,,... He is in comma now!!"
All got slashed and shocked with doctors's reply . Unati and griraj screamed: uday!!!!... After some other minutes , six doctors and four nurses ran fastly to a room .. When jai asked , the nurse relied that:" her highnessis breathing so faster, its an emergency, do pray for the good. When doctors came out of the ward , one of the doctors replied to the family: "the good news is that her highness is in conscious and now u can meet her but be sure that she couldn't get stressed".. All members entered in manyata's room but they didn't found her , a nurse informed them that she is in yuvraaj's ward..they moved there but stayed outside as they saw that manyata was harshly crying near uday...manyata:" uday why ? Why? Why did u leave me but i know u will come soon out off this comma as now your princess is alive, your wifey is alive. So u don't have to dare to harm your life.. Uday answer me.. Uday when will u hug me and make me reliable !! Huhnn ? I love u mere halkat vere.. I love u loads and i know this love is so eternal that u would surely come out off this comma soon.".. She ordered everyone that she wants to uday at devgardh palace to take care of him. All agreed and uday was taken to devgardh palace now. As the days passed manyata was taking more and more care of him. Uday was now improving and it was now about 10 months passed.
Flashback:2
That day , manyata immediately called doctor sahab, as uday responded a little bit. After doctor sahab completed uday's checkup, he soonly gave surprise to everyone that uday is now out off of the comma.(phew) a big relief everyone took except manyata as doctor sahab forbidden her to not meet to uday, who came out off of the comma now and if he sudden see manyata, again a shock might take him in comma or in a critical condition as; uday was got in the comma before beacuse of manyata's death.( Actually not real death)..(poor manveer).manyata without any excuse accept the advise of the doctor.everyone visit uday ,who denied to talk to them. Jai tried to inform him about manyata but failed as komal stopped her. On the very next morning manyata shifted her all useable things to the very far room from uday's so he can't find her. On that very same day many incidents occurred but thanks to the raj mahal (that is so big) so that manveer couldn't meet. On the next night, poor uday was counting the seconds of clock and when it stuck on 12 o'clock , he admired on the photo of manyata and wished her photo "a very happy anniversary".and was requesting her to come back in her life. Unatti and manyata both, were witnessing his talks to manyata's photo. Unatti ran to her room crying hardly whereas manyata ,the full night ,spent there to listen all that golden words that her soul ;her love was witnessing in her memory. In the next morning,actually a polite morning; uday went to nagafgarh and manyata behind him.he wasn't aware about manyata and his car's zigzag motion was indicating manyata that something was gonna be wrong, so she kept a close eye on his every act and movement; in another car. After a while what the hell she saw was , uday's car crushed by a truck and uday rolled out off of the car and stop at the cliff end where her princess died; eventually. Manyata ,in a jet speed; get off of her car and ran towards that cliff. She , without thinking much, run towards him. When she came near him and uday thought that that the figure of manyata is his only imagination. So without hinking more a smile came on his lips and he uttere: "princess here i come" . Manyata was well known that he hadn't the fear to die even hehadn't know very that she is alive. Manyata held his hand tightly while uday looses his grip and then she pull him up with her full force. She took a sigh of relief when both were safe and sound. Uday was still in a shocked to see his princess , and was assuring himself that she is not alive but his eyes were willing that she is in front of him." Uday r u ok" said a weird manyata. When she didn't got any response then finally shook him to made reassured that she IS AlIVE. He then hugged her as soon as she also hugged him back. Then told all the truth and incident to him. They were happy that after a lot of troubles they again united.but uday in the core of the heart was feeling as if it was all a dream before a deep sleep. But manyata consoled him.
Fleash back 2 ends:( sorry guys the entire situation i couldn't make it deeply but just try to make it clear to u all)
Manveer came out of their thoughts.
Uday: princess hume toh ab bhi yehi lagta hai k yeh sab ek khwaab hai.
Manyata: khwaab to mene dekhe the un 10 months mein k kab tum us gehri neend se utho ge aur mujhe ek safaid ghorre per bitha k apne sath le jao ge..
Uday: so i did..
Manyata: pata hai tujhe uday , wo 10 months tmhare baghair 10 janam k barabar lagte the, ek ek din me yeh soch k guzaqrti thi k kab tum apni gehri neend se utho ge aur mujhe apna dubara banao ge.
Uday: aur dekho princess aj tumhare saare khwaab pooree ho rahe hain!
Hmmm... Manyata added..
Both then covered themselves in the comforter on the bed and start making love.

I don't think ne ither its short nor long.. Its normal update as on my wish.. Well hit like button and leave your comment. Do criticize me as well, 😭 if u don't like this update. Thanks all.. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Awesome story

Plz pm me when u update

Read it one go

Finally got to know manveer's past


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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Awesome update loved it
Wow thx for revealing the past
It was really intresting
Cant wait till the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrincessZaneb

Awesome update loved it
Wow thx for revealing the past
It was really intresting
Cant wait till the next update

i don't think so.. Well i do my best but don't think it was best... Thanks for liking.. 😆

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