True Love is Always Together in the end+note pg 3 - Page 2

Originally posted by: -Zina-

WoW!
This was so wonderful loved it to the core!
That pakash he tried to force himself manyata jerk!
but we know our jungli billi she did well with him!
i was just imagining manyata in that HOT & SEXY look!
and the last and final part hoo it was damn HOT uff! hayye mera princy he is to SMEXY to handle!
GREAT JOB!
don't tell me its your first try its amazing u ROCKED it i bet no one can say its ur first try! now i am really looking forward to read a FF or a SS from u!
do write more ur a awesome writer😊

seriously u liked it and im looking forward to write a ss or a ff soon

Originally posted by: annysyed

Awww my love is an awsum writer that too naughty and romantic😉😉 this was so much hot hot hot hot hawtt hot hawtt hot hot😉❤️ ,the love night of manveer was jus outstanding👍🏼 bechare majnu k marne pe kisi ko b afsoos nhi huva🤣

thx luv of my life 😉

Originally posted by: vrinda.diva

awesum ..
this forum has got soo many talented writers great work keep it up

u think that im a talented writer thx but im a newbie in this field

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Great work Livvy. Very , very HOT ☺️!!! Manveer having an affair, Akash killed in an accident ... ... TOO GOOD!!!

thx but ur update a night to remember was way hotter than this 😉

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

Wow Livy!...that really good dear👏...It was very hot and Akash died in an accident?😆...I think M killed him with the help of someone😉

thx for appreciating my work and ur prediction m8 b correct😉

Guyz if I get more than 30 likes I will start planning to write an ss and that to an hot one !!!!!!!

thank you to all whom liked my os