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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome plot
love it
its very different and nice
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 1
Bridgraaj sat on a bench with his back to a strip[ of bush planted sward fenced by the park railings and the row fronting him across was a wide stretch of cars .Delhi Nehru Park with its rattle and hoot of traffic ,lay immediately to his right .It was some thirty past six on an early April evening and dusk had fallen heavily over the park as he saw Udayveer and Manyata playing together . Just then Giriraaj flung himself into the seat .
"you do not seem to be in a very good temper " said Bridraaj judging that he was expected to take due notice of the demonstration. Giriraaj turned towards him with a look of irritation
"you would not be in a good mood if you had got a wife like Gayatri...she is just so impossible to handle just now I had a debate with her on the color of the new room made for the coming baby"
"yes" said Bridgraaj dispassionately
" according to her it is a baby girl this time...even I am a dad i think its a boy and this naughty brat is as usual on his mother side ...so both are ready to get the room colored pink but if its a boy they had it"
"Giri accepting a baby girl is a right thing to do as if its a boy Gayatri is scared that she might loose even this companies as soon as he becomes friendly with Manyata...just like our Udayveer"
"on this note I think a baby girl is better as my over possecive boy will murder his kid brother if he comes to know that Manyata is getting close to him...this kids are so adorable "
"when Komal left me i felt my life going dark...but it was Manyata s laugh that made me live again...now the only reason for me to live is Manyata ..Giri promise me if ever I am not there you will take care of my daughter as you know our life is filled with risk this moment we are happy but maybe next you will find a tear of blood in me...so promise me"
"Bridg no need of thinking those now and I will always keep her safe as Manyata is like my own daughter or maybe my gonna be bahuu"
They looked at each other and smiled as a sharp ring rang in Giriraaj 's ears.He jerked up in his bed it was just some memories in form of dreams many years had passed and thing have certainly changed .He sat on his bed and looked out of the tent .The long twilight faded into night .Jaigarh lay envolped in darkness but for dim light of the moon that shone throughfleecy clouds casting a pale light over waters of river .He got out of the bed and went outside the tents were covered with thick dried jungles there was a deadly stillness of the surrounding jungle which was occasionally broken by the shrill cry of the cicada ,hammering of the hollow woodpecker or eventually moans of pleasure of a girl. But all these silence were rare and the silence of the forest was returned to shallow them up Giriraaj place a cigarette between his lips he struck a match lit the cigarette hurriedly and put out the light .But he noticed a shadow and pulled out his revolver and pointed at the figure...
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Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
_Annesha_ thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
A still from the Cadbury Oreo ad.small udayveer singhssmall manayata
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Posted: 12 years ago
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THAT IS AWESOME DEAR!!!
VERY AWESOME!!!
I LOVED IT TO THE CORE. DO PM ME
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wel come back dear
Woww.,,,awsome...
Love it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Welcome Back Annesha 🤗
Awesome update 👏
Loved it ...

Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey dear !!!!!!
can u plz update ur this story,,,,,i mean i am in love with ur this story... m so looking forward to reading it.
even voted fr this story on ur poll.
plz update soon asap !!!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry fr double post
Edited by coolsaloni.nira - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thxx for liking it but i m confused ok 2morrow i will decide and proceed with whichever get the most votes.
and thxxx again
gudnight
sweet dreamz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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chapter 2

Giriraaj kept his revolver back and a wave of relief surging over him as the figure was no enemy of him but his own son Udayveer .

"you did not sleep beta?"

He shook his head smiling "dad even you did'nt sleep is there something that is bottering you ?"

"nothing much I am just giving this plan a second thought'I mean what if that prosecutor finds out your identity '.it a huge danger to your life I think I should send someone else"

"dad I am your son whole of my life I have played with danger and this is my only chance to take revenge from those people for killing Maa and Man yata.." he voiced softened on the last word as Giriraaj said

"beta you have to control over your emotions and I guess you know even that prosecutor name is Manyata"

"yes I do and her younger sister Unnati and the boyfriend of Unnati 's Vijay and Manyata 's most close friend name is Abhimanyu"

"looks like you know her whole life history"

"dad more then friends we must keep our eyes on our enemy'but I really don 't know why is she back of that Rangoon bombing"

"maybe she has her own war to fight that is none of our concern'. But I must say she is very brave going against Arnav Khurrana

"but end of the day she is a girl dad..that is the reason she is in hospital" with a smirk

"so did you talk to her sister "

waiting for him to come and complete his job .Even Uday noticed it and Giriraaj said

"I think it is too late I better go to sleep

Goodnight"

"goodnight dad"

Giriraaj went inside his tent while Uday went to Jainandini .He bent and kissed her on her cheeks ,then lifted her onto his shoulder and started down the steps to the tent .Then threw her on the bed and jumped on her and said

"so was you missing me my sh*t?"

"Uday I really don 't know why do you always say that why can 't you call me something sweet like honey'or anything"

"those are names for wifes dear and you are my lust baby not love"

"why not love" she said dug her nails in and started to seduce him and continued

"lets get married na baby please"

He jerked her hand and sat on the bed ,while even she got up and he said

"I can 't I am already married"

FLASHBACK

A Five year old Uday sits on his bed with his face upset as a 3 year old Manyata sneak in his room and stands infront of him with her both hands on her ears and chuckled

"mujhei maaaf kardo abh Udaybear'"

"humshei kyui maffi mang rahi hoa jao ush raj sei mangoi jiskei saath tum kal pura syaam khel rahi thi" he said .He was angry on Manyata since last evening she was playing with another boy and he became possessive so he has been not talking to her

"mujhei paata nahi mene kya kia..tum dektei bhi nahi hoi mere taraf paar agar tum eihi chatei hoi toh thik hai mei jakei raj koh sorry bol dete hui"

As she made her way out of the room he grabbed her arm and pulled her inside the room making her pin to the wall

"koi zaruraat nahi ush chuchunder kei pass jannei ki chalo hum tumharei sath kheltei hai"

There was a sparkle in her eyes as he passed her a sweet smile and she caught her arm and dragged him to the playroom he say there was a small candle and a small plate with crimson powder . He looked at it and asked

"eii kya hai..?" she left his arm and said

"stupid..meri Barbie ki sadhi hai"

"phirsei..last Friday hi toh hua than a"

"haah paar Barbie nei divorce lei lia na"

"chalo Barbie koh choro ajj hum dono shadhi kartei hai'" he said with a smirk

"nahi baba koh paata chalega toh bohot daath paregi"

"nahi chalega'" he assured anD THEY CAUGHT EACH OTHER HANDS others hand and as they were about to take rounds she asked

"paar Udaybear mujhei toh wua saath rounds walei promise nahi atta"

"stupid tumhei nahi paata" he scholded and tears started to swell up in her eyes as she said "miss nei mujei nahi sikhaya Udaybear"

He wipped her tears and said "koi baath nahi humei bhi anhi atta hum apnei sei banagei"

They exchanged a smile as they started to take rounds and he said

"first promise tum humarei siva kissi aur kei sath nahi khelogi humarei maa kei annei walla baby ke saath bhi nahi

Third promise 24 ghantei mei atleast 22 ghantei tum humarei saath bitaogi

Forth promise hum joh kahegei tum woahi karogi"

He was cut as she complained

"abh bhash mujhei phi promise karnei doi udaybear"

"theek hai crying baby karo"

"sixth..oppps sorry fifth promise tum joh yeh humesha merei saath kecha tani kartei hoa abh sei nahi chalega

Sixth tumhe mei jab Barbie keh saath khelnei bulao bhaaag maat jana

Aur last wala mujhei kabhi choot maat pocana"

Then he took the crimson powder and put on her forhead

END OF FLASHBACK

He rubbed his tears and said

"you know Jai the next morning I found myself in Jaigarh and on asking dad said she and maa died in an accident done by the people who was responsible for Rangoon bomblast"

She kept he hands on his shoulder

"its ok baby if being your sh*t makes you happy I guess I would ratter call myself that .Then he gently cupped her face andkissed her pationately and they fulfilled there lust

Edited by annabh - 12 years ago

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