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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsomee...update pari
OMG..uday ka accident...
Hailaa...ye maya toh pyar ki dushman banti jaa rahi hai...uday ki engegment ...hahaha...i know woh toh hone nahi wali aur agar by chnce ho bhi gayi toh shadi toh hone nahi wali plzz update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
@sana dear abi to pta hi ni ki use kuch kuch hota h..
lol..
manyta jb tk pagal na bne tb tk mja kha aata h.
pari
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sweta thanx 4 cmnt dear..
Searious accident ni hua...
Pari
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...just loved ManVeer scene...Manyata is so cute innocent...and their dialogues were naughty n cute...When i read car hit Uday i got worried but thank god Uday is fine...waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
kya yar pari tujhe cumments dene keliye toh mujhe cumments mein bhi PHD karni padegi...
tu toh likhti hi itna acha hai ki words hi nahi rehte...
phir bhi awesummm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
kya yar pari tujhe cumments dene keliye toh mujhe cumments mein bhi PHD karni padegi...
tu toh likhti hi itna acha hai ki words hi nahi rehte...
phir bhi awesummm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lol,mahi PHD krle or mujhe bi sikhadiyo cmnts krna..
pari
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Posted: 12 years ago
UPDATE UPDATE PARI!!!
pLEASEe 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maanveer ss:ajnaabi ehsaass
part-14...
Uday apne rum me jata h.
unanti'chotu,kya hua?
akash'ye kaun sa swal h gudiya,use aaram krne
do,chalo jagat..
unanti'bhaiya main chotu k pas hi ruku...
plz..
Jagat'bhaiya rukne do ise,hm chalte h.
Akash'jayda preshan mt kriyo.
Unanti'ok..
wodono chale jate h...

Unanti'kya hua?sad kyn ho?manyata ni mili kya?
Uday'arey usne reason btaya wo kyn ni aai..
unanti'kyn?
uday'uske liye rishta aaya tha.
Unanti'wow,usko bi aapko bi to aaj piya mili h..
Uday'pr usne mujhe...

Piya cum in uday's rum'uday,aap thik to ho,meri to saanse ruk gai thi..
uday blabring'i m fyn bs wo thodi si chot lgi h...
Piya'ok,aap kha chale gye the,hm apko puri party me dhund rhe the..
unanti'piya chotu to party me hi tha..
Piya'unanti tumhein pta hona chahiye main tumhari bhabhi hu,or ye chotu ni bhaiya h tumhare...
Unanti uday lookd each other..
unanti'piya main hmesha se..
maya cum'shi to kh ri h piya,gudiya ab use chotu bolna bnd kro..
Piya unanti ko attitude se dekhti h...
uday'wht r u sayng mom?tumhare ya kisi or k aane se hm bhai bhno ka relation ni bdlega..
maya'uday tum,
uday'mom plz,piya aaye ya koi bi ye mere liye gudiya hi h or main iske liye chotu hi hu..
maya'piya beta,uday unanti bache h to jyada laad pyar ne bigad diya h.
piya'koi bat ni aunty hm ye aadat sudhar dege..
maya smile'chaliye piya,aaram kijiye aapki mumy to sgai wale din hi ayegi...
Piya'gud nyt uday nd unanti...
Uday'gud nyt mom..
Maya aankh dikhate huye'uday..
uday'gud nyt gudiya.
gud nyt piya.
piya smile..
wo chale jate h...

unanti'chotu,ye piya se shaddi mt kro,khadus h...
Uday'gudiya,mumy ki baato ko main ignore ni kr skta..tujhe pta h na..
Unanti'ya i know i know mom to hm sbki bst h,bt chotu phr bi soachna...
Ok gud nyt nd yes manyata ko meri trf se congrats bolna...

Wo chali jati h...

Uday sota h nd wo flashbck me chala jata h.
(flashbck)
sir wo main dulhan aap ..
uday'main kya?
Manyata'sir mujhe to ldke wale dekhne aye the.
uday'kya?btaya kyn ni.
Manyata'sir jb shadi hn jyegi tb btadeti..'
(flashbck end)
uday apni aankhe touch krta h jo thodi nam hogai h'mujhe ye ho kya rha h?main kyn itna preshan hu.?
Uff,shayed aaj jyada thak gya hu...

Jay'ha to bta jiju keise lge?
manyata'of oh actualy bat ye thi ki wo tha jldi me,main thi dukhi party me na jane se to main aane ko taiyar ni thi,or wo jaldi me tha use kisi party me jana tha...
To main to uska party me sunke or bhadk gai,phr main gai hi ni...
Or wo bi uth ke chala gya,usne bola phr kbi aauga to use taiyar rhne ko khna...

jay'o,o mtlb chahra ni dekha,chal agli bar main bi rhugi...tere sath...
Or tujhe pta h hmare dono faatu boss unki bi sagai h do din bad yaani sunday ko..
manyata'ha pta h.
jay'keise?
manyata'abi tune hi to btaya...
Both laugh..
manyata'aacha h na,uday sir thode bigade h,shadi hogi to sudharne wali aajayegi..
jay'ha pr tu kyn itni sad h,or pta h uday sir pta ni kha chale gye the party me se or wha se jb aaye tb unka chota sa accident huya tha.
manyata shockd'kya?jyda to ni lgi thi na..
jay'calm down,sb thik h,unki piya h na unke pas..
Manyata sad'chal soja.
gud nyt...
Wo so jate h...

In nxt mrng..
uday taiyar hoke aata h'hy dad gud mrng,main chalta hu.
maya'uday tumhari tbiyet.
uday'mom,i m fyn,don't wory...
piya'uday ye lo nashta..
uday guse me'dad mom gudiya bye...

Wo bolke chala jata h..
br unanti hste h.
maya'isme hsne ki kya bat h?
piya'aunty pirya kha h?
br'beta wo jagat k sath ofice gai h.
piya'ok.
maya'chalo beta hm shoping krne chalte h..
piya'ok aunty...

In ofice
akash'karan,cmpany nu.1pe uday le aaya,ab hmeine isko isi position pe rkhna h.
Karan'ofcourse,ab ye mera ofice bi to h.
uday'bhai,karan abi nya h achanaj bhaar mt chod dena ispe.
jagat'ya ryt.
Kran'4 kind information main dubai me suces buisnesman ka beta hu,or main 10din ni pure sal ka experienace h mere pas.
uday'tbi to tumhare dad.
akash'uday chup..wo baatein purani h bhul jao...
Uday jagat chup...

sudden manyata cum in ofice
'hello akash sir.
akash'oh,cumng manyata how r u?bdi patli hogai ho.
manyata'kya sir?
Aapki trh hr koi aaram ka kam thodi dete h..
Karan use cntinuosly dekhta h nd uday use muskura k dekhta h.
kran mnayta ko dekh k city bjata h..
Uday guse me khada hota hi tbi manyata bolti h'aap kaun?aapki mumy naach ri h kya jo city bja rhe ho..
uday hste-2 beith jata h,jagat akash bi hste h..
karan shockd hoke sbko dekhta h.
akash'karan ye h manyata dad ki secretary..
Karan'o,secretary h or
manyata'or mere nakhre bhoot h yhi na..gisa pita dialouge new dialouge leke aao..
Or sir ofice me dhang k log laaya kijiye,ye h kaun aakhir?
Akash'is ofice me ek nye sir h ye mr.karan mehta...
Manyata cuph'wo main.
uday'darne ki jrurt ni h manyata phli glti ki maafi to koi bi de deta h...
karan'ofcourse,maaf kiya ms.manyata...

Manyata'sry sir...
wo bolke chali jati h...

Uday apne cabin me beitha hua h,manyata cum..
'sir may i cuming...
Uday'ya cuming..
manyata bhaagi-2 aati h sir aapka accident hua tha kya?aapko chot ni aai na..

Uday'manyata mera chot sa accident or chote se accident me choti si hi chot aati h smjhe...
manyata'sir,phr bi mere ghr ki pipe ki to glti ni thi na...
Uday'wht dem it,ni mata tumhare ghr ki pipe ki ni tumhari baatoin ki ...
manyata'baatoin ki kya sir?
uday'ku
kuch ni..wo thodi si chot..
Manyata'ni sir.jyada to ni lgi,mujhe btaiye lgi kha h?
Uday manyata ka hath pkad leta h'main thik hu,chota sa accident tha,bda ni tha jis main mar..
manyata uske muh pe hath rkh leti h'ni sir aisa mt boliye,bhagwan kre ais kbi na ho...
uday uska hath apne muh(mouth)pr se htata h'tumhein kyn itni chinta h?
manyata' piya apki life me aane wali h sir...wo sir mujhe kam h main main chalti hu...
Uday use dekhta rhta h...

Continuos

pari
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Posted: 12 years ago
RES..☺️
Edited:- 🤣 🤣 Jus read all my pending updates togeher...😆
OMG Fantastic, superb, mindblowig , amazing, fabulous updates Pari jus too good.👏 👏 👏
OMG Piya's engagement with Uday.. She's despo..🤢 jus like Maya. I jus hate Maya's character n now this Karan's character too.. I know he'll doublecross UV's family n also'll do something wrong with Manyata..
OMG Uday pipe se..🤣 n Last office scene Aapki maa naach rahi hai kya ...😆 OMG Kya band bajayi Manyata ne too good..😆
I jus hope Uday confess his love to Manyata before Karan do anything wrong. PLS CHAMP UV KI FAMILY KO GAREEB MAT BANANA..😆
But update was really nice.😊 I love this FF. loved ur dialogues specially Manyata's.😉
Thanks for regular updates Pari.😊 Now I'll try to read ur updates regularly.😊 Thanks for the PM also.😛
Great updates.👍🏼keep up the good work Champ.😉
LOVE YOU.🤗 🤗

Edited by Vasishtha - 12 years ago

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