Episode 43:Dawn of a new beginning. Updated..

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Creative Creators Presents Episode 43

Dawn of a new beginning

Writer: Gargi

Manyata smiles and gets relieved at the thought that Jaggat still cared a lot about J. He was true about his feelings for her and really loved her even after being hurt and betrayed. Jaggat and J spends some happy moments together and Jaggat wishes her goodnight and walks off her room to leave, but hears a voice and stops. He turns around and finds Manyata smiling at him. Jaggat at first looks confused but then Manyata clears his doubts..

"So you came to meet J?...But she did a lot to make you upset,if I am not wrong...Then why do you still care for her?.."..Manyata asked, as she still wanted to confirm if he actually loved her.

"You are right Manyata, she betrayed me, hurt me a lot, and its not just the first time that she has hurt me..She betrayed me earlier for Maharaj Udayveer, when she left me, and was about to get engaged to him.." He smirked and Manyata lowers her eyes, as if trying to avoid the situation, and was just about to say something but Jaggat interrupted.

"Don't worry Manyata, I have no intensions to embarrass you or anyone of your family members..Its just that I am trying to pour out my feelings, since you asked me about it. Yes I did get upset, after I got to know about her link ups with Abhay Dev. Honestly speaking, its not that I am always available for girls. Even I am from a good family background, holding a powerful position in the country and in other parts of the world. We even finance Mahasabha and their activities, if you know it. But inspite of all these facts, I could not hold on to my ego and grievances. You know why?.."

And after hearing so much Manyata was tired but at this question she looked up to him, for an answer..."Its because I LOVE HER..and these three strong words did not allow me to hate her for what she did to me. I tried to forget her but could not. I still feel the same for her. Still love her and want to be with her in every step. And after getting to know that she was not responsible for the mess and its all Abhay's evil plans, I could not help but come to her and support her in her time of need. You know what?..I always believed that if you truly love someone, you can never hate that person, no matter how much you are angry on your love. True love never dies and I have fallen in love with J more that ever!...and I am sure one day she will realise my love for her and will never eel the need to search for love in someone else."..

Manyata was proud at him..Tears flowed through her eyes seeing his confidence..She was happy that her sister was really lucky to have a lover like Jaggat Singh Rathore. After a long stare she finally replied..."Thank You for clearing my doubts Jaggat..I didn't mind at all for what you said. I just have one request, rather want a favour from you...Can I get it?"

Jaggat was confused and asked her" What do you want from me?"

Manyata smiled and came forward, "I want you to propose J for marriage and also I want a promise that you will always love her and her child as your own" Jaggat smiled back and nodded in acceptance.




Guys here is the next part!..enjoy😛


That night Manyata was very happy. She stood by the window, and looked out at the moonlit night. She thought that just the way the moon shines brighter slowly and gradually with the increase of each day, problems in their life would get over slowly and happiness was on its way. She closed her eyes and felt the cool breeze that blew outside, when two strong hands traced her waist slowly from back. At first she liked and enjoyed it, thinking about her loving husband, but suddenly she remembered the previous night, when AD had held her like that and she thought it to be Uday. That thought was enough for Manyata to scream and turn swiftly but her mouth was covered by two strong and masculine hands and she calmed down seeing her own man in front of her. She completely broke down seeing him.

Manyata hugged him and started crying bitterly, her tears were getting uncontrollable..

"Princess, what happened?..kyu itna ro rahi ho?..humne kuch galat kiya kya?..haa?...plz answer me princess...Hum darana nahi chahte the tumhe baby but sorry agar tum dar gayi to..Plz kuch kaho princess, I can't see you crying.." ..he was really worried for her now and felt guilty for scaring her..

He broke the hug and pulled her back and lifted her face up to look at her.She was still crying and shaking a lot as if she had seen her ghost.The previous night wounds were still fresh for her, and although she remained strong in front og the other family members and didn't tell anyone what happened, but she broke out in front of Uday.."Princess bas. Ab ek aur asu nahi. Please tell me kya hua hai?..J ke liye pareshaan ho ya us Abhay ne kahi firse tumhe kisi tarha se pareshaan to nahi kiya na?..."...Hearing Abhay name she again starts crying and held him tight..

"Uday use mujhse kya chahiye?...kal usne mujhe isi tarha pakra tha ki meine socha ki tum ho..Woh humarei kamre mei ghus aya, ye jante hue ki tum mahal mei ho.Kal usne mujhe sirf pakra hi nahi balki mujhe chumne ki himmat ki...mere izzat ke sath khelne ki koshish ki usne. Aur to aur..tumhare samne mujhe bistar(bed) pe le jane ki baat ki usne..jaise ki mei tumhari biwi nahi balki koi...koi.."she could not speak out the word and only kept on sobbing and hugging him tight, but Uday understood what she meant and could not hear it anymore..He had already closed his eyes and was somehow controlling his anger. Hot tears had started flowing from his eyes but more than the eyes, it was his heart that was paining hearing the painful words. Suddenly a tear fell on Manyata's cheek and she broke the hug and looked up, and found Uday's face wet.. She felt guilty now that she made her husband weak. She didn't want him to see her break, but somehow, she always broke in front of him.

"I am sorry Uday..Mei tumhe dukhi nahi karna chahti thi..Pata nahi mujhe kya ho gaya tha..." saying this she tries to move away. But he holds her hand and carries her in his arms to their bed and she keeps on looking at him like a small child. He gently places her on their bed, and lies on top of her and she still keeps on looking at him without saying a word..

"Mafi to humei mangni chahiye Princess, ki humare mahal mei hone ke bad hum apni biwi ko us shaitan ke hato me parne se nahi bacha paye. I promise, he will never be able to touch you again. Ill finish his chapter very soon. Uska ant(end) abhi a chukka hai...Usne humari maharani ko chune ki gustakhi ki hai. Ill never forgive him, but for now I have to heal all your wounds. I promise to make you forget all his touch today, and you will only remember mine...Humei bas ek mauka de do.." saying this he caresses her cheeks with a seductive smile, and then gently kisses her forehead, at which Manyata closes her eyes. She smiles a bit and still keeps her eyes closed waiting for more. He smiles slowly and was just about to kiss her lips when she stops him and gets up from bed..She had a naughty idea and thinks of waking up the tiger in him, as she didn't like a crying Udayveer in front of her..

"Tu na mujhe Jaggat jitna pyar nahi karta!!"...she says making faces at him...Hearing Jaggat's name he gets confused as well as angry.

"What?..Jaggat?...kya woh bhi tumnare piche par gaya hai us Abhay ki tarha...Ohh God.Humei kitno se larna parega apni maharani ko protected rakhne ke liye!!" and starts getting angry.."Par ye kab hua?..Kya kaha usne tumhe?..kahi usne bhi tumhe chune ki koshish ki kya and he lifts up her face to ckeck if there were any marks or bites...

But Manyata denies and tells him.."Ji nahi Maharaj, humara matlab hai ki..Itna sabkuch hone ke bad bhi Jaggat J se shadi karne ke liye tayar hai...use pyar karta hai.." and she tells him all about her convo with Jaggat and his feelings.."Aur ek tum ho, jo meri har bat se naraz ho jate ho!..Akash ke sath mujhe shak bhi kiya tha aur jab humari pehli bar shadi ho rahi thi tab..." Uday shuts her up...

"Bas bol diya?..Isse kehte hai ulta chor kotwaal ko datei!..Ek to khudhi Akash ke piche bhagti rehti thi, aur humei bol rahi ho ki hum sakh karte the?...Hum tumhare piche kam nahi daure hai samjhe?...Itna agar race mei bhi doure hote to ab tak kayi bar Olympics pe join karke gold medal la sakte the!!" ..Manyata was about to laugh at this but then stops somehow and twist her lips and turns the other side but Uday holds her tight and replies..

"Hum tumse bohot pyar karte hai, iska sabot humari shadi hai..Itne mushkilo kea ne ke bad bhi akhir humne tumhe apna bana hi liya..Jaise ki humne kaha tha..Ki tum humari princess ho.." and he holds her with his both hands.

Agar aisi bat hai to dubara woh Abhay ka bacha mujhe humarei kamre mei ya mere aas paas bhi nahi bhatakna chahiye..Dubara usne mere sath batameezi kin a to tera to pata nahi par mei uska keema zaroor bana dungi haa nahi toh!...Fir mat bolna ki meine tujhe teri mardangini(manliness) dikhane ka mauka nahi diya.." she says pointing her finger at him. But Uday smiles mischievously and comes close.."Uski naubat nahi ayegi Princess...Use to hum apni mardangini apke bolne se pehle hi dikha denge..Par pehle apni maharani ko to dikha de..." and he comes closer and before she could say anything more, pushes her back and she falls with her head on the pillow. He slowly picks her up by her waist and places her on his lap.

"Aj dikhate hai hum tumhe apna mardangni.." and saying this he removes her sari and she closes her eyes. Slowly the lights are turned off and they share a passionate and wild night, the room filled with moonlight and Manyata's moans.



Ok guys..Here is the next part..😊


J was still awake thinking about the future and her sorrows..She looked at the moonlight and thought, the moonlight lighted up everything around her, but will never brighten her world. It would always be gloomy and dark..She was totally lost in the outside world, when she heard a hard knock in her door..

"Can I come in, If you are still awake?.."..smiled Jaggat and was just about to enter when J stopped him.."Nahi tum nahi a sakte..Kya socha tumne?..Ki kyuki Abhay ne mere istamal kiya tum bhi kar loge..Hum koi public property nahi hai samjhe jo itni rat ko mu utha kar chale aye humarei kamre mei!!.." and she breaks up completely.

Jaggat gets very angry hearing those last words, specially 'PUBLIC PROPERTY'..."How dare you call yourself like that?..Yahi tumhari problem hai J, ki tumne humesha humei galat samjha, aur humei kabhi koi mauka nahi diya. Istamal to tumne humara kiya hai humesha se..Aur humesha humei apna second option samjha..Hum to kabhi tumhare liye kuch the hi nahi...But you know what?..I still love you and can't hate you. And when I got to know that you were trapped that night by him, I became very upset and wanted to be by your side even more..."

J was touched at those words and replies.."Yahi to tumhari problem hai..Ki humne humesha tumhe itna hurt kiya, par fir bhi tum humse pyar karte ho..Tum ek bache ki ma se pyar karte ho?..Ye bacha to tumhara hai bhi nahi.." and she again starts crying but he wipes her tears and replies..

"Nahi J...Ab ye bacha humara hai..Isiliye dubara apne bache ke barei mei is tarha mat bolna...aur ek baat..."

He slowly kneels down on one leg and forwards his hand.." Rajkumari Jainandini, kya aap humse shadi karna chahengi?...I promise, Hum tumhe humesha khush rakhenge, aur tumhare bache ko apna naam aur izzat denge..."...

J was completely out of words at this act of his. She never thought that Jaggat would actually love her so much. She always hurt him but he was here who loved her even more. She smiles and nods in acceptance of his proposal, realizing how lucky she was. She slowly realized that the full moon had brightened her life as well and how bright her future was unlike her prediction about the future.





Alright guys so here we come to the end of the episode..Hope you all are not upset and hope I didn't mislead you all with my Episode title..If I did then plz control your anger😆...

And sorry everyone for not able to reply to your Birthday thread made for me. I only

replied to half but thanks to all, who wished me in my Birthday yesterday. You guys are really

sweet!..Ill reply today and tomorrow as yesterday was very busy...Sorry for the delay but for now this is Gargi signing off for today


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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry sorry gargi for my super late comment
the update was super duper👏
love manveer romance ⭐️
i loved the fact that it was lengthy i know how much u struggled with it 😛😛
i wish i could tell u update soon😆
but i cant
i loved manyata and jagat convo it was beautifully written⭐️
thanks so much for such a lovely episode
u rock
Edited by vampire12345678 - 12 years ago
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awsssmmm gargiii yar love👏👏 it and m happy 4 jai and jagat very much 😊😊😊😊😊and i hate abhayyy kaminaaa 😡😡😡😡😡 and manveer kaya kahnaaa ufff 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳Embarrassedsmajh hii gayeee hu ge gargii mari ufff ki wajaaa 😆😆😆😆😆

Edited by huma12. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update gargi
jagat really loves jay
aww ManVeer love was shoo☺️
all was great!!
Edited by zinayrules - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Credit also goes to the entire CC team and the plot writers who work really hard👏...Special thanks to them
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice work girl👍🏼, loved the episode 👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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woow... gargi it was not at all misleading... m happy it didnot hav any kutta kamina nalayak..paapi... neech AD stuff in it... wo toh bas gets on my nerves... i'll kill him just uday has 2 order me in m armd on d mission... haan nai toh...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb , Gargi 👍🏼. Well written 👏. Manveer scenes were sweet and romantic, HOT and blush-worthy ☺️. Jaggat and Jai scenes were nice also. He is such a kind and big-hearted person. He genuinely loves Jai. All in all - A PERFECT EPISODE!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing update!!!😛 Sooo nice to read a positive episode after such a long time!😳 Loved Manveers romance and Jagats proposal!!!⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superbly written gargi..luv da romance of manveer miss manveer romance...

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