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Posted: 12 years ago
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The bullets were being fired from a black scorpio .Then he mummered

"Bloody hell" he turned towards Manyata ,she shut her eyes and were saying her prayers .He pited her and said
"Manyata chinta maat ...bash apna seat belt badho kyui ki we are gonna fly"
She opened her eyes and looked at her innocently while he gave her a warm smile .But this warm eye lock was broken by another bullet .He kept his hand on the accelerator and gave a signature smirk .Then started the race he drove his car recklessly at the speed of 120m/s .Nothing stopped him he crashed a vegetable van ,almost bumped into a person and got his car hit with the edge of roads causing sparks .Then came the bridge and he made his car jump off the bridge .The car landed on athe green grass with a rough jerk .He stopped the car and saw the black scorpio driving straight ,the scorpio took the bridge .He smirked as his plan worked and said to himself
"no one can win YUVRAAJ UDAYVEER SINGH"
He looked at Manyata she sat there with her eyes wide open ,he shook her slightly ,she looked at him and her eyes was filled with fear.He asked her
"tum theek ho"she did not answer as she was under shock ,he wrapped his warm muscular arms around her and tears started to roll down her cheecks .He looked at her ,she could not battle her mind anymore and landed uncounciously in his arms...
Precap:she saw her hands filled with blood and gave a cry
sorry for my spelling and gramatical mistakes

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update dear, but it was really short, Next time I want a long one dear.😊 Nice update.👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Annesha your story is going really great and superb update deary👏

you just need to put them all in one thread...

Your story seems really interesting and nice👍🏼

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Your a superb writer
the story is becoming more and more thrilling
cant wait to know what happens next
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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gr8 update yaar...but what happened to Manyata..why is her hands filled wid blood..??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice update. But please put all of them into 1 thread. It's hard to find different parts.

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