**The Unknown Truth**ManVeer SS chapter 9 pg 91

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zainab

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Posted: 12 years ago

#701

Originally posted by: MAHI1198
awesome gr8 year as usual...

thanks a lot dear😛

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Posted: 12 years ago

#702

Originally posted by: ...navina...
Awesome , amazing , fantastic👏
Excellent work Zainab👍🏼. We even got a mini tour of Zimbabwe😆. I love Victoria falls . Did u know that this is the border between Zambia and Zimbabwe ... it's utterly beautiful.
I loved the end scene😳 ... but I'm very dissappointed that u ended it there😔. Please update soon.

Thanks for the PM😊.

PS ... Please excuse me now ... I have a 2 hour flight from Durban to Cape-Town . I'll be camping out there ... till Uday arrives😉.

thank you so much navina🤗

i have never been there i just studied it once on net and it helped me today!!😆

i saw the pictures of victoria fall its beautiful in them so its definite that it wil look much more beautiful in reality😊heheh!! its good to end at such points if i would have written all of it now how will u guys come back!! its a trick 😉 you are welcome for the pm!

LOl!!🤣 uday kay sath piya bhi hogi two piece main🤣

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zainab

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Posted: 12 years ago

#703

Originally posted by: huma12.
awsssmmm zainiii

thank you huma!!😃

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zainab

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Posted: 12 years ago

#704

Originally posted by: Fantasyangel
superb bt kya yaar last mein hamara ullu bna diya,itna excited hoke pdh rhi thi...btw kya piya M nhi hai??

lol😆 ullu bna na parta hai!! manyata piya hai ya piya manyata hai ye to mje bhi nai pta😉

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zainab

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Posted: 12 years ago

#705

Originally posted by: Udaylovie
AweSoMe ZINa ..
wat an epi .. loved it ..:):)
thanxx fr the pn nd please do continue soon...

thak you so much dear!!😃

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zainab

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Posted: 12 years ago

#706

Originally posted by: cnibir
WOW ZIna just read the update!!!!!!!!!!👏

Must say very nicely written and quite sensuous!!!! ☺️ But why did u have to stop there. 😉

Anyway jokes apart was really nice and thank god that u changed ur decision of ending the SS in a few chapters. Thanks also for the PM.

Really lovely, i liked the incorporation of the poem and how you have set out the story.!!!

PM me again when u update please!! Am anxious to read more.

P.S> u are an exceptional writer and good luck for the next chappy

thank you so much dear!!😃 i have to give everything not only sensuous, but it should have everything as per i think romance, love, grief!! it should be a blend of all!😳it was to end there! a type of blackmailing😉

i had to re-consider my decision because all of u supported me a lot!😊

thanks a lot your comments always take me to the cloud nine😃🤗

will pm u always!

once again thanks a lot😊

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zainab

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Posted: 12 years ago

#707

Originally posted by: MsLuscious
Nice chapter zaini...
but i didn't understood onething...
If piya/manyata hates uday then why the hell she is allowing him to be so intimate with her...
Iam not getting is she really in revenge mood or she has fallen for him...

thank you so much sarah!😃

i will send you a pm! i don't want to talk about it here😉