Forcefully Yours Thread#2 IMPORTANT NOTE pg 143

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Manveerangel

@Manveerangel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#831

👏 👏 Awesome 👏 👏
1st of all thx for that special update and
For that sweet surprise 😊 n thats for u 🤗
Now back to the story 😆 😆
The epi was just great
Awww i was wrong about aayan he still
Love her 😭 😭
And the dance part was so nice
Awww poor uday he is acting like a
TEEN 😳😳
i enjoyed the epi so much
So thanks again
And thx for pm
Hey btw will u update on sunday?
And what about ur new ff "illicit love"?

Edited by Manveerangel - 12 years ago

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zainab

@--Zinay--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#832

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Pranoti aka Sanju

@Damon.Holic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#833

omg... that was gr8... sorry i am using my cell so cant giv a comment as beautiful as ur maha update... i must say, it blew me off... woahhh...plz dont stop it after the forum is locked. in the 1st place, forum will not be lokd. u rock sarah, luv u... on top of everything, i dont hav words to describe these updates. u rocked. i respect uday's feelings, and i hope, manyata will undrstand them soon.i luvd manyata's plans. i luvd each and every thing of the maha update... plz update fast. and do pm me.

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@.maleficent.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#834

awesome update saira mindblowing
really manyta is upto something
and u brought unati in thats amazing revenge is on mind uday taking reveing from ayan for unatti by hurting manyta
but manyta is not piece of cake she is royal and she is doing all possible things to irritate uday
wonderfull writing saira
update next part soon and thanx for pm

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Uday Lovie

@Udaylovie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#835

Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry

I am really sorry i could not comment now comming to the comment ...

im speechless ... i loved the episode ..sorry both the episodes .

1st part
Take the breakfast to her room and don't leave the room until she finish it all...
Maid: jee...
Uday: and don't tell her that i asked you to take it for her.. If she asked say dai maa has send it..

awww... uday is so caring love it 😊

2nd part
Manyata was going crazy... This man was making her all senses numb except one 😉... His nearness was making her heartbeat like a drum... Blood was rushing too fast through her veins.. She was all red by now not due to anger but due to some unknown feelings... She knew if she continued standing so near him the circumstances would be horrendous...
Manyata was out of breath now...
uday on the other hand was suffering from same situation... He was totally turned on... He knew if he didn't let her go then he would definitely end up with her in his room... This girl made him act like a teen who has no control on his hormones...

Uday aur maanyata dono ka haal hi ek saa hai ..

vaise i dont blame maanyata uday ko dekh kar koi bhi ladki ka yahi hal ho jaye main hoti to main toh kabhi sorry na bolun aur zindagi bhar vahin uday ki bahon main khadi rahun 😳

3rd part
Ayaaan pov: i loved two people unconditionally and irrevocably but both of them left me... I loved her with all my heart and soul but she left me and today angel... why God always takes away the one i love the most...
he closes his eyes... I miss you...

matlab ayaan unatti se bhi pyar karta tha im confused bechara he must be missing his angel a lot ...
awww ab to bas jaldi se secret reveal kardo please

4th part

Uday: how are you kripa..
Kripa: iam fine Yuvraaj Udayveer... Manyata noticed the coldness in her voice...
Uday: iam fine yuvraani kripa... He replied in the same tone..
Uday: and what about you vijay..
Vijay: iam good... He leaves the place...
Uday didn't got angry after seeing their attitude because he knew they were also not wrong... He did ruined their beloved sister's life... How can he expect them to behave all nice to him...
uday aur kripa toh frnds the phir ye kya ho gya ...koi nahi
yr to hona hi tha

5th part
Uday: now iam so sure you have something in your mind... What is it?? Why you came back when your families didn't wanted you to...? What are you upto...?
Manyata smirks: you are YUVRAAJ UDAYVEER SINGH find it yourself what iam upto...
Uday: woaaah... Are you challenging me?
Manyata: i wasn't but if you are taking it in that sense that let it be... Challenge...

Uday was enjoying the feeling of being so near to her... He didn't knew why but he felt like holding her like this forever...

Uday was looking at her while she was looking downwards ... She didn't wanted him to see her crying...
He twirled her once more...
This time he brought her extremely close to him..
A tear rolled down her eye...
Uday couldn't control himself he bend down a bit and sucked her tear...
Manyata on the other hand stopped dancing... She stood rooted on the floor...
uday kissed her eye then the other...
Manyata was feeling like killing him... She thought he was doing all this drama in order to show everyone how much he love her...
After kissing her eyes he was about to kiss her on her lips but manyata pushed him a bit which brought him back to his senses...
ufff ... uday manyata ki chemistry ... im lovin it
uday ko maanyata ke sath ye sab karne ka bura lag rha
hai im glad ab kya pta dono ke beech sabkuch kind off thik ho jaye..

part 6:
Well i will introduce my self... hi iam unnati..
Ur sister in law... giriraj said while coming towards them...
Manyata: dad.. She bend and took his blessings..
Manyata suddenly remembered kripa told her about unnati...
Manyata: hi unnati how are you sorry for not recognising you...
Unnati: that's alright bhabi.. Can i hug you once more..
Manyata laughs sure..
Manyata was surprised to meet her... She was really sweet... Totally opposite to uday..
Unnati ... hayye meri jaan ..as usual sweet .. thank god vo aa gyi ab maanyata ko company mil jayegi ... 😃

part 7:
Someone else who was witnessing the scene stood rooted on the floor... his whole life turned upside down infront of his eyes... He took some 10 minutes to register the scene infront of his eyes and actually understand what just happened... He was shocked would be understatement... He was shattered... Hurt... Betrayed... Guilty.. So many feelings were arising within him...
As soon as his mind started working again.. He ran away...
He was about to sit in his car... When he heard...
What happened SAALEY SAHAB didn't you liked my surprise...
Ayaan stood like a statue...
Uday came towards him...
uday was extremely angry..
Uday: what happened didn't you recognised her??? How can you forget her so easily...
Uday: if your memory is weak... I will remind you... She is unnati.. The same girl whose life you ruined brutally...
You used and throw her like a merciless creature... He said looking straight into his eyes boiling . His eyes were red due to extreme anger...

ayaan kitna bhayanak tarike se shock ho chuka hai
mughe to laga hi tha ki ayaan ne unnati ke sath kuch to kiya hi hoga tab hi to uday ne ...
btw ayaan ne kha he was shocked hurt guilty .. iska matlab usko dukh hai ...

thats it ab aur mughse likha nhi jayega ..
please jaldi se ek accha sa manverilicious update de dena ..

finally ...👏

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#836

New promo of Chapter 17Uday uday manyata called him but he didn't bothered to look at her...Manyata was fuming...how could he avoid me like this infront of everyone... some minutes ago he was all behaving like a lovey dovey husband and now look at him... How can he? Now i won't talk to him either...
At morning uday was coming downstairs and got little shocked to see manyata arranging plates and other stuff of breakfast...
Uday comes and sits...
Good morning wifey. ...
Manyata avoids him and continues doing her work...
Hello wifey(uday waves infront of her face)
Still he gets no reply...
He gets really frustrated now he gets up pins her hand on the table and crushes her body with his...
Now manyata position was really awkward...
she was half pressed on table beneath her hand and he was infront of her...
Uday: i told you when i speak i want answer... Don't you dare ignore me...

ahem ahem
Get a room guys...

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Manyata: what the hell he thinks of himself... Huh i will show him what i can do...
She opens the door of uday room and see no one...
Manyata: achaaa moka hai manyata lele badla ... She runs towards his brief case she open it and gets the file out of it...
Manyata: uday ke bachey ja ab presentation dey...
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Uday on the other hand was confused to see no file...
Uday calls manyata...
Uday: manyata you have the file right...
Manyata: yes...
Uday:dekho manyata i want it now... Le aoo
Manyata: no me nahi laungii tum bhi aye to you won't find me at home because iam not at home...
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Uday: manyata bacho ki harqatein mat kro give me the file says while running
Manyata: nahi dungi... Uday ke bachey...
Unnati was smiling after seeing the tom and jerry fight infront of her...
Unnati: humne dada ko bohat time baad aisey dekhaa hai ... mutters...

Long enough right? Enjoy :)

Edited by MsLuscious - 12 years ago

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anushruthi

@anushruthi

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#837

first to comment

awesome promo

plz plz plz update soon

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Sonam

@-RK_Ki_Biwi-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#838

Originally posted by: MsLuscious
New promo of Chapter 17Uday uday manyata called him but he didn't bothered to look at her...Manyata was fuming...how could he avoid me like this infront of everyone... some minutes ago he was all behaving like a lovey dovey husband and now look at him... How can he? Now i won't talk to him either...
At morning uday was coming downstairs and got little shocked to see manyata arranging plates and other stuff of breakfast...
Uday comes and sits...
Good morning wifey. ...
Manyata avoids him and continues doing her work...
Hello wifey(uday waves infront of her face)
Still he gets no reply...
He gets really frustrated now he gets up pins her hand on the table and crushes her body with his...
Now manyata position was really awkward...
she was half pressed on table beneath her hand and he was infront of her...
Uday: i told you when i speak i want answer... Don't you dare ignore me...

ahem ahem
Get a room guys...

Wohoo what a promo sambha..👏 👏 👏

fantastic, m so excited to read it..😛

Yesterday I read 4 pending updates of FY, awesome work Sambha..👍🏼 This story is getting more n more interesting..now Unnati is also entered in the story..😳

Marvalous..can't wait to read it..😛

update soon.🤗

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#839

Originally posted by: Vasishtha
Wohoo what a promo sambha..👏 👏 👏
fantastic, m so excited to read it..😛
Yesterday I read 4 pending updates of FY, awesome work Sambha..👍🏼 This story is getting more n more interesting..now Unnati is also entered in the story..😳
Marvalous..can't wait to read it..😛
update soon.🤗

thanks but love the promo is extended:D see it once more