Sorry Sarah for commenting this late...ACtually I read it the day u updtaed but then since I wasn't at home i couldn't comment due to lack of internet.
Mindblowing update and the characters reacted just the way it was expected. I mean its really horrible the way the truth came out, so some were shocked, some were sad, as well as some were angry..Like Ayan and J, But ayan becoz he cares for his sister, and J because she is jealous of Manyata.
You portrayed everyone's reaction very well and in detail..👏👏👏...The last part I was definitely expecting as DS asked M whether she would do what she was told...And m sure DS wasn't unconscious, but only acted to get things done her way, for peace to prevail for future...
Eagerly waiting for next update as you said that it will be totally Manveer centric. 😛Just one suggestion. Please make Unnati enter into the picture soon, as she can atleast be the peace maker, and also save her bhabi from UV's rath and cruel intensions. Also only when Unnati comes, will M understand why UV did all this.
also I think Manyata is the youngest of devgard family, so plz don't make J call her Jiji.😕
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