MANVEER SS ' KOI THUMSA NAHI ' CHP 26 pg 91( kushi - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: puggyy

Now how to do it pls can u explain me...thank u

EDIT IT DEAR AND COPY PASTE IT
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ohhh...my goodness...puggy dear its awsomee...sooo...finallly uday and manyata milane wale hai ...par uday ne wrong number laga liya...nidhi ko manyata and manyata ko nidhi samaj liya...awsome...ab uday ko pata kab chalega k ye ye nidhi nahi manyata hai...plzzz...update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 3

UDAY - pls come in . He tries to control his feelings n looks straight. So miss r ur plans ready?

MANYATHA - she is staring at uday. O my god he is like Greek god. So he is Yuvraj udayveer Singh. ANANYA is right , he is dam hot. Now I understand y she is crazy about uv. Whatever he is a player ...n a big flirt ... Not of my types ...o my god y am I thinking about all this crap

UDAY - he snaps his fingers n tell excuse me mam ...r ur plans ready? We're r u ? He smirks

MANYATHA - sorry sir ... Here are da plans ...jus check them out sir ...if u want any changes do let me know sir

UDAY - I must say u r a beauty wit brain ...wonderfully plan ... He tells this in his mind. Now he tells her that the da plan is good and needs no changes .

MANYATHA - k sir ...so should I continue the next plan

UDAY - yes princess u can

MANYATHA - k sir then I'll come wit the next plan tomorrow. Manyatah doesn't care for da word princess because she is actually princess. She thinks that uday knows that she is manyatha n that's y he is calling as princess.

UDAY - take ur time princess . No hurries.. Whenever u complete jus do inform me. He realizes that he is calling her princess .he is about to tell

MANYATHA - yes sir I'll let u know aft it's ready

UDAY - I don mind u calling me uday miss... Pls don call me sir . He smirks . Donno y uday doesn't feel like calling her nidhi so he asks her " can I call u princess if u don mind miss"

MANYATHA. - yes sir sorry k uday I don hav any prob if u call me princess. Manyatah is princess so she doesn't care much about it .
Can I take ur leave uday.

UDAY - not so soon baby

MANYATHA - wat!!!!!!

UDAY - sorry ... I mean y so soon miss... Let me go through da entire plan in detail ... Wat if I get any doubt ...u should b here to clear an princess...he smirks

MANYATHA - k uday jus go through . Meanwhile can I use ur laptop .i have a small work

UDAY - ya surely u can princess ... Everything is urs ...am all urs after all

MANYATHA - excuse me !!!!!!

UDAY - wat I mean is ur my architect now... Work for jaigad company so hav right to use it ...

MANYATHA - takes laptop n is busy wit work

UDAY - stares at manyathA only for almost 40 min ... This girl is really killing me... Never I felt so for any girl ... Wen it comes to any girl a think only one thing to do wit them ...one night stand... But dis girl she z different ... I don get 2nd thoughts for her...feel something special ...something is attracting me

MANYATHA - sir sir ... Sorry uday uday

UDAY - sorry tell me. Ya I have gone through ...so nice...so wen can I get next plan ...jus tell me ...v shal fix a meet

MANYATHA - whenever u want to uday . K in 2 Days I'll come wit another plan

UDAY - today is Tuesday . So on Friday shall v

MANYATHA - k uday on Friday so shall I leave

UDAY - k princess ... He thinks inside himself " o my god Friday it's too long " shall I ask her for a coffee . No uv wat z it ur doing ...wen did u start falling for girls. No not at all... Yes princess bye

MANYATHA - she leaves . O my god this uv is really a flirt . All double meaning dialogues and god every now n then he was stAring at me. Donno how am gonna work wit him for 3 months .She gets. Call from nidhi that she is leaving wit her parents to Delhi for a week .she goes to mahal .
SAMAR - so mannu how was ur first day at office .

M - it's good dada . I liked da project

SAMAR - k mannu 2mrw there is a party , my friends engagement ,even u must come

MANYATHA - yes I know Baha'i vim ram bayya called me and invited. I'll differently come.

UDAY - he keeps on thinking about da girl and blushes.

UNNATHI - omg dada ur blushing...Yuvraj uday sing ... Is it nidhis effect

UDAY - o choti common ab shura math hojav...duniya mien aise koyi ladki nahi paida hua hai Jo uv ko blush karsaku

UNNATHI - till now even I used to think ...but not now... Da girl entered into ur life... She thinks to herself.

PA - sir today there is vikram kurana's engagement sir

UDAY - k I do remember u can leave. He gets ready in da night and leaves for da party. He finds manyatah there in a red Sarcee. He couldn't take his eyes off ...she looked dead gorgeous . He don't like a guy telling her hot . He feels like slapping him . He walks towards her

MANYATHA - meanwhile Samar comes to manyatha and introduces his friend . Samar keeps his hands around manyatahs shoulder n they r talking .

UDAY - he stops there seeing da scene. He didn't like it but thinks that da girl is princess manyatha's friend and must b knowing her brother . Think they r friends too. Some girl comes and asks Samar for dance so he leaves .
Uday goes and meets manyatha and talks to her casually .

MANYATHA - she is talking to uday n her phone rings. Its samars phone . She will lift and tell Yuvraj Samar is busy right now n tells that she would inform him.

UDAY - he takes it casually . Mite b he forgot his cell. He asks her for a dance. First she hesitates and then accept .both go to dance floor and dance. He danced wit many girls but now it's different .he is on cloud 9

MANYATHA - even she feels something for uday . Wen he touches her waist she gets goosebumps ...

All da ppl who r dancing change their partners . So manyatha goes to Samar .

SAMAR - he is dancing wit manyatha . He looks at uday from far and tells him hi waving his hand. Uday also waves back. Manyatah reaches samar's ear to inform him about da call.

UDAY - he sees Samar and manyatah dancing so closely . Wen manyatha reaches his ears ... Uv looks da scene from behind ...it looks like something else... He fumes wit Anger ...leaves da dance floor and grabs a drink

SAMAR N MANYATHA - they both r talking laughing and dancing . They also leave da dance floor

UDAY - he looks all this. He gets angry on both Samar and manyatha .first of all unnathi likes Samar ...next donno wats happening to me... Da gal ...I can't c someone touching her...he gulps down da drink

MANYATHA - she meets some friend and will be talking .meNwhile uday and Samar will be talking

MANYATHA - she comes to Samar and uday . Something from da grass pricks her foot ... She slowly screams

UDAY AND SAMAR - they both run towards her. But Samar is two foots ahead of uday .
SAMAR - he quickly holds manyatah and make her sit. He is so worried and tensed . Takes her sandals and takes out the thorn

UDAY - he feels bad for manyatha but wen he sees Samar worried and tensed and so caring ..that being a Yuvraj he took a girls sandals And all that . Uday is unable to digest . He thinks that manyatha is in between Samar and unnathi .he kind of starts hating her . But he couldn't hate wen he looks at her. He is melting down .
he gets a call and goes aside.

MANYATHA - am ok dada pls don worry . Small thing . Don get so worried. She gets up . Samar helps her to walk .

UDAY - k Samar am leaving bye. Now he doesn't call manyatha princess and tells her bye miss angrily

SAMAR - uv jus 5 min even v both r leaving . Samar goes and tells vikram bye and comes back to manyatah and uday.

UDAY - he sees manyatha limping and walking

SAMAR - he to notices it and lifts manaytah suddenly in his arms

UDAY - he was almost shocked . He felt like hitting both of them .

MANYATHA - bhayya pls put me down am not a 2 years kid ok... I can walk ...dada pls

UDAY - he is shocked to hear da word dada . He is in utter amusement

SAMAR - o really !! Ur not 2 .. Even if ur 22 thum mere liye hameesha meri choti gudiya rani hi rahengi... Even wen u hav children ...u will remain da same choti angel for me. U should take care mannu . C ur leg bleeded due to that thorn

UDAY - he hears all da conversation . Samar is she ur sister ?

SAMAR - uday I think u told me once u met manyatha . Again y ur asking ... .? K whatever she is my choti pyaari princess manyatah

MANYATHA - bhai don embarrass me wit all such names. Ur acting like a dad to me ... I forgot ur almost like my 2nd dad ...O my god dada ... V reached car .put me down... U give me a feeling as am a crippled or some sick puppy

SAMAR - k darling am putting u down wait . He makes her sit in car. Both Samar and manyatah tell bye to uday

UDAY - bye Samar and bye princess ... Princess manyatha😉 He reaches his home . Ready to sleep now. Thinks about all da incidents . How he mistook and all that . He laughs to himself . They r brother and sister ... Omg white dress angel is really an angel princess manyatha ..samar's angel ...very nice...so princess manyatha will c u tomorrow morning in da office... Omg wat is this I started liking da girl ...

UNNATHI - dada how was da party? Dada so met manyatha and Samar ?

UDAY - how did u know that they came to party ...

UNNATHI - wen I called manyatha she was at party . She told me ... K dada how is ur white dress angel?

UDAY - he narrates da whole story to unnathi

UNNATHI - o my god dada that's manyatha ... Ur head on heels for manyatha

UDAY - choti stop it ...it's not like wat u think

UNNATHI - I don agree wit u dada... I can c change in u ...u love her dada... At least from wat u told I can say u love her ...otherwise u wouldn't have followed her car or find details or feel jealous if she is wit some guy

UDAY - pls don put all this so called love in my brain choti good night

UNNATHI - am not dada ur already in love ...can't help it ...good night dada

PRECAP :
Uday and manyatha's day out ...romance ...


Edited by puggyy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
This is becoming a really good ss keep writing
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update,plz cont soon and cud u plz pm once u update da nxt part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: roshni101

Awesome update,plz cont soon and cud u plz pm once u update da nxt part

Thank u ...I'll update in 2 days or today if possible ... Thanks for liking it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice...awww...uday is payar me pagal majnu...a big flirt i love it...precape is intresting update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great work dear. i liked the third chapter but i felt like u r in a rush i mean dont rush explain each scene. so try to write long and detailed chapters. Except this everything was perfect i like the story its new and intriguing do update soon:)
Edited by MsLuscious - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MsLuscious

Great work dear. i liked the third chapter but i felt like u r in a rush i mean dont rush explain each scene. so try to write long and detailed chapters. Except this everything was perfect i like the story its new and intriguing do update soon:)

Thanks ...I won't rush ... Thanks for liking it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
👏very nice update👏

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