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Hi i am gem12 aka dolly kumari writer of "pyar ishq aur mohabbat on ashish lovies page ..par sad part was a person by name Mahara23 has copied my story and posted in on this page..aven after telling me not to do it par still she has done it...so iam posting u guys with all proffs of all my 10 parts and chat history with her ...this happened 2 days back..and i was so upset and decided to discontinue the story..par so many frds in if and lovies page told me to post eveythin on IF ..let them decide on this..i am not writing this to proove i am right and she is wrong...aksar aisa hojata hey...jab kisine mehnath se kaam karne ke baad koi uska phal leke chal to its hurts them..and they il be demotivated..and main bhi aise hi hooon..muje aapko such dikana hey...nothing else...vaise bhi iske baad to maine likna hi chod di...par jo mere saath hua wo main kisi aur ke saath bhi yase ho vo main kabhi nahi chahti..jo hua so hua..i am sorry agar maine kisi ka dil dukhaya ho to..
is link main 9 aprts hain...
September 23
Mahara Mushtaq
  • okay i want to ask u something can i upload ur episode on if if u give permission

  • hello are u there

  • September 23
    Mahara Mushtaq
    • if means india foum

  • September 23
    Dolly Kumari
    • no dont do it

    • get shernis permission

    • even i ma thr in if

    • dont do for time being...dear...check with sherni

  • September 23
    Mahara Mushtaq
    • ohhh

    • plz u ask from sherni

  • September 23
    Dolly Kumari
    • ok ...give me sometime..il check and let u know

    • September 23
      Mahara Mushtaq
      • okay thankxxx alot

      • are u there

    • September 23
      Dolly Kumari
      • yes

      • give me som time

      • msged her...let her come back

      • but plz dont do it with out my knowledge...

      • this is exclusively for loveis page..lets c wat sherni suggests

    • September 23
      Mahara Mushtaq
      • and when will she back

    • September 23
      Dolly Kumari
      • dont no..at times she replies in a while..or at times 2-3hrs..give me someyime...mahara...its not an emergency..dear...give us one day..lets c..or else u check with her...

      • vais eek baat bata itni int kyun if main dal neke liy..batao

      • u read it here

    • September 23
      Mahara Mushtaq
      • wo yr tumhare story best hei meney socha key mere if friend ke birthday hei to usey gift dey dun

      • oryr tum likhte he ache ho

    • September 23
      Dolly Kumari
      • tkhs...sherni has replied not to post ..its exclusively for lovies page..sorry...tel ur frd to read on lovies page

      • even i am on IF..but this is only for lovies page...

      • thks bye and tc

    • September 23
      Mahara Mushtaq
      • okay ur on dekha ek khwab forum

    • September 23
      Dolly Kumari
      • yes

      • dear

    • Mahara Mushtaq
      • whats the name

    • September 23
      Dolly Kumari
      • y deqra

      • dear

    • September 23
      Mahara Mushtaq
      • ohh

    • September 23
      Dolly Kumari
      • y dear is not my id...iam askin y r u askin my name

      • thr my name is diff

    • September 23
      Mahara Mushtaq
      • okayyy

    • September 23
      Dolly Kumari
      • u r thr n if ...par maine kabhi tera comment nahi dekha

      • sorry dear..

      • u post the link to ur frd...

      • kyun

    • September 23
      Mahara Mushtaq
      • kyn sorry

      • mei mahara23 key naam sey hun

      • September 23
        Dolly Kumari
        • nahi...u asked for ur frd na...to isiliye...

      • September 23
        Mahara Mushtaq
        • or mei toh laga tar comment karte hun

      • September 23
        Dolly Kumari
        • no iv seen ur name thr

        • par tumhara comments nahi pada

        • i read sonam stories over thr

        • tum miley is my fav one

      • September 23
        Mahara Mushtaq
        • okayy
          really ya mine toh mei na vampire12345678 ke baat kr rahe the

      • September 23
        Mahara Mushtaq
        • or waiting for u is my fav

      • September 23
        Dolly Kumari
        • oh uske..maine uski frds list pe hoon..infact first part post bhi kiya ta use..baad main stop kardi...this is exclusively for lovies

        • na

        • mine too

        • wiating for u ...

      • September 23
        Mahara Mushtaq
        • ohhh okay mei vampire ke bhot sare stories pasand hei ilove her stories

      • September 23
        Dolly Kumari
        • hmmm

        • i too love her stories...even i m n her frds list

        • anhi new story bi shuruu ki na

      • September 23
        Mahara Mushtaq
        • ya

          The New Saga of Love-Dekha ek Khwab-"Pyar Ishq aur Mohabbat"

          Part 10:

          uday goes to manyatas room and manyata was about to change her dress she sees uday and scolds tameez nahi hey kya tuje..kisi ke room main aane se pehle knock karte hey…and she takes the dress and was about to go to washroom..he suddenly pulls her & pins her to the wall and says …oops hume pata nahi hey…tameez kya hoti hey..ab tum zo aagayi hume sudharne ke liye..and smriks..she tries to move ..but he holds her tightly..so she is unable to free herslf from his hold…uday:to wifey..ab to tumhari dono parivar bhi humari rishta ko accept kar li…tum bi maanjao…and tries to romance…manyata…leave me..muje chune ki ek mauka bhi nahi chod the ho..uday:vo kya hey na princess.tum hi ne to kaha ta agar muje mauka mile to main aaj hi tumari saath suhag rath manaunga..to mausam bhi acha hey..aur wakt bhi acha hey to kya khayal hey rajkumari manyata opps wifey..shuru kare…manyata gusse se use dekthi hain…and tries to release her self from his grip..and says leave me uday ..kyun muje humeshsa tang karte ho..aakhir kya chahiye tume…uday:u r my wifey…so situation ka pura fayda le rahe hey…vaise ek sharat par hum tume jane dete hain…

          manyata :kya..Uday:nothing much next week hume best polo player award milrahi hey usi khushi ki silsile main hum jaigardh main ek party organize ki..award function ke baad..to hum chahte hain tum humare lucky charm banke humare saath aani hey us function amin aur party main..to bolo manjoor hain..manyata :tumhare saath who bhi jaigardh ..never…do u think am I mad to join u…never uday..dream on..uday:to teek hain princess…hum tume jaane nahi denge…kadi raho puri rath humari baahon main..and looks at her seductively…manyata:thinks agar main haan nahi bolungi to aaj zaroor kuch kar dega…and says yes teek hain aajaungi..tumhaare saath ab khush..uday says yes..and she tell him to leave her..and then she tells him to leave other wise she has to rethink about her decision…and uday leaves her and goes ..

          next day :after dining table uday comes and tells about next week party and request every one to attend the party…including rajeev and family..everyone says yes…and then ds tells everone manyata 16 saal ke baad ghar laut ne ki khushi main ek party organize ki hey hum ..evening..so sab log ready hojaye..aur is party khaaskar manyata ke liye hey…and this party uday and manyata dono please aapki job hi ladayi hai..is party main na dikaye to behtar hoti hain..kyun ki aap dono aage chalkar maharaja aur maharani banewale hain..aur ek nahi puri teen teen riyasato ko aap maargdharshak ban na chahiye..main nahi chati aap ki vajah se koi problem nah ho…to is baal ka khayal rakhiye..and leaves..manyata gets ready she wears beautiful red colour lehenga…and uday comes to her room and says shall we princess..she says tum kyun aaye ho..main khud hi aajati..uday..u forgot what ds ne kaha subah..devgardh aur navalgardh hi nahi balki jaigardh ki future ho tum..to shall we…she says ok…and whil they about to enter the mnet abt ther entry was made….while getitn down from the stairs..udays hand is on her waist..background music..main jodhar Akbar music..play hoti hey..and then ds proudly introduces manyata to every one..to other royals and business man and politicians..then manyata joins jay and unnati..where all the royal bachelors and spinsters are sitiing and chit chatting…manyata also joined and started enjoyin ….later on uday also joins..so unnati asks kaha the aap..he says he was busy in meeting guest..jay teases him..jiju kyun nahi kehte ki aap siddanth chowdary se baate kar rahe the..and every one laughs..manyata looks at every one and confuse hoke puch ti hain..kyun sab log has rahe hain..then jay says jiji u don't know this siddanth ..yeh baki ladke jaise nahi ..kisi ladki se baath nahi karta..unki taraf nahi dek ta..humesha sirf ladkon se hi baath karta..waise bada acha business mind hey..apart from that at times i really doubt ki kahi yeh gay na ho..kyun ki is jamane main har ek ladkiyon se bath karne ke liye marthe hain..aur yeh ek hum jaise khubsurat rajkumariyon se bhi door bagta hain..every one laughs…uday says kya baat boli jay..tuje kaise pata ki who gay hey..kahi tum..and every one laughs..jay says shut up jiju..yeh mat bhulo hum aapki saali hain…to be carefull..

          manyata:shut up you people..agar koi ladkiyon se baath nahi karta to he is decent..it shows ki wo ladkiyon ko izzat karta hain..not like others who tries to take advantage and looks at uday…that doesn't mean he is gay…jo man main aaya wo boli jaarahi hey..jiji ..aap to aise baat kar rahe hain..aap unhe jaante hain…she says I don't know him..par jab hume ds ne unse introduce ki tab hi hume pata chala he is decent…viase..yeh kyun nahi hosakta ki use aaj tak aisi ladki nahi mili jo use laga ki use dekna hey aur us ladki se baat karni hey….jiji stop it ..u r so mean..hum jaisi princess ko bhi wo resist nahi kar pa raha hey…manyata …par jay..jay:..teek hey maanleti hoon ki aaj tka use aisi ladki nahi mili…par aap to ek aisi ladki ho jo uday jaise ladke ho bhi apne pallu main band di ..to lagi sharat ..aap apni charm dikayiye aur make him to fall for you..nahi..yeh bohoth door ki baat hey..just make him to come and talk to u …..manyata:mujse sharat mat lago jay haar jaogi….teek hey main kuch nahi karungi..main unke paas nahi jaoongi..unse baat tak nahi karungi..par who khud ba khud aake mujse baat karega…teek hain..uday:manyata tum yeh kaisi sharat laga rahi ho...manyata:I know what I am doing..is se main shart bhi jeet jaungi..aur uski izzat bhi to bachegi aapke saamne….par aapko sirf ek kaam karni hain…teek 5 min baad jab main ishara karungi tab aap sab use kaise bhi karke bade logon ke beech se humari youngsters ke beech lani padegi..teek hain…then every one goes at one one corner..and observes him and manyata with out his knowledge….manyata is sitting in a sofa and just looks at him for 2 mins…and then ignores him and goes to meet other business people infront of him..and then after sometime again she looks at him and again ignores him….aur wo bohoth confuse hoke manyata ko dekta hey…tab hi one guy comes and tries to talk to manyata while she was going to meet some other guest…when she turns ..suddenly uski haaton se drink gir jaati hain..manyata says sorry to that guest and gives him a tissue to clean it and shows him a wash room and that guy goes from there…but while this guy siddanth yeh sab dek raha tha..tab hi manyata phir ek baar use dekhi…to siddanth gabrahat se dusri taraf dekta hey..yeh sab kuch dek ke unnati keh ti jay aaj to tum gayi kaam se…muje lagta hey aaj manyata sharat jeet jayegi….jay..common unnati..lets c..i don't think so…then manyata again goes back aur sofa main bait jati hain…then siddanth comes and asks her ..can i sit here…sab log muh khul ke dekne lagete hain…jay unnati..uday is really pissed off….and then siddanth starts talking to her…he keeps on looking at manyata..manyata looks at jay and uday and smirks…later on everyone..jay unnati uday everyone joins the conversation…its nothing ..they looks at manyata and sidanth …manyata explains him about the college…and her course and projectwork…but after somethime sidanth gets a call so he leaves the place….manyata ..so jay..haar gayi na mujse…dekha maine kaha than a…wo khud mujese baat karega…jay says wo just aapki project ke bare main baat kar raha tha..jiji…manyata to tum haar nahi manogi..to teek hain..woh khud ba khud mujse aakar baath karege phir se aur deko ..is baar muje se dusre baar milne ke liye bhi try karega…teek hain…dekthe hain..tabhi everyone comes and tells them to join the party and to dance..she says same boring party mama…uday says to is baar hum dekte hain..sirf tum nacho…London dane karo..humari Indian partys to tuje boring hey na…and smiles….she says no..uday goes and announces about manyatas dance..and tells the dj to play some song..jay goes and tells dj to paly some old song so that manyata dance nahi kar payegi..…and the song is played…

          In aankhon ki masti ke, aah aah aah aah
          In aankhon ki masti ke mastaane hazaaron hain
          Mastaane hazaaron hain
          In aankhon se vaabasta
          In aankhon se vaabasta afsaane hazaaron hain
          Afsaane hazaaron hain
          In aankhon ki masti ke
          Ek tum hi nahin tanha, aah aah
          Ek tum hi nahin tanha ulfat mein meri rusva
          Ulfat mein meri rusva
          Is shaher mein tum jaise
          Is shaher mein tum jaise deewaane hazaaron hain
          Deewaane hazaaron hain
          In aankhon ki masti ke mastaane hazaaron hain
          In aankhon ki masti ke, aah aah aah
          Ek sirf humi mai ko, ek sirf humi
          Ek sirf humi mai ko aankhon se pilaate hain
          Aankhon se pilaate hain
          Kehne ko to duniya mein
          Kehne ko to duniya mein maikhaane hazaaron hain
          Maikhaane hazaaron hain
          In aankhon ki masti ke mastaane hazaaron hain
          In aankhon ki masti ke
          Is shamm-e-faroza ko, aah aah
          Is shamm-e-faroza ko aandhi se darraate ho
          Aandhi se darraate ho
          Is shamm-e-faroza ke
          Is shamm-e-faroza ke parvaane hazaaron hain
          Parvaane hazaaron hain
          In aankhon ki masti ke mastaane hazaaron hain
          In aankhon se vaabasta afsaane hazaaron hain
          Afsaane hazaaron hain
          In aankhon ki masti ke

          Manayata performs khathak...While dancing ..every one are so mesmerized at her dance and her expressions..and while dancing uday and including siddanth are mesmerized at her beauty….after her dancing..everone claps….and unnati goes and asks her wow manyata tum kaise kar ti ho..tumne to sab kuch pata hey…jay aapko classical bhi aati hey kya…manyata..yeah..kahatk siki hain maine…jay to aap pehle bata deni chahiye tha..hum aapk ko harene ke liye yeh song chuna…par aap to…uday was looking at her with so much of love and passion..tab hi siddanth comes and tells her ..that u danced so well..aap ki dance main koi jaadu hey..aapki dushman ko bhi aapki taraf keech lati hey..maine aaj tak aisi dance nahi dekha..aaj tak aisi ladki ko bhi nahi dekha..jo sundar ho simple ho..maine suna aap achi gaati ti bhi hey…dance bhi bohoth achi ki…kya aap mujse dosti karenge….she looks at every one..every one are so surprised and shocked….siddanth trying to flirt with a girl for the first time..manyata smiles at him and tells sorry main to aap ko teek tarah se jaanthi bhi nahi hoon..aur abhi abhi hum mile hey..itne main dosti…siddanth..hum samaj the hey….kya hum aap se kal milsakte hain just for a coffee…jab jaan pehchan padegi tab to aap ek aur baar soch sakti hey..dosti ke bare main…manyata..looks at uday who is fuming n anger…and jealous…and she replies to siddanth ..how sweet …par already I hv made some other palns for tomorrow..so may be some other time…siddanth..says no problem…just one phone call... vaise aap baki ki ladkiyon se bohoth alag hey…aaj kal ki aldkiyon ko dek ke aise lagta hey..ki dhuniya bohoth badal gayi…par aap jaise rajlkumari ko dek ke hume acha lagta hain…manyata thks him for d compliments…and siddanth takes leave from her and goes from there..…tab hi..later on unnati says come on bohoth hogaya..dada aaj to aapne apni charm bhi nahi dikahyi..pata hey..aapke liye kitne ladkiyan taras rahi hey..ek hasi ke liye …unke dil mat todiye..atleast 2 step to dance kariye…and he says fine…par kya humari magetar dance karegi humare saath…manyata says what no way…am I mad to dance with u….no way..uday:where there is a will there is a way my dear..u have to ..do u think..do u hav any option but to dance with me..yaad hain subha ds ne kya haha…vaise tumhari baton kyun itni tej hain..manyate replies .tum hi to kehte ho hi main do dhari tlawar hoon..isi liye bach ke rehna mujse..pata nahi kab tumhari jaan legi...manyata tries to go from there…by saying u cant force me..and was about to go from there….music starts…and uday dances…for a song do dharri talwar

          Uday sings and dances looking at manyata

          Nain katari aisi maari
          Tan man sulga aa...
          Tadpan bhaari
          (The sword of your eyes
          cuts me... into pieces )
          Ishq lahoo ka jab dil se utre ai ai...
          (When the blood of my love,drains from my heart)
          Dheere Dheere chadhe khumari
          (I get intoxicated)

          Khali jaaye na tera waar
          ho.. Khali jaaye na tera waar
          (oH sharpshooter..oh sharpshooter)
          Naino se karti hai shikar
          (You hunt with your eyes)
          Tu do dhari talwar yaaar
          ( you are a double edged sword)
          Tu do dhari talwar yaaar
          ( you are a double edged sword)

          Kaate toh karde rang daar
          (you have more venom than a snake)
          Tu do dhari talwar yaaar
          Tu do dhari talwar yaaar
          ( you are a double edged sword X2)
          Tu tto thodi mithi thodi si hai zehereelee re
          ( you are a little sweet ,but also a little poisonous)
          Jaise garmi ki ho tapti si dupahari re
          (As hot as the summer wind)
          Haule se tu kare dil pe halla re
          Ho...teri taarife karta mohalla re
          (Ever so silently you enter one's heart...that he dances with pure joy)
          Zaalim hai tera har singaar
          Haa..naino se Karti hai tu shikaar
          (You can dictate one's heart...You hunt with your eyes)
          Tu do dhari talwar yaaar
          Tu Do Dhari Talwar Yaaar
          ( you are a double edged sword x2)

          Ho baar baar tera naksh naksh
          ho Raksh Raksh mein Jalwaa tu dikhaaja
          Aa ja ja..
          Ho baar baar tera naksh naksh
          Ho Raksh Raksh mein Jalwaa tu dikhaaja
          Ho aaja aaja Mohabbat ki tu Whisky pila
          (again and again, your body contours, your walk, your smile..
          Come Intoxicate me with your beauty)

          Dede chahat ka tu sila
          ( oh poisonous beloved come to me-uday pulls her towards him)
          Aa ja Aa ja...
          Aa ja Aa ja...

          Manyata pushes him and starts singiing and dancing


          Ho Naa Juda khat mein toh lakhon gira doon
          (I can overthrow any power)
          Saare arsh wale dharti pe laa doon
          ( I can bring down the dictators)
          Main hoon husan mujhse bach ke hi rehna
          (I am a beauty,beware)
          Main hi muqaddar Bana doon, mita doon
          (I can make or break your destiny)

          Uday
          Tu Kar naa mana mujhe apna banna
          (Dont deny me, i submit to you)
          Abb aise tamashaa banna na
          (please dont play with my heart)
          Teri minnat karoon, Teri khatir maroon
          (I beg you,I plead you)
          Teri darr ke siwa Na thikaana
          (I have no other place than your doorstep)
          Tu tto thodi meethi Thodi si hai zeherili re
          (you are a little sweet ,but also a little poisonous)
          Jaise garmi ki ho tapti si dupahari re
          (As hot as the summer wind)

          Haule se kare dil pe tu halla re
          Ho teri taarife karta Mohalla re
          (Ever so silently you enter one's heart...that he dances with pure joy)

          Manyata

          Ho baatien hai meri hathiyar
          (my words are my weapon)
          Hayye naino se Karti hoon shikaar
          (I hunt with my eyes)
          Main do dhari talwaar yaar
          Main do dhari Talwaar yaar
          (I am a double edged sword)



          Ha..chahat Badi meri mehangi padegi
          ( my love will cost you dearly)
          Naagin nazar yaara jab jab ladegi
          (It will kill you with its poisonous eyes)
          Jee na sakoge to mar na sakoge
          (It wont let you live, it wont let you die)
          Banke zehar yun mohabbat chadhegi
          ( such is my venomous love)

          Uday
          Teri hasrat hui meri aafat huyi
          (I want you, i need you)
          Tere bin hoga ab naa guzaara
          ( I wont be able to go on without you)
          Tere saare sitam, tere sare zulam
          (All your wishes, all your desires)
          Kandi handi mujhe hai gawara
          (I will obey your every command)
          Tu toh thodi meeti thodi si hai zeherili re
          (you are a little sweet ,but also a little poisonous)
          Jaise germi ki ho tapti duphari re
          (As hot as the summer wind)
          Haule se kere dil pe tu halla re
          Ho teri taarife karta Mohaalla re
          (Ever so silently you enter one's heart...that he dances with pure joy)

          Manyata
          Ho rehne de tu yeh iqraar
          Dont play with fire)
          Haye naino ka Karti hoon shikaar
          ( I hunt with my eyes)
          Main do dhari Talwaar yaar
          I am a double edged sword)
          Oho Main do dhari talwaar yaar
          Oho tu do dhari talwaar yaaar
          Oho Tu do dhari talwaar yaaar

          After the dance everone are busy with the guest some of the youngsters in a group disucss about her beauty and her dance…but some one comments about her structure and her dacne..saying that koi bhi us epe fida ho Sakthe hey…and uday over hears this simultaneously manyata also …she tries to stop him..par uday takes him to a corner and beats him and handovers to a security while doing this the whole family witness the situation….party was over…

          manyata tries to stop him..by scolding him…uday says tum jaanti bhi ho woh ya keh raha tha manyata…manyata..haan jaanthi hoon..dunhiya main hazaro log aise baath karenge ..to tum sab se ladne jaoge…he says kya tum jaan ke baath bhi aisi baat kar rhai ho..haan hum kis ladki se baat kar rahe he ..ladko ko patane main maahir ho..sharat laga ke unhe tumhare piche guhmati ho….manyata shut up uday..is dhuniya main aise log hain..wiase who to sirf mere bare main baath hi ki..tum to kiya na wo sb kuch…to who tum se decent hain….uday..tum muje unke saath compare kar rahi ho..main tumahara magetar hoon…aur wo koi nahi hey…phir bhi …manyata:mangetar mangetar..tang aachuki hoon…kab huyi..humari roka..maine kabhi haan nahi ki…jab main 4 saal kit hi tab gudda guddi ki khel ki tarah roka kar di..jab ki muje uska matlab bhi nahi jaanthi …main tuje apni mangetar ke roop main kabhi nahi manthi…jaanwar ki tarah tum behave karte ho..aur unko kyun punish karete ho…uday says..main koi jaanwar nahi hoon samji…jise maine bachpan se apna mangetar maana ..jise chaha pyar kiya..use koi dekhe ya koi bole to main chup nahi rahunga…samji tum…vah..uday galti tum ki..aur ab mahan bane ki koshis kar rahe ho…aur yeh apnapan yeh chahat yeh pyar ka dong mere saamne mat dikao..kyunki yaha koi tumhara asli chehra nahi dekha..muje pata hey…tuje mujpe sirf aur sirf haq jatana aata hey..kabhi tumse kazor logon ko hurt karte ho…aur bolte ho haq hain….tume pata hey…tumhara ego..tume jis ladki ne sabke samne thapad mari use tum apni kaabo main rak na chate ho..isi liye uski marzi ke bager uske saath zabardasti karte ho..aur kehte ho payr,apnapan..tum is dhuniyan main sirf tumahre alawa kisi se bhi pyar nahi kar sakte…jab main kon hun yeh pata chal ne se pehle hi tum mujse msibehave karne ki koshish ki..tumhare as paas ladkiyan jo ghumti hain.,.aur main hoon humesha tumje reject karthi hoon isi liye tum muje hasil karna chahte ho…tumari aur street dog main koi difference nahi..woh bhi kisi ke saath aur tum bhi… tumhare liye sirf 3 shabd maayine lagte hey..s** ….

          uday: shouts manyata and raises his hand…and controls…manyata :ruk kyun gaye ,..maroge..maaro muje..dekha aapka ladla daamad ka asli chehra… uday:gusse main glass window ko thodeta hey..anad hurts his hand…gusse main he holds manyata and says…mere aankon main aanke daal ke dekho aur kaho main sirf s** ke liye yeh sab karta hoon…maine kabhi tumse zabardasti ki….dekho..agar ki hey to tum chillayi kyun nahi..kaise pehle tum muje thapad mara vaise kyun nahi ki…tum yeh bhul rahi ho manyata maine tume kabhi force nahi kiya..taali kabhi ek haath se nahi bajthi manyata saying this he leaves from there…his hand is injured..manyata realizes she has crossed her limit and coz of that uday hurted himself and feels guilty….unnati and ds and every one rushes to udays room…doctor saab comes and treats him..aur first aid karte hain..komal and sadhana goes to manyata and says beta aaj tak ki ladiyan aapke beech choti choi ladayiyan thi.par aaj tum sab ke samne uday ki beizati ki aur unki ahem ko dez pohunchayi…beta..aapki problems aap dono ke beech solve kijiye..sab ke saamen aise kar ke aap .ko kya mila…maana hey..uday toda gusse karte hain..aap jaante hain wo aapko leke kitne pocessive hain…aap uday ki izzat ka khayal rak ni chahiye…saying this they leave…manyata also feels very bad when she has seen uday hurting himself..and thinks gusse main kuch jyada hi boldi…

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          Precap: Manyata uday ke room main maafi maang ne ke liye aur manana ke liye Jaati hey..manyata:uday..i am sorry…aaj maine apni limits corss kar di..gusse me pata nahi chala main kya kya boldi..tabhi uday tells her to leave the room..but manyata was about to speak..he holds her tightly with anger & says zabardasti???zabardasti ka matlab kya hey yeh jaanthi bhi to tum manyata..aaj tak hum aap se job bhi kiya wo sirf pyar tha..par aaj hum aap ko batayenge zabardasti kya hoti hey and he forces him on her with anger..manyata is scared and frightened and says leave me uday ..u r hurting me…par uday use chodta nahi..later on manyata says uday please muje bohoth dard horaha hey…please chodo muje and cries……

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i know i have read all the parts...
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I think I know wot ur on about!!! 😊
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dont worry dear soon action will be taken ...we understand we aare all with u 👍🏼
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OMG 😲 Sisi was talking about this FF. Ya I read this FF.Hey Gems don't worry. We're with u.🤗
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guys ...maine yeh post kisi ko pinpoint karne ke liye ya kisi ko nicha dikhaneke liye nahi post ki...just to prove jo bhi mere frds ne pyar ishq aur nafrat main comment ki it copied ki ..isi liye post ki...mere kuch if frds ne muje proofs post karne ke liye kaha..to maine ek pal main emotional hoke post kardi..beleive me guys..dont want to hurt anyone...galti se post ki..to dev team ya admins of this page if you go thru this page...plz remove this post...i dont want to hurt others...muej post karne baad samaj main aayi ki main kitni galat ki...meri wajah se mahara ko sba log scold kar rahe hain..galti har kisi se hojata hain..vaise bhi galti insaano se hi hoti hey..to main us se gussa nahi hoon..at times it happens nothing is thr in our hands..par...is story ki wajah se dont change ur opinion about mahara..plz be frds with her like always...once agian i am sorry maine sare proofs post kardi...
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Thanks for bringing it to our notice .. the FF is now completely deleted from both posts and the topics too r closed with a warning note for the topic maker 😊

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