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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice prologue.👏 I liked it.😉 Do update first chap. soon.😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter-1
Every one seems to be so happy in the raj mahal in devgardh…rajmata is very busy in greeting the guests and brijraj .,.
…koaml is very busy in taking care of her new born child…giriraj and vasundara devi came with uday came to wish devgardh parivar and to c the new born princess…every one are so happy..rajmata and the entire mahasabha is so busy at the preperations of naam karan ceremony..and invited raj purohit ji..and has given the new born princess kundli to rajpurohit ji..where every one are very eager to know how lucky is the new born princess …know about …. Where in uday was bery busy in palying with the new born princess and he use to admire her like anything and says to her mom ..mamma c i hav a friendd to paly with me..where everyone laughs..
Rajpurohit Ji:rajkumari ji kundli ko dek ne baad wo kehte hein rajmata ji yeh khundli to lakhon mein ek hein…rajkumari ki janm nakshatra ke anusaar..yeh jaha bhi apna Kadam rakhengi waha ki mahol kushiyon se bhar jayegi..and she brings luck to the whole family interms of money wealth and property and happiness ..and aage chalkar rajkumari ji ek achi yuvrnai hi nahi balki yek achi maharani hi nahi balki mahasabha ki bahgdhaud bi inki ki haaton mein hi rahengi..jo chahe kitan bi koshish kare ..jab tak yeh humare saath hein..hum par koi aanch nahi aane dengi…evry one are so happy at rajpurohitjis words…and says she il be a powerful leader..no body will have the guts to question her…just like rajmata ji..she il rule the countrypar yeh keh ke he becomes sad...and rajmata ji par kya hein rajpurohit ji….
He says inki 22 saal tak inki jaan kahtre mein hein….aap inki itni khayal rak ni chaihiye ki hume pata bi nahi chal sakta hein ki katra ki taraf se inpe waar karegi
…and every one are worried and komal had teards in her eyes and holding her princess tightly and crying and then suddenly new born princess cries…and evry one are so worried and every one tries to make her calm…but every one fails to do so..then uday goes to her and plays a tune with his mouth organ…after listening to that tune new born princess stops crying and starts laughing…every one are so happy..on the other hand uday holds the new born princess hands and says I wont leave her..she il be always my friend and always mine..where every one laughs at him saying that lagta hein ki honewala mahraj abhi se hi apni maharani ko dundli…and everyone laughs..
Rajmata ji:agar aisi baath hein to hum humari is choti si pari ka pura khayal rakehnge..aur security bhi badaye
Rajpurohit ji:rajmatha ji inki naam ma ki akshar se shuru honi chahiye…kyun ki inki aane se hum sab ki zindagi mein importance leke aayi hein..isli liye inke liye manyata ka naam shoba dethi hein…so every one are happy and they keep the new born princess name as manyata…uday is so happy that her frds name is manyata..he palys with her..and rajpurohit ji says to every one that it is our duty to care of manyata..coz in future she is the one who is going to rescue us from many difficult situations and danger..and she is so lucky ..that she brings luck to everyone both in riyasat and in mahasabha..by any chance if something happens to her to sab kuch barbaad hojayega…..so saying this he gives a heart attack to every one…

At palace:
After the naming ceremony every one are so worried about this ……wherein uday is very busy with his princes he is sititng nest to komal not leaving manyatas hand and enjoying with her…then every one starts taking care of her like an angel….always a 10 member security team will be always present with new born princess …and every day brings some sought of happiness…and day by day devgadh s becoming wealthy and powerfull ..and the credit goes to manyata ….and when manyata is 3 years old komal has given birth to another baby girl and they named her as jaynandhini…when manyata is 2 yrs old menka has given birth to vjiay,and vasundara devi also has given birth to unnati when manyata is 3yrs old…so uday has got a cute little sister to take care…but he always stays with manyata..they play together and eat together and always be together…every one are so proud of these two's friendship..and one day they thought ki..hamesha yeh dono hamesha saath hi rehthe hein to kyun na hum indono ki roka kar de..aage chalke indono ko hi raiyasato ka dosti aage badana hein..udya was so happy..and manyata too..but uday is 6yrs old somewhat he understands …but manyata is too young…to understand..but she is happy coz uday is happy…brij is really happy ki uska plan pura horaha hein..he wants devgardh and take the bag duad of mahasaba..if manyata becomes his daughter inlaw then he il have the full control over mahasabha and both riyasat and properties…

Rajmataji and komals father has decided to name all the property and riaysat on manyatas name and the heir of devgardh and navalgadh (komal fathers riayasat)..and they named evrthing on manyatas name…and then they have informed this to rajpurohit ji..wehrein aftergoing through both uday and manyata's knudli he says lakon mein aisi jodiyan banaya hein bahgwanji ne..inki Jodi sabke ke liye ek chunati bangi..…yeh dono ek dusre ke liye hi bane hey..chaehey jitney bhi koshsish kare indono ka Milan hi inki baagya mein like hein..chahe yeh ek dusre se kitna dur bi chale jaaye par kismat ne indono ko milakar hi rahegi..wehre everone are so confused and asks y he said like this..coz they il be always together…rjapurohit ji says that theyare born for each other…and then they fix the asupicious date for engagement after a week that is manyatas 4th birthday…and every one are busy but where uday and manyata are very busy in plastic playing sword game and got hurt on her back shoulder…uday has hurted her and he cried a lot more than manyata..and everyone are so worried that manyata ko chot lagi hein..and brij scolded uday very badly…but every one stopped him from doing so coz its unintentional..but manyata is crying due to pain..in order to make her calm uday has played the tune with his mouth organ and manyata has stopped crying and smiles and then doctorsaab aake manyata ko check karke 4 stitches daal dete hein..and very one are scared ki 4ht yr is coming as per rajpurohit ji this year manyatas life is in danger..but every one has started concentrating on engament and birthday party coz both has planned on the same day ..on manyatas 4h birthday.and uday has got a special gift for her …and on the day of manyatas birthday first they had puja and then roka ceremony..where both uday and manyata exchanged their rings and udya has presented a locket chain..with 2 photos a heart shaped one…both his and her photo and then he has got the same one for him too and dono ek dusre ko pehna hi diya and then cake cutting ceremony both uday and manyata danced together and enjoyed nicely….suddenly lights went off..everyone are so tensed and then lights came in 3 mins..but they found manyata missing…
Rajmahal:
Kuch ki ghanto ke pehle pura rajparivar aur rajmahal mein khushiya hi khushiya nazar aarahithi..manyata aur uday ki roka aur manyata ki zanam din..par koi sapno mein bhi nahi socha tha ki unki zindagi mein aisi mod aaygei..zis pari ki aane ki vajah se unki zindagi khusiyon se bhar gayi thi..aaj us pari ki kidnap hone ki vajah se sab log usi manyata ko pagal ki tarah dund mein itna vyast hogaye …pani peeneki bhi phursat nahi..hein..tab inko yehsaas hua manyata ki importance kya hein inki zindagi mein…rajmanta ,brijraj,mahasabha,doctor saab sab har ek puri police aur staff sab log mayata ko aur us murari ko dundne mein busy hogaye the..par komal tho shock mein chali gayi ..wo na kuch bol rahi hein na kuch kaarahi hein…na rorahi hein..sirf darwaze ki aur dekrahi hein..is umeed se ki manyata laut kar vapas aajayengi….uday ka rona to kisi se bhi smabala nahi jaaraha tha ..isiliye vasundara saare bache ko lekar jaigardh chaligayi….uday puri tara tut chuka hein….

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: fatima4a

very nice

do update soon!!!

thankxx chap 1 done

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vasishtha

Nice prologue.👏 I liked it.😉 Do update first chap. soon.😊

THANKXXX...DONE
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was awesome i loved it please update soon
the whole thing was so nicely written
please make manveer meet soon
please update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: vampire12345678

it was awesome i loved it please update soon

the whole thing was so nicely written
please make manveer meet soon
please update soon

thank u dear ya and u know wat chap 2 is ready but i think baad mei update karun ge
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank u i will
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Mahara 23 u should b ashamed of doing this! u coppied some1 else's work n r posting here as if its ur own!! when u requested 2 post here the person who wrote this story Dolly Kumari who wrote Pyar Ishq aur muhabbat , the saga of love refused u 2 do so. then u told her 2 ask me the admin of Ashish Lovies fb pg n I also refused! how the hell u posted here? I won't let u go ahead with this u copy cat!! u will surely be punished by the mods! we have already reported this! n mods should take an action soon!! n yaaah whoever wants 2 read this story 9 epis just visit Ashish Lovies pg n check on the photo albums. u'll c there exclusive imag epis by Dolly Kumari! because of this shameless gal Mahara 23 the writer is refusing 2 continue with the story.plz report her post! Badi jhooti hai ye. aur chor bhi. kisi aur ka likha hua yahan par apna kehkar post karti hai!! badi besharam hai ye.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey...ab mujhe pata chala mujhe laga tha mene ye kahin padha hai...now i get it ye toh pyar ishq aur mohabbat dolly ki story hai...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this story is copied from ashish lovies fb page

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