Explosive Relationship- Part 5 (Pg 16)

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Futbol_queen

@Futbol_queen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

hey gurr mahara has left for a month

Aaw...Is her name Mahara or is it something else? If you know great! If not, Im going to have to choose someone else :(

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Futbol_queen
Aaw...Is her name Mahara or is it something else? If you know great! If not, Im going to have to choose someone else :(

her name is mahara

i think so

not sure

i commented on your LIAW ff

sorry for being late

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Rubaa Rana

@adorable_rana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Superb update Gurr...👍🏼

It was full of intense encounters and UV knew it that its M...coooll😉

Story is getting more interesting...So update soon na...

Thanx for the pm dear🤗

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sloppy-hope

@sloppy-hope

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

that was really good! can't they be together for a while?????? i'd luv 2 see manveer...

but i luvd it

thnx for pm

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@-SilverAngel-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Fab fab fab update!... Love how everything's progressing!

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

OMG...OMG...OMG

I love this SHORT-FICTION😆... I read the plot ,the day u started this...and then I read the c/s...and I was very intrigued about the story line. But, somehow...I got lost in my own world😕...and I didn't know when you officially began it...Anyway, I just read both parts...it is fantastic!!!👏

It's so fast paced and action-packed. Uday's uncle seems like a very cruel man,😡

Vijay is as lovable as always,

Jai, as usual- the stuck-up snob,

Akash...I'm not sure about him just yet...

AND...Manveer- our explosive duo😳...I love them!

Please update fast!!!

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Nimrit

@arna753

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

nice update. loved m and uv scenes.

do continue as soon as possible.

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Awesome update! Loved the action and romance combo! I usually don't like action much, but the way you are writing this FF, I am thoroughly enjoying the action! Keep it up! And update soon... I'm curious to know if UV will be able to catch M now.

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chitra_rao

@chitra_rao

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

WOW their first meeting was indeed explosive👏, loved it. It was so shrilling. And Uday knows who M is, Awww😳, cant wait to read more continue soon 😊 and thankuu so much for the PM😊

Edited by chitra_rao - 12 years ago