DEK Fanmade Episode 23 (Uday rescues Manyata)

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EPISODE 23 (Another 1 hour special episode)

This episode is dedicated to Saira aka Vampy as its her b'day soon. I had a lot of cover in terms of the situations arising and the plot so had to make it another 1 hr episode to do justice with it... hope you guys enjoy it. P.S: Saira: Since you like it hot, I hope you like itšŸ˜‰.


Manyata was lying on the floor blind to the world, her hands and feet were bound and she was struggling against the ropes in the hopes of getting herself free, but the knots were bound fairly tightly. She knew she had been kidnapped not so long ago and was surprised why the kidnappers preferred to keep her in a conscious state. Usually kidnappers would drug their hostages bringing them in an unconscious state as to lessen their chances of running away.


She figured out that these kidnappers had something up their sleeve. They weren't even keen to keep her safe, and were very aloof whether she got hurt in the process or not. She recalled her kidnapping. She had heard loud music playing in her room and thought that Uday must've opened the TV but couldn't understand why it was at such a high volume. She answered herself that he must be fidgeting with the remote.



She had just changed into a dry Anarkali salwar suit and had stepped out of the loo when 2 pairs of strong hands had grabbed her, one from her front and the other from her back. The one in the front aimed to grab her wrists while the one on the back grabbed her waist. She kicked the guy in front of her in his man part, and threw a decoration piece towards his head. It hit him on target and blood started to ooze out, but in spite of the injury the guy did not stop, she kept on throwing as many ornaments as she could to slow his pace, he kept dodging them or just blocking them with his arm. She looked for a way out and it was then when the kidnapper had grabbed hold of her wrists breaking a few of her bangles. Some of those bangles hurt her in the wrist and she started bleeding herself. She had then reached for the bed side lamp but ...



Her thoughts were interrupted when she felt something very hot and crackling near her feet, she could also hear something burning close by. Manyata immediately stopped squirming. She realized there was a fire ablaze nearby and any sudden motion from her side and her legs might just get burned. During a state of danger an animal's senses are heightened and this what Manyata felt as well. She felt like a prey, although she had lost her sense of sight owning to the blinds, her other senses were magnified.


"Dekho mujhe jaanay do, I promise to give you whatever amount you desire" Manyata tried to negotiate.


"Ajeeb dastaan hai yeh' Kahan shuru kahan khtam'.. Yeh manzilain hain konsi'. Na woh samajh sakay na hum'.Mubarakain tumhain kay tum' kisi ke noor hogaye' kisi ki itnay paas ho'. Kay sab say duur hogaaye🤪" sang the female in her beautiful voice stressing the last line.


"Look if something happens to me, not only Devgard and Jaigarh but the entire police dept. will be at your tail for the rest of your life. So be sensible and tell me what do you want, if you want money, I can get you any amount you desire." Manyata tried being diplomatic once again.


While the woman now hummed, "Aaiye Meherbaan' Baithiye jaan-e-jaan'.Shauk say lijiye' Ishq kay imtihaan🤪" while totally ignoring Manyata and her techniques of conflict resolution. She then got up and left kicking Manyata in the shins.



Uday had lost his princess once again. He began going over all his enemies in his mind, but what prompted him was the voice of the girl in the tape. He had heard it before, could she be?... No she couldn't, she was in Singapore since their supposed break up. She was just another girl for him that he had flirted with and spent a night with. She wanted to be a singer. He had heard her in some college fest, and one thing had led to another.


He immediately called his employee Karthik and told him to get him info about Suhani Mishra; her phone records, where she was last spotted, every recent detail about her and to fax all the info to him within two to three hours at most, and also told him to get in touch with the police of Shimla secretively. Uday had an untraceable private number therefore he was safe about the nature of his calls. His gut told him he was on the right track. That girl in the picture was her, and the melodious voice on the tape was Suhani as well. He knew she had psychotic tendencies. Somebody had once called her a 'Wannabe' and she had shattered a vase on the guy's head just on the comment and had then FORCED him to stay and listen to her, by the time she was done the guy had to be rushed to the ER. She was a rich, spoilt girl who had loads of beauty but no real manners or decency. Everything was a facade with her. Uday knew Suhani was trouble so he hoped with all his might that Manyata was fine.


He, and Vijay bhai re-watched the tape over and over to get some idea where Manyata could be, trying to focus on different angles, focusing on things in the background until he spotted a faint sound of water in the background. It sounded like a waterfall. There was a slight angle at the corner of the scene where there was a window and he could see waterfall behind. While Vijay deduced that there was a fire in the room which meant that there was no electricity in that hut or warehouse. This also told Uday that Suhani didn't own this place, she must've rented it because everything Suhani Mishra owned was beautiful and kept in mint condition. Summer had just finished and schools had started so most of the tourists were gone from Shimla at this time so finding a rented out, area without any electricity would not be hard to search. Uday smirked and said to himself, "Don't worry princess I've got you, and Suhani you were never much of a thinker."


In the meanwhile Karthik faxed all the required details to Uday and from Suhani's phone bills his suspicions confirmed that she was in Shimla, and was residing in a hotel just 10 mins from his own. He instantly got Suhani's phone tapped and the very first call on it was from the kidnapper who had called her to tell her that he could not move Manyata as the weather was getting cloudy and a thunderstorm was expected. She had yelled badly at the kidnappers but had then told him, she was coming over there in an hour and would personally supervise 'Moving the Goods' as she called them. She had no patience to keep Manyata in Shimla where Uday could find her no matter how the weather was, and intended to shift her to some other city so he could feel the pain of being separated from his lady love, and to burn in it till his last breath.


Uday doubted that someone from the hotel was also involved in this kidnapping otherwise how would the kidnappers know which hotel and which room the couples were staying in, and without inside help it wouldn't have been so easy to get Manyata out. Unnati then told Uday that he should call the manager and feign as if he's terribly distressed cause of his wife's disappearance second time now, and he'll be in his brother-in-law's room so any phone call that he receives or to direct any mail of his in his brother-in-law's room.


This will soothe the staff that he is living with his family and is not out searching for Manyata. Uday then proceeded towards the elevator and to go towards the fifth floor but as soon as the manager was out of sight, he took out his hat and wore his jacket from a plastic bag that he was carrying as a camouflage and took the stairs towards the exit. He took a cab instead of his car to not arouse any suspicion with 3 of his guards following him dressed as civilians. He saw Suhani getting out of her hotel and after following her, he reached his destination where Manyata was kept.




Suhani was taking Manyata out from the hut that was on the edge of the hill and unfortunately for Uday, Suhani recognized him in his disguise. By this time, the sun was almost about to set. "Arey wah toh aagaye Yuvraj Udayveer Singh apni Maharani ko bachanay. Main tum dono ki zindagiyan alag kar dena chahti thi par lagta hai ab maut hi yeh kaam poora karegi" and ordered the guys to throw Manyata off the cliff. They did as they were ordered and Manyata fell down into the waterfall while Suhani seeing her plan succeeding started singing, "Yeh raatein'' Yeh Mausam'' Nadi ka kinara' yeh Chanchal hawa" and laughing hysterically.



Manyata was tightly bound in ropes so she couldn't swim and was drowning. Uday dove in after in from the cliff without a second thought while a car chase began between Uday's men and smelly Suhani with the kidnappers who had tripped in cow's dung while escaping. Uday grabbed hold of Manyata and swam her towards the shore. He freed her off her ropes, but she was unconscious. He gave her CPR and she opened her eyes, still not fully recovered. His phone had dropped out of his pocket while diving so couldn't call for back up. By this time, the sun had gone down and a full moon was coming up.



He took Manyata in his arms and looked around. He spotted a hut nearby and thought of asking the owners' a room for the night, but found the hut to be abandoned. It was just a room made out of bricks with a window and a fireplace. He gently laid his wife on the floor and began massaging her hands and feet. He realized the temperature was going down and Manyata was beginning to shiver, he was feeling the drop in the temperature as well. He shed off his wet shirt and pants, and began to undress Manyata. Her clothes were drenched too, and staying in those clothes would mean a slow death for her. He hesitated momentarily before undressing her as he'd never taken off her clothes while she was unconscious, but reminded himself that he was her husband and had a right on her. He could undress her any time of the day or night for that matter and he knew she wouldn't mind. He took off her wet salwar, and Anarkali and found her to be wearing a lingerie underneath it.



Manyata opened her eyes slowly as he undressed her calling out to him as hypothermia began to set into her skin. "Uday".. .."Shushhh meri jaan, abhi nahi. Save your strength" Uday coaxed her. "Tum nay mujhe phir se dhoond liya Uday. Tum hamesha mujhe dhoond hi letay ho" she said proud of her husband.


"You know this is not how I had imagined you taking off my lingerie.. but still I don't mind" said Manyata naughtily with a hint of shyness. This was what Manyata was wearing underneath:





Uday laughed: "Yuvrani Manyata'. Thand main bhi Mazak soojh raha hai aapko, unbelievable!"


"Mazak kyun na karon, it was my first honeymoon jo us singing Chameli nay barbaad kardiya'.hmmpphh!!" making a cute face... Uday you're so warm" said Manyata after a minute touching Uday's arm.


"Warm kyun nahin honga aakhir aapko utha kar jo laye hain, Itni exercise jo ho gaaye hai humari" uday chuckled. As luck would have it he found some dry wood and matches. He then lit up the fireplace to bring in some heat, and spread out their clothes near the fire. He then bent down and scooped Manyata up in his arms and laid her over him so she could get additional heat from his body. She lied naked on top of him her chest heaving with each of his breath, both clutching each other as if they'd met after years of separation.


There longing for each other intensifying with each passing minute. Manyata rested her head over Uday's heart and felt his heart hammering with desire. However, she was thankful he was not making any move as she just wanted to lie on top of his warm body and soak up his body heat. After 10 or 15 minutes Manyata felt the heat returning to her body completely and she stopped shivering. She got up and reached for her clothes which had begun to dry out. Her heavy embroidered Anarkali suit that she had worn earlier at the behest of her mother who told her newly wed girls should stay all decked up for a few days was still wet so she decided to put on her lingerie just to cover herself up.



"You know Manyata people say that a soul resides inside a person's body, but today I found out that it is entirely incorrect." Said Uday looking at Manyata's bare back while she dressed.
"What do you mean Uday?" asked Manyata turning towards him now wearing her lingerie and looking into his eyes where she saw desire, love, lust, care and... fear. He looked at her admiring her curvaceous body and while she stood, she couldn't help but secretly eye his herculean features, and a perfectly tanned chiseled body. Manyata felt her knees going weakā˜ŗļø



"I can endure anything happening to me, but when it comes to you, I become paranoid. Do you know that today was the worst day of my life Manyata. An entire day without you, not even knowing how you were or where you were?, it was then I realized YOU are the soul of my body. I have no words to tell you about the depths of my love for you." Uday ended his conversation with his icy eyes now moist, such was her effect on him. He looked away.


Manyata's eyes became moist too. She bent down and hugged him planting a small kiss on his left cheek. He hugged her softly whispering in her ear, "These events have taught me one thing that no one can keep Manyata away from Udayveer cause Uday will always find his way towards his Manyata." He then eyed her dewy lips and closed the distance between them. She returned his kiss with equal passion and vigor.



"You know it would be such a waste of money if we don't use this properly, and besides I'm in no mood to let some singing chameli ruin my honeymoon" Manyata replied in an effort to change his somber expression and lighten up the mood.


He genuinely smiled at her attempt to cheer him up and laid her down and began kissing her neck softly, enjoying each kiss and each touch following it as if it was their first time, and kept on going lower and lower playing with the straps of her lingerie, testing their durability ā˜ŗļø. She moaned in ecstasy with his rhythm. It was as if Uday had an unquenchable thirst that only Manyata could satisfy and vice versa.


Manyata closed her eyes and let him explore her completely. Within minutes her lingerie laid afar, and they dived into their passions groping, sucking, kissing, and entering into each other until both were lost enjoying the pleasures that the night had to offer basking in the moonlight of the full moon watching over the two lovers from the window while time stood still for Manyata and Uday.


THE END
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AWESOME UPDATE DIDIā­ļøYAYY FINALLY UDAY RESCUES MANYTAROCKING EPISODE🄳MANVEER EK KAMRE MEIN BAND HO OR CHABBI KOH GAYEšŸ˜‰šŸ˜†MANVEER SCENES WAS TOO KEEP IT UPā­ļøI LIKE UR WRITING SKILLS ā­ļøU ROCK🄳LOVE U😳
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awesome episode mahi šŸ‘ i am not a regular readeršŸ˜”but i enjoy ur whole episode its amazing and hotā˜ŗļøšŸ‘šŸ¼
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Mahi Mahi šŸ¤—, this episode was so worth the delay and the wait, loved itšŸ‘šŸ‘. It was a blockbuster episodešŸ‘šŸ¼, had suspense, a psychotic singing Chamelic villian, my prince in full on rescue mission, and then their enchanted union. hehehhe Waise tune bhi barn ka sahara le hi liya.

And Manveer dialogues at the very end was so awesome, and also symbolic. "Uday will always find his way to his Manyata."

OOOsome episode Mahi, If after delaying we get such episode, better all the epiosde come out delayed, we seriouly dont mind waiting for something this amazing šŸ˜‰

And Ria thanks for the PM.And Mahi thanks for the Scrap šŸ¤—

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Awesum episode prince nay princess ko bacha liya or saath may ahem ahem bi kr liya lol heheheheh
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wonderful epi Mahi...šŸ‘...and Manveer scenes were so hot but very sweet...UV is always so caring and loving towards his princess...hayeee ...I always go gaga over his love and care..wish mujhe koi aisa mila hota... .Thanks for giving us this lovely episodešŸ˜›
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Originally posted by: smiley12

AWESOME UPDATE DIDIā­ļøYAYY FINALLY UDAY RESCUES MANYTAROCKING EPISODE🄳MANVEER EK KAMRE MEIN BAND HO OR CHABBI KOH GAYEšŸ˜‰šŸ˜†MANVEER SCENES WAS TOO KEEP IT UPā­ļøI LIKE UR WRITING SKILLS ā­ļøU ROCK🄳LOVE U😳



Thanks so much for reading and appreciating my Choti Ria😃!!
And thanks so much once again kay aapko mera writing style pasand aaya!... My hard work safal hogaya!... YAY!!
Actually I wrote these hot hot scenes only for Saira as her b'day present... cause I don't know if I'll be able to update my SS/FF or not!

Thanks a million once again!šŸ¤—
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awesome episode mahišŸ‘
manyata being naughty and trying to change uday's mood even when she was hypothermic was cute😳😳 uday is the best as always😳 rescuing manyata and taking care of her😳😳

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GREAT JOB...THIS WAS SOO SOO SOO MUCH BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN DONT HAVE WORDS TO EXPLAIN HOW AMAZING WAS IT JUST PERFECT...
THE EMOTIONS WERE SOO AMAZINGLY EXPRESSED...
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