LOVE TANGLE - MY FIRST MANVEER ATTEMPT

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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOVE TANGLE

He ' a handsome hunk

She ' a pretty princess

The story of a handsome hunk and a pretty princess. They took a vow that they'd be best buddies till eternity''

The bumpy journey of 2 Best Buddies to love.

They had been best of friends from childhood and thick as thieves. Initially, whenever someone had tried to label their friendship as love, they resisted and denied it.

Years passed on, they passed out from the school, went to different colleges but they were still best friends. Both of them passed out from their colleges and got placed. Now everyone assumed they were "just friends"

BUT slowly they had fallen for each other. It was not love at first sight or like they were in love from childhood. What will happen now?

Will they confess their love or keep it buried forever?

How will their friends and family receive this news?

Will they accept it?

Or will they make it difficult for the love birds?

Who all will say 'I told u so'?

Guys here is My first Manveer Attempt. Should I continue?

Leave your criticisms n suggestions to take this story forward...

With Love,

Abhi

P.S. The love story of my best friend inspired me to write this.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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CHARACTER SKETCH will post tmrw
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice start Abhi:)please update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice start dear... Continue soon dear... Ekdum raapchik hai...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome plot honey do continue would love to read more:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Abhi.🤗 Nice start yaar. 😉Superb concept.👏 👏 👏
You should continue with it.😊
I loved it.😛
🤗 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good start...and where is chrc. Sketch?plzzz...update soon...and do PM me.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved the plot!!
Waiting for more abhi!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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carry on we are all here to read 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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pls do continue dear...waiting 4 the update

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