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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: adorable_rana

Very nice update Tanvi sweety👍🏼

really liking this confused M and now lets see how she deals with it😉😆

Update soon and pm me when you update next🤗

Yes... dear.. Due to some problem I couldn't PM anybody... And Thanks alot.. rubaa😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Gr8 update
UV-M eyelock was nyc
i wonder who called M
UV ??
hmmm
precaps nyc
i hope i survive de suspense in
de next chapter
he he 😊

cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: lilybabes

Gr8 update

UV-M eyelock was nyc
i wonder who called M
UV ??
hmmm
precaps nyc
i hope i survive de suspense in
de next chapter
he he 😊

cont soon

Thanks alot.. well the upcoming chapters will create even more suspense..😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Chapter 3Manyata woke up with a sweet smile on her face. After playing with her hair and smiling she went inside the bathroom. She took a quick shower and she came out. She scanned her wardrobe but she could see nothing great to wear today. Today was the special day. It was her birthday. She was the happiest person today. She had turned 27 today.
(this was Manyata's western outfits wardrobe)" Nope I need to look like a princess today. A perfect Indian princess." Manyata said to herself. Just when Komal entered inside " Happy Birthday Beta " she wished her and hugged her daughter. " Thankyou mom. But can I ask you what should I wear today?" Manyata said when Jehnandini entered the room. " I'll tell you Jiji " she and her big sister had a conversation after months. Manyata stood with her mouth open there. " What a pleasant surprise Jeh. When where and how?" Manyata asked her little sister who she loved dearly. " I thought of surprising you on your birthday Jiji " Jehnandini said with equal excitement. Jeh started scanning her sisters wardrobe. It had everything from designer dressed to branded shoes and bags. Jeh had seen all the London collection because the only thing she did in London was shopping. But here the scenario was different. " Stop scanning this one. Select from here" Manyata said as she opened another huge wardrobe filled with Indian sarees and dresses. " You want to wear these? " Jeh said shockingly " Yes I want to look like a true Yuvraani today. Let the office guys know what I am " Manyata said " Today also Office? " Komal said. " Yes maa.. You know I don't like missing office. " Manyata sticked to her rules whatever situation it maybe. ( Komals POV)How can this happen? After Jehnandini's sudden return my cold hearted daughter with no excitment in life is improving. I knew that my daughter is smart and intelligent. She won't take the war seriously.
(end of Komals POV)
Manyata decided to wear a saree today. Which was not too formal and not too casual. Manyata quicly drapped the saree and came out of the changing room. She looked breathtakingly beautiful.
(this was her saree)
*******
She was sorting some files in her office when she recieved a call from a private number. " Who's this now? " she said.
" Hello " the voice said on the other side " Yes who's this? " Manyata said. " Aww sweetie pie. You don't remember me? The one who warned you for your death. Somewhere somebody is trying to get rid of you. " the voice said. " I will complain to the police Mr. whoever " Manyata said firmly.
On the other hand Udayveer was also busy in his office when he recieved a call too. He picked it up and the voice said " Your darling princess is in trouble. Dare not call the police." Before Udayveer could say anything the call was cut. He shivered, his princess means Manyata but she means nothing to him. Why should he help him? " She was the one who started the war and I will end it " Udayveer said and started working again.
Manyata sat down in her black S class Mercedes and asked the driver to take her home. The car suddenly stopped " What happend? " Manyata asked " Nothing ma'm the engine must've become hot. I'll go feed the engine some water. " the driver said and started checking the car.
Udayveer was sweating very badly and he didn't know why. He couldn't concentrate on his work. " that's it " he said while standing up from his chair. " I need to go check atleast. Maybe all my cruelty will get washed if I do some good deeds." he said convincing himself. He drove towards her office in 120 kmph and stormed inside her cabin without even knocking and saw that the luxurious cabin was empty.
He asked the peon wear she was and he said she went home. He ran back to his car and drove towards her way home. He was now scared. " What it must be? Is anyone trying to play a fool with me? " Udayveer was confusingly scared.
Manyata was now feeling dizzy. She drank some water and came out of the car to see what the driver was doing. " What happend? " Manyata asked impatiently. " Ma'm I need to go get a mechanic. You can call for another car this will take time " the driver suggested. " Fine go" Manyata said. She called up the head security guard " Hello Veersingh please send a car for me on Palli hill road. " she said " Ma'm some cars are gone for servicing. Only each family member's indivisual cars are kept and everybody is out with their cars. " Veer Singh said. " Fine "
As Manyata kept her phone in her purse two bikers came and snatched her purse. " Hey darling " Manyata at once recognized the voice it was the phone one. There were 7 or 8 men. They advanced towards her and...
To be continued _- _
Hey guys. as I said the upcoming chapters will create more suspense...
Hit the LIKE button if you liked it and do drop in ur precious comments.
Tanvi:)
P S : All the PMs will be sent from this chapter onwards..
Edited by princess_T - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Eee jo koi bhi woh kamina hain uday peeth usse!!!! Rod se lekar!!!!
Mein toh petaayi dekhna chahti hoon!!
Nice update!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Gowri05

Eee jo koi bhi woh kamina hain uday peeth usse!!!! Rod se lekar!!!!

Mein toh petaayi dekhna chahti hoon!!
Nice update!!

thankss Gowru... Chapter 2 ka precap padhle.. You'll know...
Chapter 2 page- 6
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Awsomeee...but short update next time i want longgg...update...sooo...finally uday ne war end karne ko pehel kar hi di...awww...he really cares for her...update sooon...and thanxxx...for PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58

Awesome update Tanvi sweety👍🏼

Story is getting more interesting and twist that came will bring UV and M together ...hai na😉

but very nicely written⭐️

and thanx for the pm sweety and update soon🤗

Edited by adorable_rana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
awesome i loved it
thanks for pm
i loved manyata and her attuide and i loved the pics they were so awesome and perfect
i loved the fact that uday still cares for his princess
the guys now i know uday will give them a good bashing
please please update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
oh my goddd,!!!!!!!!!! ye to suspense hi suspensee,plzz zplzz updatee soon!!!!!!!!!

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