SS: Soul mate..Sab Mera Tu..Chap 1 pg.11+Vid pg.12

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Nityah

@-StarlitFire-

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

its totally awesome dear...

Really beautifully written and binded...

Great work...

I just can't wait to read more...

Thanks for the pm...

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zainab

@--Zinay--

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Thank God u finally updated chapter 1...

it was a very nice update awesome!!

lovet it alot!

update soon thanks for pm!😳

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@ITV_Loverr

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Mahi I won't say you anything. Just waiting for manveer. I loved the first part. It was nice. But please vanish mat ho jana.

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chitra_rao

@chitra_rao

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Hey Mahi 🤗, firtly when I opened my inbox, I just stared at ur PM for like 5 minutes, not believing the fact that u updated 😆, but then u really did update, it was a total "Pyaase ko pani mila" type moment for me 😉😆.

OK now coming to ur update, loved every word, every piece of it👏👏.

The soulless prince: yes Uday here was one soulless creature. His soul was lost long ago when his yaar was stolen from him, and what is now left is just a soulless prince who understands just politics, lust,money and power. The whole characterization of Prince Udayveer was so well etched Mahi, loved it 👏. The way he thinks of women as a luxury and lust material, as a brand ambassadors of Use and throw was again very well articulated. The same 6 years old innocent boy whom I fell in love with instantly was no where here.I kind of abhorred him for his thinking. Awesomely written Mahi 👍🏼

Curse for justice: Again I felt teriibly bad for Su-Min😕. UV not only used her body, but also killed her soul. The way she prayed to the almighthy for her justice and killed herself, was so heart wrenching. I could feel her every pain, every misery, every disguist creeping within her for getting fooled by such an unworthy beast.(Yes UV is an unworthy beast here).It also scares me Mahi, will UV never find Happiness, will there be never a happy Manveer even at the end😕

The chapter so aptly describes ur title, Mahi I have just read ur two episodes so far, I have become one of ur big pankha now😳😳. Please dont disappear again , warna I'm gonnaopen a PM ki dukkan for u 😆. BTW loved ur ss's title video, 👍🏼

Edited by chitra_rao - 12 years ago

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Sunshinegirll

@Sunshinegirll

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

hey nice chapter mahi..
chapter without manveer s okay coz u have shown how uday has been living his life..
waiting to see how the story is going to proceed😊
pls hame bahut wait mat karvana.. update the next chapter soon.. 😃😃

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Fekta Holic

@WhatTheF

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

hey mahi awsomeee...start...poor su-min...kahan heartless prince ke chakkar me pad gayi...update soon and thanx for PM.

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pia

@pia.raha

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

uday thnks dat grls can be bought wit moneyy,waitng for him to meet manyata!!!!!!! the last scene was suprb,wen manyata jst enterd!!!!!!!! update soon😊

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Sonam

@-RK_Ki_Biwi-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

RES. My pinchy bahna's first Manveer FF.🥳

Will comment after reading it.

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Good background work... now waiting eagerly (read impatiently) for the real thing to start 😉 .

Thanks for the pm. And please update sooner this time if possible.

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Uday Lovie

@Udaylovie

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#100

it was ultimate i dont have words to say nd the video is way far bttr than dheeme dheeme ... i loved it thanxx a lot fr the pm ... plzz plzz plzz update soon .. :):)

Edited by vrinda.diva - 12 years ago

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