Dark Love Story Chapter 21(Pg142) last chapter - Page 40

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

why did the update just stop

i am tired of waiting🥱

please update soon

i am going offline in a bit

gargi update update update

Originally posted by: Shals9

wow!!! what an update. Manyata thinking about her feelings for uday and uday getting irritated by reeta's advances. It was really hilarious what uday was thinking.

Wow!! Manyata and uday left alone behind.. This is going to be awesome. Please try and update soon.. your FF is superb.

Happy Birthday again Gargi. I hope you had a wonderful day.

Originally posted by: Vasishtha

Fantastic, awesome,superb, woderful, breath taking, fantabulous, marvalous update Gargi..👏 👏 👏 👏

I read update but forgot to comment on it.

Manyata's sis Sangeeta is so chipku n flirty girl.😆 Gim scene was superb.😉 Uday is very naughty never leave a chance of come near to Manyata.😳 When he was helping Manyata on equipments OMG so Dreamy. Loved that scene.❤️ n in the end when everyone staring at Uday n Manyata n specially Sangeeta 😆 everyboday was so shocked.😉

Great update Gargi, beautifully written.😛

Thanks for the wonderful update n PM.😊

Do update ASAP, waiting for the next update, Uday n Manyata going on a trip.😉

Great work.👍🏼

I'm really sorry for the late comment.😳

Love you.🤗 🤗

Originally posted by: Jarin04

Sis pls update soon. Can't wait. U left it in a very interesting point.

Originally posted by: MsLuscious

Great update gargi... Lol that bio professor or should i saw despo professor was funny.The chapter was beautifully written especially manveer parts but one think i didn't understand of manyata's sister i don't remember her name but if she said manyata was in bus then why the other teachers n manyata's friends didn't noticed her absence in the bus?? lol sardarni bunty n bubly dialogue was hilarious in short the whoe update was beautiful i loved it. Desperately waited for next part:D