Dark Love Story Chapter 21(Pg142) last chapter - Page 29

Originally posted by: andy.a

I loved the chapter very interesting the dark love story is indeed becoming darker. As my hindi is quite poor sometimes i find it difficult to understand the dialoges. Could u plz give a small explanation abt it in bracket . But pls dont change ur writing style. It the best that way.i really want to understand the story well as it is one of my favorites

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

Ok andy...Ill translate the sentences written in hindi to english in bracket..Actually thought many times but then not getting time as I always update in a hurry...but will do it for all the previous updates and also for all the next chapters...😊...n thanks for still reading it with so much effort...😛

Originally posted by: andy.a

thank u so much. Only the present chapter is enough.others i can manage pls dont take trouble 4 that. If ur busy with ur work u dont need to do it

Originally posted by: sweetshab

OMG

Awesomest updates
Loved it to the core

Fantastic characterisation ..they live the characters completely ...i mean u make me watch a complete outastanding movie ..old days and the people ..and MAGIC as an integral part ...wow u connect the things so flawlessly .u make a point of the language they use ..their behavior and ofcourse the moving story
Black magic and its effect ..desctruction rivalry OMG !!

Its a complete package of OUTSTANDING

Awesome gargi m falling short of words *bow*
m head over heels in love with this FF and main toh teri fan bann gayiii :D

Cont soon :)

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

awww...
wow omg it was too gud...
its awesume yar...
loved it lloads...
thanks for pm...
and plz pm me wen u update nxt...