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Malvaika

@Malvaika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Omg...it was hilarious. majnu GAY???? yay. Vijay betwn kiss🤣 & jai's top list. LOLzzz. 'oversexed'???? plzz update soon. asap

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afreshbegin

@afreshbegin

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Haaye aisa raha toh mera mind kabhi bhi Gutter se bahar nahi aayega😳

Aree tum saare writers itne hot hot ffs likhogi toh mein kya karoongi😉

Bahuth achi story hai par haan mera niyath toh zaroor bigad jayega

Uss Akash ki gandi nazar se mere Prince or Princess ko bachane ke liye thanx...

Aur woh j toh 🤬 hi hai

This was my favourite part...

DS: Vijay, cut the talk. Make sure these two are in 2 separate rooms, with heavy security and no means of communication with each other, because if you give these guys even half a chance, they'll end up entwined before you can say 'oversexed'.

Vijaybhai tries to pry them apart, but succeeds in getting stuck in between. Uday and Manyata carry on, ignoring the obstruction. Vijaybhai battles valiantly, but soon

Vijaybhai: Warm' cozy' I could fall asleep in here' what?! WAIT! What am I saying?! OH NO! NANI SHAB! Their love is affecting me too! Help me!

ab DS toh poori ki poori Hitler ban gayi yaar aur bechaare VB inn doon premiyoon ki beec stuck ho gayee... Par DS toh kaafi over-imaginative hai entwined ha

Ab mera dil patha nahi kya kya soch ne laga hai.. after all jaise Uday ne kaha:

Naughty people would always be naughty rite?

Anyway this is an awsome story pls update it soon.

n Thanx for the PM dear..😃

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

please dont get upset i am tying my level best my dad is in hospital and i have to stay with him

Oh God Saira- I am so sorry about your dad. OBVIOUSLY...he comes first! Stay with him & take good care of him. Don't worry about us WHINERS!

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757315

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: navinahun

Oh God Saira- I am so sorry about your dad. OBVIOUSLY...he comes first! Stay with him & take good care of him. Don't worry about us WHINERS!

it is nothing terrible it is just diabetics tests and he has to kept under observation and i with him 24/7 but now he is resting so i can write😃

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chitra_rao

@chitra_rao

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Hey saira🤗, I remember reading this ff, in some bits and pieces. Thanks fro compiling it and putting it up in one place.😛

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757315

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: chitra_rao
Hey saira🤗, I remember reading this ff, in some bits and pieces. Thanks fro compiling it and putting it up in one place.😛

glad u liked it and chitra please give your analysis comment please