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sloppy-hope

@sloppy-hope

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

that was short but sweet! continue writing!

do pm me next tym...🥱

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princess_T

@princess_T

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: smiley12
😭APUN KA NAAM KAHE ICH NAHI HAI RE BOLE TU APUN NE FIRST COMMENT KIA THA😭BUT APUN Hii MISSING HAI🤣

Tune apun ko bolaich nahi PM dene ko par... Chal ab tujhe daal diya

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princess_T

@princess_T

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Thankyou all for the appreciation😃

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princess_T

@princess_T

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: CharmingAngel7
Yay meri Tannu FF writer ban gii🥳... tunay aakhir bandooqain chod k keyboard thaam hee lya sudhar hee gi aakhir🤣... ok now abt the FF character sketch is really nice I loved it... seems like to me Tanisha would b manyata getting close to UV & they wont know shes manyata as UV's bethroted to manyata so there would b something like v cant b together n all😉😆... see mere mind main tho abi hee shru hogya pakna tera FF🤣... prologue b fit hai... ab part1 b likh daal... pm me when u update (yeh b koi kehnay ki zarurat thi aur tu ne FF shru kya mje hee ni btaya na pm chal phir b mj detective ne dhoond hee lya haw 😲 tu meri buddy list main b nii chal main ne tje request bheji hai abi k abi accept kr)
Take care love ya😆

Thankoo Wishu😃 Sorry for the late reply meine bahut jaldi jaldi mein dekha tha yeh comment and the mein bhul gi...😕 Thanks alot... Waise mein pehele se writer hu... Maine ek SS likha hai I was Wrong... 😳 Love you too...😳 And thanxxx⭐️ Sab kuch kardiya all the tasks are complete *phew*😃

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princess_T

@princess_T

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Chapter 2The girl infront of his car looked angelic yet glamorous. She was wearing a pink short and body hugging dress. He wondered who this girl could be. he got out of his car and saw her shinning face.J: Hiii UdayUday: Ohh shit J... I just didn't recognize you.J: Haan Haan.. tum hummein kyu pehchanoge.. Humare saath flirt thodi na kar sakte ho..Uday: Ohh please... (hugging her)J hugged him too. Just when Tanisha and Rohan passed from that street and saw those two..Tanisha: PDA.. huhRohan: Tumhein har baat mein itni panchayat kyu hai?Tanisha: You're in a mood to fight?Rohan: Noo... Chal jaldi ab mall paas mein hee hai... Get ready to attack the stores.Tanisha: yehaaa...Meanwhile, J and Uday broke their hug and J looked at Uday's clothes. He was so not looking Indian. His fair complexion and branded clothes made him look like a Foriegner. J: Uday.. Tum Indian toh lag hee nahi rahe ho.. You looking hawt.. But you need to look a little like Yuvraaj Udayveer Singh. Uday: What's the problem in these clothes?Uday had been staying in London since 5 years now. He had developed that crisp british accent. Not even one thing represented Yuvraaj Udayveer Singh so he deffinately needed a makeover. J: Nothing.. but your a Yuvraaj. You need to be a little Indian. Uday: Fine saali sahiba.J: That's good.. now get into the car.. J texted her friens's that she won't be coming with them tonight. Uday knew this girl was very fond of his company and he too liked her as a friend and Saali. The thought of saali made him think of Manyata. But he removed out those thought's and decided to enjoy his life. He had planned to search her. *****************Tanisha and Rohan were excitedly walking inside the mall. J and Uday also reached the parking lot. Uday was feeling a little different today. Same was happening with Tanisha. She was feeling that someone she's related to is over here. But, she concentrated on shopping with Rohan. J: haan toh Uday.. We're first going to Manish Arora's store for some good desingner clothes.Uday: Humari wallet toh gayi...Tanisha was busy muttering something to Rohan and she didn't look in front. She didn't even know where she was walking and suddenly she bumped into someone very manly. Her cheek was resting on his perfect chest and her eyes were closed. The familiar feeligngrew even more stronger in both of them. He looked at her innocent face and immediately a smile crept his face. Tanisha: Umm... I'm sorry.. I didn't see you.Uday: I'm sorry too...Tanisha grinned and decided to have some fun with this guy so she followed him everywhere and overheard J saying something about Jaigadh and Devgadh. She porpusely bumped into him again. Tanisha: Oops... ohh.. Don't you think it's funny we're bumping into eachother again and again.Uday was no less. He noticed the flirty grin on his face and decided to have some fun. He asked J to go to the food court and he said that he'll come there. Tanisha was smiling continuosly and finally she spoke up.Tanisha: Umm.. I'm Tanisha. (she put out her hand to shake hands with him)Uday: I'm Udayveer.Tanisha: Ohh teri. Yeh toh bahut bhaari name hai yaar. Tum koi Rajwade toh nahi? (laughing softly)Uday: Haan hum rajwade hai... Tanisha: hahahaha waise tum mazaak accha kar lete ho.Uday: hum mazaak nahi kar rahe hai... Tanisha's mouth flung open and she recieved a big shock. She didn't feel like flirting with him anymore. She felt good standing there with him. They both started walking and Tanisha was very happy to make a nw friend.Tanisha: Waise friend... tum kya karte ho?I mean bussiness? Ya kya?Uday: Hum friends kab bane? Tanisha: Abhi abhi.. Kyu nahi bane?Uday: tum bahut innocent ho yaar.Uday felt a little strange with this girl. She's very innocent. She was somewhat like his princess..To be continued -How was it?

I know it was a bit short but I can only update this much in one time
Sorry for that

Tell me about it. And do hit the LIKE button if you like this.Tanvi a.k.a Tannu :)

Edited by princess_T - 12 years ago

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@-The_Tomboy-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Ek dum ...

Rapchik raapchundas tha!!

Finally mil gaye dono!!

Ab shuru hogi masti !!

Loved it sis!!

Yyayyy 1st to comment!

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princess_T

@princess_T

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

sorry Some PM's have not been sent. I'll do it tomorrow

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princess_T

@princess_T

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Gowri05
Ek dum ...

Rapchik raapchundas tha!!
Finally mil gaye dono!!
Ab shuru hogi masti !!
Loved it sis!!
Yyayyy 1st to comment!