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😕HI Friends,I'm Pooja..I have written one OS i hope u all like it..😊


PACK UP KE BAAD


After shooting last shot of the show all are hugging each other.Manyata,Uday,J,Vijay bhai,Unnati all r in a group hug...


Manyata;Abe o gadho ab chodo bhi...kya puri jindagi aise he rehne ka irada hai???

Uday;Wah princess kya idea diya hai...ab her highness yuvrani Manyata ne kaha hai to hum kon hote hai ye faisala rokne wale?ab to inaki baat manani padegi...so guys give me tight hug.

VB;Oye Uday pagal hai kya?agar hum log aur aise thodi der khade rahe to pakka hume koi cricket team samazkar sponsor kar lega...I TELL U...


After some while Manyata strugguled hard & break the hug.

J;Ohh c'mon jiji itani bhi kya jaladi hai apko aur thodi der hum hug karte to apka kya bigad jata???

Manyata;o meri pyari JKamini behena muze pata hai tuze itna kyu bura lag raha hai...

J;Kyu???

Manyata;Itani bhi bhli mat baniyo J...Tumhe Uday se chipak ne me maja jo aa raha tha...kyu??

J littel scary;hum... hum to bas aise he keh rahe the aur waise bhi ab to Uday humare jiju hai na...

Uday;oh c'mon princess love confession ko 5minute bhi nahi huye aur tum hume lekar itani possessive hogayi...tum to typical wifey ki tarah behave kar rahi ho..ha nahi toh saying withthe smirk


Uday goes closer to Manyataand hold her by waist


Manyata; halkat vede yede khasmankhaniye chod muze...

Unnati;offo dada ab bas bhi kijiye..aaj to ek dusare ko baksh do...chalo hum cafe chalate hai...


All reach the cafe

aii r busy with talking when Uday shouts loudly...

Uday;OMG

M/J/U/VB;Uday kya hua???

Uday;hmm hmm kuch nahi..

VB;Kuch nahi matlab kya?kuch nahi hone par tum aisehe chillate ho kya???

Unnati;dada dada kuch to bolo..kya hua??


Uday pointed his finger towards one table...

all r shock...

Manyat;ewww

J;OMG..I cant believe it..

Unnati;silent

VB;Yupiii 7 start dancing...dhinka chika dhinka chika dhinka chika dhinka chika hai hai hai hai hai...


all watching VB and giving amusing look

Unnati;Vijay stop it now aur ye batao tum dance kyu kar rahe ho?

VB;Batata hu batata hu...pehale waha chalo


all go that table


VB;Dekho tum log hume gay samazte the na ab dekho kon gay hai...

Uday;hi girls...whats up?

Jagat shocked;U Uday tumyaha???

Uday;ha hum

M/J/U/VB;Aur hum bhi yahi hai bacchu..aur kaha hona chahiyethahume?

Jagat;i mean..

J cuts him in between;what do u mean jagat..eww tum aur iss chawl wale majnu ke sath dostana kar rahe ho

Akash;A J chawl wala majnu kise bol rahi hai tu..me Aryau hu rich Aryan rai choudhary...

Uday;ye dekho naam bade lakshan khote...princess tum issase pyar karti thi iss gay se..yuckkk

Manyata;tabhime sochu muze isake sath waise wali feelings kyu nahi aati jo tumhare sath aati hai..

Uday go to Manyata's near;ohh princess kaise wali feelings jara detail me to batado...

Manyata ;woh woh kya hai na...

J;Oh shut up u both..yaha humari jaan nikalin ja rahi hai aur tum dono ko romance ki padi hai...jagat hume abhi iska jawab do

Jagat;ha batata hu pehale baitho...

all sit there


VB;Chalo ab batao tumhari guy se gay banane ki kahani...

Jagat;wo kya haina..ab sabko ye to pata he hai ki humara show off air ho gaya to

VB;Toh?

Akash;toh ab hum dono bekar ho gaye hai

Jagat;iss J ke piche bhagte bhagte me haddi ban gaya hu...to ab humne suna hai ki Free TV wale ek naya show launch karne wale hai..isaliye hum gay bannane ka natak kar rahe hai

Uday;aur iss show ka naam kya hai?

J/A shyly says;Agale janam hume gudwa(gay) he kijo...

Uday laugh out loudly;hahahaha ye kaisa naam hai?kuch karna he tha to dhang ka he kar lete...

Manyata;ab bas bhi karo Uday chup raho

Uday;sorry but mei bhi ek show kar raha hu..

All;kya kab???

Uday;batata hu...wo kya haina ab sabko ye to pata he hai ke me kitna handsome dashing charmingsmart cute sweet...

Manyat cuts Uday in between and says;oye halkat jhute itna bhi jhut mat bol warna paap lagega...

Uday smirking and says;oh plz yakin nahi hota to India Forum par jaake khud he dekh lo kitniladkiya muzpe marti hai

Manyata angerly;accha bacchu ek baari muze to teri shakal dikhado nochnahi li to mera bhi naam Manyata nahi..ha nahi toh

VB;Shant shant gadha dhari bhim shant...aur Uday ab bas ho gayi tumhari self praising

Unnati;Vijay tumhara matlab kya hai?dada hume to lagta hai ki ye sab aapse jealous ho rahe hai...

Uday;sahi kaha choti...koi bat nahi hum in sabke liye ek naya show dhund lenge...

Manyata;ohh teri..ye to apane apko bhagwan samazne laga...thank u but hume ahsan nahi chahiye

Uday;ok agar kabhi lagito bata dena hum yahi hai

All r now fed up with Uday self praising except Unnati

Akash;dekho moniya ye hai tumhar prince jise apne alawa kuch dikhayi he nahideta...chalatifirati self praising ki dukan hai ye

Manyata in angry tone;oye majnu kuch bhi bak mat samze...warna dungi ek chammat...

manyata start to fight with Akash but Uday stop her

Uday;chodo bhi jane do bechare ko...

J;stop it now...

all r having coffee when VB shouts loudly

Manyata;ab isse kya hua?

VB;M bhai waha to dekho...tumhare dad

M/J;Dad...aur ye kon hai chudail inke sath?

Uday;oho brij uncle wo bhi chammak challo ke sath...

Manyata;shut up dekhu to jara chammak challo ko..uska huliya na bigad diya to humara naam Manyata nahi...

M/U/J/AK/J/U/VB all go to that table...Manyata pat on his back

Brij;kon hai?

VB;piche to mudo mamu...

Brij turn back side

Brij;kon hai?ha tum tum sab yaha wo bhi ek sath..

VB;ha mamu wo kya haina kal hum sabne hum sath sath hai movie dekhi na to bas ussi ka asar hai...waise ye kon hai???

M/J;Dad aap to inse bhi gaye guzare nikale...chiii

Brij;nahi beta wokya haina aap ki maa ko ek naya show mil gaya hai to wo hume chod ke chali gayi..

M/U/J/VB/U/AK/J;Oh so sad...bahut he bura hua to ab?

Brij;ussane kaha ke agar me kisi naye showme aajau to wo wapas aajayegi...so bas show he dhund raha hu...brij said this with littel crying

Manyata;oh dad...Uday kuch karo na hume maa papa dono chahiye...

Uday;fikar not...hum haina..hum kuch karte hai...hume thoda waqt do

after 10 minutes

Uday;idea...princess humne dekha hai ki forum ki ladkiya bahut acchi acchi stories likhte hai...kyo na hum unnise baat kare...

All with happy face says;yes great idea..wo jarur humari help karenge

Uday;to done

All says together;Forum vasiyo hum aa rahe hai DEK2 ki script taiyar rakhna...


THE END


I hope u like it..😊.plzzz dont throw juta chappal...muz garib par daya karo😕...agar accha laga to plzzz like karo & comment karo...your comments will encourage me...😊

THANK YOU 😳



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Posted: 13 years ago
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no we do,t throw juta chapal its really nice and sweet os keep it up well done 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful and awesome loved it 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome os...very funny
Majnu nd Jagad...Ewww...lolzzz... nd their show 'agle janam mein mujhe gudwa hi kiju'..too funny
🤣...nd brij raj's new chammak challo...
the whole os was funny...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: candy08

<font color="#9900cc">no we do,t throw juta chapal its really nice and sweet os keep it up well</font><font color="#9933cc"> done</font><font color="#9933cc"> </font>👍🏼

Thank you
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@Vampire
Thank you...i'm glad that u like it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ultravioletray

awesome os...very funny
Majnu nd Jagad...Ewww...lolzzz... nd their show 'agle janam mein mujhe gudwa hi kiju'..too funny
🤣...nd brij raj's new chammak challo...
the whole os was funny...👏

Thank u so much...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh god its so sweet da...Majnu n Jagat...gay show ...Poor brij dnt wry i think komal is a vidhwa in balikavadhu so he can try 4 a remariage...Manyata must go behind majnu thn within notime Uday will throw away sahil n will come back for Manyata
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow.. What an OS! I must say it was hilarious😆 Gosh India Forums ki ladkiyan mujhe par marti hai😆😆 Seriously man It was great..😃 Loved it😳 Pack up ke baad ki kahani😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: snowdream

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">oh god its so sweet da...Majnu n Jagat...gay show ...Poor brij dnt wry i think komal is a vidhwa in balikavadhu so he can try 4 a remariage...Manyata must go behind majnu thn within notime Uday will throw away sahil n will come back for Manyata</font>

Thank u Krishna...

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